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六级作文null CET-6 Writing CET-6 Writing Introduction Introduction 靳若鹏 A-? nullCET-6 background (bd)CET-6 background (bd)题型 对立观点 解决问题  谚语类   图表作文  应用文写作型  分值分值2, 5, 8, ...
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null CET-6 Writing CET-6 Writing Introduction Introduction 靳若鹏 A-? nullCET-6 background (bd)CET-6 background (bd)题型 对立观点 解决问题  谚语类   图表作文  应用文写作型  分值分值2, 5, 8, 11, 14 14-25, 35-45, 56-72, 77-85, 98-100 nullCET-6 Writing 语法错误 句子的拆分与构架段落展开,衔接词和应用文,图表文的讲解1,Why I take CET-6 1996/11,Why I take CET-6 1996/1 Some people think it is unnecessary to take college English test 6. one reason they say is that most schools set cet-4 as the main requirement. Another reason is that they think that cet-6 is simply too difficult for them. I have decided to accept challenge of cet-6, the preparation for this test will force me to raise the level of my English ability. Besides, I regard cet-6 as a stepping-stone to further qualifications in English which will help me in my future carrer. Taking cet-6 is advantageous for both a student’s studies and himself . The first advantage is that he will improve his English skills in an all-round way. The second is that he will strengthen his character by continuing his English studies when other people have been lazy and stopped. Why I take cet-6 96/1Why I take cet-6 96/11, 有些人认为没有必要参加这个考试 2, 我参加考试的理由nullSome people think it is unnecessary to take college English test 6. one reason they say is that most schools set cet-4 as the main requirement. Another reason is that they think that cet-6 is simply too difficult for them. I have decided to accept challenge of cet-6, the preparation for this test will force me to raise the level of my English ability. Besides, I regard cet-6 as a stepping-stone to further qualifications in English which will help me in my future carrer. Taking cet-6 is advantageous for both a student’s studies and himself . The first advantage is that he will improve his English skills in an all-round way. The second is that he will strengthen his character by continuing his English studies when other people have been lazy and stopped. 评分标准评分标准Key to point Clear structure Complete language Grammar Cohesive 2000/62000/62,Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 1, 很多人认为有必要句型英语口语考试, 理由是 2,也有人持不同的意见。 3, 我的看法和打算。2,Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 2000/62,Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 2000/6 A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of college English test. Some people think that it is absolutely necessary to hold test of spoken English in china because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years can not even communicate with a native speaker. A test of spoken English will bring the university students an awareness of the importance of oral English, will thus help them with their communicating skills. Body Body On the other hand, some other still maintain that a good demand of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners. To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerate pressure from their coursework. Another required test will only add to their burden. Conclusion Conclusion In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since china will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice English in the remaining years of my college study. nullShould Firecrackers be Banned? 95/6 1,有人认为放鞭炮是好事,为什么? 2,有人认为放鞭炮是坏事, 为什么? 3, 我的看法 3, Should Firecrackers be Banned? 95/6 3, Should Firecrackers be Banned? 95/6 Some people think that setting off firecrackers is a good thing. They say it is an ancient Chinese custom which should be preserved. They also think that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more beautiful and entertaining for both adults and children. Without firecrackers, festivals would become dull and cheerless. Body Body On the other hand, there are many people who say that firecrackers should be banned. They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders. They also say that firecrackers are a waste of money and resources. Conclusion Conclusion My own point of view is that we should preserve the old custom of letting off firecracker, while at the same time making them harmless. We can do this by banning firecrackers from public places. In addition, we should restrict the setting off the firecrackers to festival days. 