作文讲评（网络）

nullnull假定你叫张华。一家英文报社来信要邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况，并依照调查写一篇报道。请根据下提供的信息，对你的调查作简要介绍，发给报社。 主要的用途出现的问题1.阅读国内外新闻，学习英语2. 发email、欣赏音乐、看电影玩游戏等3.网上购物1. 过多的在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业2. 浏览不健康信息，对身心有害注意：Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you something about how the students use the Internet._______ I hope every student can make use of the Internet properly for their studies.null要点1 阅读国内外新闻，学习英语 read news at home and abroad/ learn English have access to learning news at home and abroad as learning English 要点2 发email、欣赏音乐、看电影玩游戏 Send e-mails/ listen to /enjoy/appreciate music /see/watch films/ play computer gamesnull要点 3 网上购物 do online shopping 要点 4过多的在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业 Spend too much time in playing computer games online/ waste time/ affect their studies 要点 5浏览不健康信息，对身心有害 read unhealthy/harmful/dirty information/ do harm to both their body and mind. nullStep 2 Make sentences 要点1 阅读国内外新闻，学习英语 They can not only read news at home and abroad but also learn English through the Internet/ by Internet. With the help of the Internet, they can have access to learning the latest news at home and abroad as well as learning English. The Internet not only keeps the students well informed of what’s going on at home and abroad but also provides/offers them a channel to learn English by themselves.null要点2 发email、欣赏音乐、看电影玩游戏 By using the Internet, they can also send emails to their families, relatives and friends, enjoy various types of music, watch moves and play computer games. The Internet also makes it possible for them to keep in touch with others by sending emails and to relax themselves by appreciating music, seeing films and playing PC games.null要点3 网上购物 They can do online shopping without leaving their homes. It is more convenient for them to do online shopping. Online shopping brings them a lot of convenience.null要点 4过多的在网上玩游戏，浪费了时间，影响了学业 They spend too much time playing computer games online. Therefore/consequently/ As a result, it wastes a lot of time and affect their studies. They are addicted to/ are hooked on/ are buried in/are lost in online computer games, which wastes lots of valuable time and affects their studies.nullThey are addicted to/ are hooked on/ are buried in/are lost in/are glued to online computer games, which results in a waste of time and poor performance in their studies. They are addicted to/ are hooked on/ are buried in/are lost in online computer games, wasting a great deal of precious time and having a bad effect on their studies. null要点 5浏览不健康信息，对身心有害 They read some unhealthy/harmful/dirty information, which does harm to both their body and mind. They read something unhealthy/harmful/dirty on the net, which is undoubtedly/unavoidably physically and mentally harmful to them.nullStep3. Form a passage and polish As we all know, the Internet is playing an increasingly important role/ part in our daily life. There is no doubt that it brings students lots of convenience. To begin with, they can have access to learning the latest news at home and abroad as well as learning English with the help of the Internet. nullWhat’s more, the Internet also makes it possible for them to keep in touch with others by sending emails and to relax themselves by appreciating music, seeing films and playing PC games. Last, it is more convenient for them to do online shopping. null However, every coin has two sides. The Internet also has its disadvantages. / However, the unfavorable aspects of the Internet can not be neglected. Some students are hooked on /are glued to online computer games, which results in a waste of time and poor performance in their studies. null To make things worse, they also read something unhealthy on the net, which is undoubtedly/unavoidably physically and mentally harmful to them. I hope every student can make use of the Internet properly for their studies.