最新高考英语专题解析课件-基础写作[感激答谢]

nullnullnull1. win first prize 获得一等奖 2. be nervous紧张的 3. calm down 静下心来 4. get through sth完成某事 5. my warmest thanks 我最诚挚的谢意 6. look forward to盼望相关短语null7. make great progress取得很大进步 8.thanks to多亏 9. be familiar with 熟悉 10.thank you for谢谢你…… 11. to my delight 让我高兴的是 null12. make full use of充分利用 13. all the best 一切顺利 14. face to face面对面 15. of great importance很重要 16. contact me 与我联系null1. I thought of all your efforts to help me during the past few months. 我想到你在过去的几个月里对我的尽力帮助。 2. I’m writing to show my great gratitude to your help during my stay in England.我此次写信是想向你在我呆在英国期间对我的帮助表示感谢。相关句式null3. Thanks to your help, I have learnt how to cook western food. 多亏你的帮助, 我学会了怎样做西餐。 4. Please accept my warmest thanks and look forward to your reply.请接受我诚挚的谢意,并且盼望你的回复。null5. You are so helpful and warm-hearted, and please accept my sincere thanks again.你热心助人, 请再次接受我真诚的感谢。 6. I’m writing to thank you for returning to me my wallet and mobile phone. 我写信是感谢你归还我的钱包和手机。null1. 感谢信作为书信的一种形式, 态度客气, 字里行间充满感激之情, 通常也是开篇点出写信的目的, 可使用“I am writing to...”句型作为书信开头, 如： (1) I am writing to express/show my gratitude to your help with my final essay. null(2) I am writing to thank you for inviting me to your wedding party. (3) I am grateful to you for your encouragement and I am writing to tell you that I have got promotion in my job.null2.积累该类写作常用词组搭配： (1) 表示“感激”：thank sb. for sth.; show one’s warmest thanks to sb. for sth.; show one’s gratitude to sb. for sth.; be grateful to sb. for sth. (2) 与“帮助”有关的表达：help sb. (to) do sth.; help sb. with sth.; offer sb. help; give sb. a helping handnull3. 为了充分说明道谢原因, 感谢信通常涉及对某件事情的陈述或对某人性格的描写和 赞美。描述事件时, 可使用连词：when, be about to do... when..., before, after, as soon as等等。描述人物时, 可使用“so + adj. /adv. + that” 句型或“a person with + n.”结构, 如：You were so patient that you showed me all the way to the canteen. You were a person with patience, showing me all the way to the canteen.null4. 在句中适当增加表示褒义的短语和句型, 以 避免平铺直叙, 如： (1) Thanks to your help /effort, I overcame the difficulty and came first in the competition. (2) To my delight, you were so helpful that you gave me advice and helped me solve the problem. (3) If it were not for your help, I would not have succeeded as a reporter. null(2011广州二模) 假设你是李华, 昨天下午参加了英语才艺大赛(Talent Show), 并获得一等奖。以下是参加情况及获奖感受： 1. 看别人比赛时：紧张； 2. 自己表演时：想起Mike数月的努力与帮助, 冷静； 3. 在最有挑战的问答环节：谨记Mike的建议, 顺利； 4. 宣布结果时：兴奋, 遗憾Mike不在场。null[写作内容] 据以上介绍, 给回美国度假的外籍教师Mike写一封感谢信, 内容包括： 1. 告知获奖； 2. 介绍参赛情况； 3. 表达获奖感受。null[例题导写] 1. 动笔写作前, 把引入部分和写作内容有机联系起来。学生必须自行归纳、判断, 在引入部分找到对应的写作内容后, 把信息点划分为五个句子：(1)告知获奖—昨天下午参加了英语才艺大赛(Talent Show), 并获得一等奖; (2)介绍参赛情况—看别人比赛时：紧张; (3)介绍参赛情况—自己表演时：想起Mike数月的努力与帮助, 冷静; (4)介绍参赛情况—在最有挑战的问答环节：谨记Mike的建议, 顺利；(5)表达获奖感受：宣布结果时：兴奋, 遗憾Mike不在场。null2. 翻译各句重点词组。 句1： (1) 参加 _______________________ (2) 获一等奖 ____________________________________ win first prize, become the champion of..., come first in ...take part in, participate innull句2： (3) 紧张 ___________________ 句3： (4) 表演 ________________________ (5) 想起 __________________________ think of, recall, it occurred to sb. that ...,m sth. occurred to sb.become/grow nervous sb. be on the stage; sb. give performancenull(6) 冷静 ___________________________ 句4： (7) 有挑战的 ____________________ (8) 谨记 ________________________keep ... in mind, remembersb. calm down, sb. calm oneself downchallenging, demandingnull(9) 顺利 _____________________________ 句5： (10)宣布结果 _________________announce the resultsth. go smoothly, sth. go well(as planned)null[参考范文] Dear Mike， I’m writing to tell you that I won first prize in the English Talent Show yesterday afternoon. Before it was my turn I watched the others and got very nervous. But when I was on the stage, I thought of all your efforts to help me during the past few months and gradually calmed down. nullAlthough the question-and-answer section was the most challenging part, I got through it quite smoothly by remembering all your suggestions. When the judge announced the result I was very excited, but it was really a pity that you were not there. Please accept my warmest thanks. I look forward to your return to China. Yours， Li Huanull3. 