改良版 改良版 There has been much controversy over setting off firecrackers in the past years. With each party owning convincing evidences. Those who are in favor of setting firecrackers claim that it is an ancient Chinese custom about celebrating happy time that should be preserved. They also argue that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children. Body Body However, there are many people who are of the opinion that firecrackers should be banned. They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders. Besides, they maintain that firecrackers lead to a waste of money and resources. Conclusion Conclusion Personally, I think that both sides have something right. Actually, firecrackers should be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us with both benefits and troubles. But we should not give up eating for fear of choking. The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize their advantages and minimize their unhealthy influence, so that they can benefit us in a better way. null Should we advocate the international tourism? null Recently, there is a hotly debate over international tourism. Some people say it is good for people to try a totally new experience, while others opposite it for it may cause many harmful results. The reasons for those who disagree it are in following: Firstly, if we travel to other countries, generally, the distance is far away, we have to take plane which is hard for person to live once some dangerous things happened. Secondly, the money for international tourism is big , for most of Chinese people could not do it, if we advocate the international tourism, it will cause a consequence of expensive life style which is harm to our lives. For my part, I agree with former opinion, first of all, international tourism could improve the friendship between us and people in other countries; secondly, it can increase our horizon and make us available to new cultures, for example, if we go to Africa, we can experience some traditional customs, such as dancing, singing. Summary Summary 三种; 单一观点 对立评论观点 对立观点=折衷观点对立型 之 单一型对立型 之 单一型 第一段(开头) ——主题句,就该主题展开讨论——举例法支持观点。 第二段(正文) ——论点1——理论论据+事实论据(因果关系,数据法)——论点2——理论论据+事例论据( 举例法)——论点 (视内容而定扩展句的多少)第三段(结尾)——结尾句对立型 之 两面型对立型 之 两面型 第一段(开头) ——主题句,就该主题展开讨论——表明自己立场, 支持观点。第二段(正文) ——反面论点1——理论论据+事实论据(因果关系,数据法)——正面论点2——理论论据+事例论据( 举例法)——论点 (视内容而定扩展句的多少)第三段(结尾)——强调正面观点。结尾句对立型 之 折衷结论型对立型 之 折衷结论型 第一段(开头) ——主题句,就该主题展开讨论——举例法支持各自观点。 第二段(正文) ——论点1——理论论据+事实论据(因果关系,数据法)——论点2——理论论据+事例论据( 举例法)第三段——论1,2的不足,得my观点,进而。 句型总结句型总结第一段开头: 一些人认为 ~~~~~ 拆分: 一些 人 认为 一些一些无数的numerous/countless/numberless 大量的A great / large / huge / considerable / significant number / amount / quantity / portion of 对半的almost / nearly / some / close to / approximately half of 大多的the (vast / overwhelming) majority of 一些/另一些(抽象意义):some – others, majority – minority人人公众the public/people/person 各行各业people from all walks of life / the circle/community/walk of education 学生examinees / testees / students 特殊人群readers / drivers 支持/反对者followers – objectors, dissenters – consenters 参与者participants / candidates interviewees 认为 认为 认为assume / argue / hold (the opinion) / claim / suggest / declare / say / state / believe / insist/ maintain / doubt / suspect that/give / express / show / demonstrate one’s support for 第二段 第二段 赞成: 1. Supporters firmly suggest that … 2. These people hold the view that… 3. They argue that 4. On the one hand / For one thing/ besides/in addition, what is more.+ 事例证明 反对: on the other hand, however, nevertheless, for another thing/ objector/ opponent/dissenter/protester 结尾: 结尾: 1, for my part/ 2, personally I believe/ 3, as to me/ 4, I stand on the point 5, in the viewpoint of Practice 82Practice 82Preferable work Homework Homework Page 82 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words on the following topic and outline. 最近国内有些高校允许在校适龄大学生结婚。 对此人们有不同的意见, 有人赞成, 有人反对, 你的观点如何? 1, 有些人对高校允许学生结婚持肯定态度 2, 另一些人反对 3,我的观点 Page 83 topic 6 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words on the following topic and outline---internet—a two-edged sword. 1, internet的功绩 2,internet 的弊端 3,结论 现象/问题解决型现象/问题解决型1,How to solve the problem of heavy traffic?1,How to solve the problem of heavy traffic? Nowadays, China’s cities are getting increasingly crowded. The rapid increase in population is being made wore by the steady influx of people from the rural areas seeking employments. As a result, heavy traffic is a big headache, with all the roads packed with cars, bicycles and pedestrians. Body Body In my opinion, there are two ways to solve the problem. One is to build more and wider roads to make the public highways less crowded and speed up the flow of traffic. The other is to expand the number of public bus routes, so that more people can be transported and fewer people will have to travel by car or bicycle. Conclusion Conclusion However, each of these solutions brings problem with it. The former may occupy too much land that could be used for farms or houses; the latter may cause inconvenience for long periods in bus lines. I think the best answer to the problem of heavy traffic is a combination of the two: build more roads in places where land is less useful, and at the same time increase the number of public bus routes. My view on job-hopping 97/6My view on job-hopping 97/61, 有些人始终喜欢从事一种工作, 因为 2, 有些人喜欢经常更换工作, 因为 3, 我的看法How to solve the problem of heavy traffic?How to solve the problem of heavy traffic?