描述参赛过程时, 考生可考虑使用不同连词引导的时间状语从句或非谓语结构, 使文章更具连贯性和层次感。为避免表达单一和重复, 建议不要多次使用when和 and。 Before it was my turn I watched the others and got very nervous.nullWhen I watched others performing on the stage, I was very nervous. While watching others’ performance, I became very nervous. On the stage, I calmed myself down as soon as I recalled your effort and help in the past few months.null4. 描述心情时, 可使用： (1) 系动词+表语：grow/ become/ turn / feel + nervous / calm/ excited (2) 转换词性：calm(动词)oneself down, be overwhelmed with excitement(名词)null[能力提高] 1.请根据中文, 完成句子翻译。 (1) I was once so poor at math that ___ ___________________________________________________________. (我落后于其他同学, 从而对自己丧失信心)I fell behind other fellow students and thus lost confidence in myself null(2) Were it not for your kindness and patience, __________________________ ________.(我就不会取得那么大的进步) (3) I’m writing to____________________ _____________________________.(真诚感激你帮助我的数学学习)null(4) __________________________________ __________(毕业后, 我们很多年都没有见面了), and upon the coming of Thanks Giving Day, I would like to send you my best wishes. (5) As my deskmate, you were so willing to help, _________________________________ ________________________ .(每天放学后都帮我复习当天课堂上的内容) helping me go over what was taught in class everyday after school We haven’t met each other for years since graduationnull2.请把上题五个句子按顺序填入以下括号中, 完成感谢信的正文部分。 Dear Chen Wei， ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ) Please accept my thanks and look forward to meeting you in your wedding party. Love from， Bobo 31524null假如你是李华, 曾到英国参加夏令营培训, 住在Mrs. Smith家里, 夏令营令你受益匪浅, 以下是你参加夏令营后的简单小结：null[写作内容] 圣诞节将至, 请给Mrs. Smith写一张圣诞卡, 内容包括： 1. 寄贺卡的目的：表达你的感激； 2. 你参加夏令营后学习上的收获； 3. 你参加夏令营后生活上的收获； 4. 呈上节日祝福。null[参考范文] Dear Mrs. Smith， I’m writing to show my great gratitude to your help during my stay in England. I’m glad to tell you that I made great progress in my study after returning from the Summer Camp, when I got more familiar with the native expressions, improve my oral English and get to know more about western culture as well. nullThanks to your help, I have learnt how to cook western food. To my delight, I also became more independent and learnt how to make full use of time. Christmas is on the way, and I wish you a merry Christmas and all the best in your life. Please accept my warmest thanks and look forward to your reply. Yours， Li Huanull 借节日契机, 向亲朋好友道谢, 可以成为感谢信的一种命题形式。人们通常在某些特别的节日向亲朋好友表达感激之情, 学生要熟悉节日的英语表达, 并注意大写节日的首字母, 例如New Year’s Day, Mother’s Day, Father’s Day, Thanks Giving Day, Christmas。 null这类感谢信, 写信人通常会送上节日祝福。表达节日祝福时, 可参考使用或改写以下句型： (1)Wish you all the best. (2)Wish you happiness and health in the coming year. (3)May you be happy and healthy.null(4) I would like to wish you a joyous New Year and express my hope for your happiness and good future. (5) May the New Year bring many good things and rich blessings to you and all those you love! (6) With best wishes for a happy New Year! null假设你是学生张明, 上周五体育课后不小心在操场遗失钱包和手机, 一名没有留下姓名的热心人拾到物品后把物品交到学生处。以下是你遗失物品后在学生处的登记资料：null[写作内容] 请在校园网上给这位热心人写一封感谢信, 内容包括： 1. 写信的目的：感激对方帮忙寻回失物； 2. 你遗失物品的经过； 3. 失物描述； 4. 赞美对方热心、乐于助人, 再次表示你的感谢; 5. 请对方看到信后联系你手机, 你希望当面道谢。null[参考范文] Dear Sir / Madam， I’m writing to thank you for returning to me my wallet and mobile phone. Last Friday, I left them on the playground after the P.E. lesson. The wallet is of great importance to me, inside which there is my identity card to be used to sign up for the college entrance exam. nullYou are so helpful and warm-hearted, and please accept my sincere thanks again. If you see this letter, please contact me through 13680932143, and I would like to thank you face to face. Yours， Zhang Mingnull 首先, 要根据写作内容，结合引入部分, 整理好五句话的写作思路, 并确定每句话使用的时态：(1) 写信的目的：可套用I’m writing to...句型; (2) 你遗失物品的经过：(在引入部分找到)“上周五体育课后不小心在操场遗失钱包和手机”, 使用一般过去时； (3) 失物描述：(在引入部分表格里找到), 描述、介绍物体, 一般使用一般现在时。其中, 表达“身份证将用于高考报名”要使用一般将来时； null(4) 赞美对方热心、乐于助人, 再次表示你的感谢，使用一般现在时； (5) 请对方看到信后联系你手机, 你希望当面道谢, 可结合祈使句，使用一般现在时。其中, 手机号码在引入部分表格里找到。本题并没有涉及很难的句型或单词, 因此, 理清思路后, 便不难写作了。 null