问题: 城市拥挤 解决方案 1, 建造更多道路 优点: 降低街道拥挤程度 加速车流 缺点: 占地太多 2, 开辟: 更多公交汽车线路 优点: 减少自行车与小汽车 缺点: 对部分人可能造成不方便 结论: 两者结合。 2, My View on Job-Hopping 97/62, My View on Job-Hopping 97/6 Job-hopping, or frequent change of jobs, is becoming increasingly common in China today. As the economy grows, more opportunities for employment are appearing than before. The result is that people, especially young people, are tempted to change jobs frequently, seeking higher salaries or more interesting positions. Body Body Nevertheless, many people prefer to stay in their old jobs. This is partly because they feel loyal to their work units, and partly because they dislike the idea of having to spend much more training for a new job. In addition, although a new job may offer higher pay or more opportunities for promotion, it may be located far from home and be inconvenient to reach. 句型句型 the first reason is that ________. The second reason is ________.for all this, the main cause of ________ due to ______. Conclusion Conclusion I think it is a good thing for the workforce to be flexible, so that new demands for personnel can be satisfied quickly. However, if a person changes jobs too often. He or she will cause losses to the employing units. Moreover, frequent job-hopping prevents a person from gaining valuable job experience and developing good work habitsSay No to Pirated ProductsSay No to Pirated Products1,目前盗版的现象比较严重 2,造成这种现象的原因极其危害 3,我们应该怎样做 词汇 Piracy Pirated products Intellectual property rights Infringe sb’s copyright 3,Say No to Pirated Products 05/63,Say No to Pirated Products 05/6 Nowadays, the problem of piracy has become more and more serious, taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list. In many places we see people peddling pirated books or disks. Body Body The number of factors could account for the problem. But the following might be the most critical ones. First, pirated products are much cheaper than copyrighted ones. So they are very attractive to people, especially youngster, who are not financially well-off. Secondly, with highly ,developed technology, it is not difficult to manufacture pirated products. With one authorized copy, the illegal producers can make thousands of fake ones at a very low cost, thus making huge profits. Body + Conclusion Body + Conclusion As a result, intellectual property rights are severely infringed upon. Honest producers will lose the motivation to develop new products. Meanwhile, pirated products are often of low quality, thus damaging the interest of buyers. In view of the seriousness of the problem, it is essential that laws and regulations be formulated and enforced to ban the manufacture and circulation of pirated products. With these measures taken, we have reasons to believe that the problem can be solved in the near future. 换代升级换代升级There is no denying the fact that piracy is a grave problem with which this country is confronted. Books, tapes, VCDs and others high-tech products have been pirated. For instance, when a new product comes onto market, most probably, its pirated counterpart will soon put on its appearance in the market, too.   Body Body Piracy has caused a great loss to legitimate producers, inventors and writers in many ways. To start with, the pirated products often cost much less than the genuine ones so that they enjoy a better trading position in spite of their relatively poor quality. The genuine products, on the contrary, sell poorly. What's worse, pirated books sometimes do great harm to the authors' reputation due to some misprints. In the long run, pirated products may have a negative impact on customers. Those legitimate producers' creativity and enthusiasm may be deeply hurt by the fact that some customers are more interested in the pirated products for the sake of small gains.  Conclusion Conclusion For my part, it's high time that everyone started the battle against piracy. First, customers should develop their consciousness to resist the pirated products. Second, the government should take effective measures to put an end to piracy. Finally, laws must be strictly enforced to completely ban piracy. Only in this way can we wipe the pirated products out of our life. How I Finance My College Education 00/1How I Finance My College Education 00/11, 上大学的费用, 可以通过多种途径解决 2,哪种途径适合我,说明理由。 2,How I Finance My College Education 00/12,How I Finance My College Education 00/1 Nowadays, if we want to go to college, we will have to pay a big sum of money. It is a problem to many students. Many ways can contribute to solve this serious problem. But the following ones may be the most effective. First, you can ask your parents for help if they have nice careers. Another way to solve this problem is to apply for a bank loan. Finally, we can find a part time job to get enough money. 结局结局 As to me, I am in favor of the second idea. My reasons of choice can be listed as follows: first of all, my parents are not rich enough to afford me. Secondly, you will not have enough time and energy to study after finishing the part time job. Finally, I am sure that I will get a nice job after graduation. Then I will be able to pay back the loan. Through the analysis above, I believe that bank is my best choice.Reduce Waste on Campus 03/12Reduce Waste on Campus 03/121, 有些大学校园浪费的现象日益严重 2, 浪费的危害 3,杜绝浪费,从我做起 4,Reduce Waste on Campus 03/12 4,Reduce Waste on Campus 03/12 Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that wasting has become a grave problem in many campuses. In the dining hall, much food are left in the plates and dumped into the trash can. In the class room, blank or half blank pieces of paper are left on the desks. In the dorm building, taps are left open and water left running or dripping all the time. And there can be more such examples. Body Body In view of the expanding population and the shortage of various resources, wasting is really a harmful habit. It put strains on the already short supply of food, water, electricity and the like. Besides, it goes against traditional virtue of hard work and simple living and may leads to a luxurious life style, which is dangerous to the souls of mankind. Conclusion Conclusion Therefore, it is high time that we take steps to stop wasting. We should start from trifles around ourselves: remember to turn off the tap when we finish washing; try to order the exact amount of food we can consume; never throw away any blank or half pieces of paper. And always remember, a penny saved is a penny earned. 问题解决型问题解决型 第一段(开头) ——背景介绍——扩展句第二段(正文) ——主题句+分析问题 (大我+小我)——理论论据+事实论据(因果关系,数据法)——主题句+解决问题 (大我+ 小我) ——理论论据+事例论据( 举例法)——论点 (视内容而定扩展句的多少)第三段(结尾)——结尾句第二段: 理由段第二段: 理由段1. 序列词: the 序数词 / first and foremost / last but not least the other / another a third one ofIn summary In summary 拒绝盗版: 个人利益,社会利益,社会诚信,健康方面。 解决交通问题: 节省时间,环境污染,健康原则,经济发展。 杜绝浪费: 环境层次, 个人利益, 节约资源,环境方面, 健康方面。 结论结论From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that… So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion: … From above, we can predict that My personal / humble opinion / view point / point of view / theory / understanding / view / belief is that … I am with the view that / I am inclined to stand on the side that / I would like to vote fo 谚语型 谚语型 Haste makes waste 97/1Introductory pIntroductory p A famous saying goes “ haste makes waste”, which means that one should do everything step by step. Even simple operations can easily be spoiled if we rush to complete before beginning any task. Body Body The best illustration might be English study. Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable way. Similarly, if we do not learn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good compositions. Body Body A well-known Chinese fables goes that a farm tried to help the shoots grow by pulling them upward, only to find that they died soon. Another case in point is the so-called great leap forward movements in china in 1950s and 1960s. at that time, the Chinese people were so eager to develop their economy that they took some improper measures, only to hinder the expansion of economy. Body Body At the age of 11 or 12, I began to learn to ride. Eager to ride as well as others, I started by sitting on the saddle at the very beginning. Predictably, I often fell from over the bike. Lots of time have been wasted before I realized that I should do it step by step. I tried to slide by standing on one pedal on one pedal. Then I began to ride the bike from under the cross bar. Finally, I succeeded. ConclusionConclusion In short, laying a solid foundation is essential if we want to make achievements in our studies or work, or in deed in any other aspect of our lives. At every step, review what has been achieved and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step. And remember, Rome was not built in a day. 谚语类谚语类 第一段(开头) ——通俗解释——扩展句第二段(正文) ——论点1——理论论据+事实论据(因果关系,数据法)——论点2——理论论据+事例论据( 举例法)——论点 (视内容而定扩展句的多少)第三段(结尾)——结尾句Grammar Grammar 1, article ( practice) My view on the negative effects of some advertisements 95/1My view on the negative effects of some advertisements 95/1 There is no denying a fact that many commercial advertisements carry undesirable message. They advertise the luxury goods, unhealthy foodstuffs and dri
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