2019年中考英语书面表达优秀范文背诵

2019年中考英语书面达优秀范文背诵（名师剖析写作思路，高分写作技巧）　　中考即将到来的时刻，英语复习应更多地集中在中、难度型的练习上，今天和同学们谈谈书面表达这个题型。写作是英语综合能力的形式，这个形式体现学生本人的词汇量大小；单词、词组和句子的运用能力及逻辑思维能力。从构思、文章结构到写作的方法来看如何完成这样的书面表达。热点一假如你是李华，你们学校要举办一场关于京剧的讲座，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加，请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他讲座时间和地点以及需要做什么准备。提示词语：lecture（讲座）,invite,information,question,online提示问题：·Whenandwherewillyouhavethelecture?·whatdoyouadvisePetertoprepareforit?DearPeterHowisitgoing?There’llbealectureonPekingoperainourschool.ThePekingoperawillstartat10:00thisFridaymorningintheschoolhall.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartinthemeaningfullecture.Inthelecture,wecannotonlygetsomeusefulinformationaboutthePekingopera,butalsogetclosetothetraditionalChineseculture,whichcanbenefitusalot.Therearesomesuggestionsforyoutoprepareforit.Firstofall,remembertobethereontime,what’smore,don’tforgettobringacamerawithyou,whichcanrecordthepreciousmoment,lastbutnotleast,it’sagoldenchanceforyoutocomeupwithsomequestionsthatyouarewillingtolearnabout.IfthereisanythingthatIcandopleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua热点二“静以修身，俭以养德”，勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德，无论生活富足与否，我们都应该提倡节俭，拒绝浪费。某英文网站在开展以“节约是美德”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿．谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以这样做的意义。提示词语：thrifty(节约的).save.turnoff.money.virtue（美德）提示问题：·Whatdoyoudoinyourdailylife？·whydoyoudoso？It’soneofourtraditionalvirtuestobethriftyBeingthriftyisagoodvirtuewhichhasbeenpasseddownfromgenerationtogeneration.It’sagoodideatostartoninourdailylife.Firstofall,Iconstantlycheckthelightsandthetapstomakesurethattheyareoffwhenleavingthehouse,Besides,neverhaveIwastedanyfood,what’smore,Idon’tspendtoomuchmoneyonunnecessarythingsandsavemoneyregularly.ThereasonwhyIdosoisthatIwanttomakeadifferencetomylife,Astheoldsavinggoes,“Wastenot,wantnot”Imakeupmymindtobethriftyasmuchaspossible.Ithinkeveryoneshouldtakeactionstosticktothisvirtue.热点三　　随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“EXERCISEONEHOURADAY,KEEPILLNESSAWAY”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。　　注意：1.词数80—100左右。　　2.文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。　　参考词汇：buildupone’sbodystrength强健身体　　reducediseases减少疾病　　构思方法：　　1.认真阅读、理解和思考题目中给出的所有信息点。信息点是围绕着提示从文字中扣出来的。　　2.这个题目的信息点应该是：　　a.阳光体育；　　b.政府重视中学生身体；　　c.提出的标语；　　d.参加了各种体育锻炼；　　e.有利于强身健体；　　f.增强了学习效果；　　g.校园生活丰富了。　　写作方法：　　1.安排以上信息点在文中的逻辑关系。　　2.用所掌握的词汇、词组、固定句型将所有信息点表现在文章中。(theSunnySports,payattentiontothehealthofthestudents,raisetheslogan,takepartintheexercise,buildupone’sbodystrength,reducediseases,makestudyeffective,schoollife,colourful)　　3.文章最后加入个人评价(观点)。　　下面是学生的作文：　　(1)　　AstheSunnySportsisdevelopinginourcountry,thegovernmenthaspaidattentiontothehealthofthestudentsandraised,"EXERCISEONEHOURADAY,KEEPILLNESSAWAY".Sofarourschoollifehaschangedalot.Nowwehavemoretimetodosportinthemorningorafterschool.Weplayfootball,basketball,badmintonandswim.Theyletourbrainsrelaxandmakeourschoollifemorecolorful.Wehavebecomemoreenergetic.Aboveallourstudyhasallbeenimproved.　　Let’stakeexerciseeveryday.Itcanbuildupourbodystrengthandreducediseases.　　(2)　　Doingsportbuildsupourbodystrengthandreducesdiseases.　　Thoughweleadabetterlife,ourhealthisbecomingworsenow.So"EXERCISEONEHOURADAY，KEEPILLNESSAWAY"hasbeenraisedbythegovernment.　　Atnoonorafterschoolweplayballgames,swimmingandrunning.Look!Theplaygroundseemssmallerbecauselotsofstudentsareplayingonit.Theschoollifehasbecomecolorfulandweareenergetic.Asaresultwestudyharderandbetter.　　TheSunnySportshasbroughtanexcitingchangetous.Let’skeepondoingit.　　这是两个学生的习作，他们分别以独特的思路和风格，利用丰富的词汇、准确的时态、简单句和复合句的搭配、合理的构思使文章语言流利，一气呵成，展现了扎实的英语语法功底和综合运用能力。　　例2：　　健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。　　提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车；　　2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳；　　3.饮食要健康；　　4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。　　要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑；　　2.80—100词左右；　　3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。　　构思方法：　　1.找到信息点。　　2.这个题目的信息点应该是：　　a.作为儿(女)担忧父(母)的身体状况；　　b.上班最好步行；　　c.每周至少一次到体育场馆从事体育锻炼(球类运动、游泳等)；　　d.健康的饮食；　　e.早睡不熬夜。　　写作方法：　　1.首先要谈到对父(母)的身体状况担忧。　　2.然后引出希望父(母)怎么做。　　3.作为小辈向父母提出建议和要求时，要注意语气，不可以命令。　　4.注意信的写作格式。　　学生的作文：　　(1)　　DearDad(Mum),　　You’resobusyeverydaythatyoudon’tpaymuchattentiontoyourhealth.I’mworriedaboutyourhealthallthetime.I’dliketogiveyousomesuggestions.Ihearwalkingisthebestsport.Yourcompanyisn’tfarfromhome,isit?Whynotwalktotheoffice?You’dbettertakeexerciseatleastonceaweek,suchasplayingtennisinthegym.Goingtoswimisalsoanicechoice,too.What’smore,it’snecessarytohavehealthyfood.Trynottostayuptoolate.Havingenoughsleepcanhelpyourbrainworkbetter.　　Dad,pleaseacceptmyadvice.Ireallywishyouhealthy!　　Yourlovingson(daughter)　　Tom(Mary)　　(2)　　DearDad(Mum),　　You’resobusyeverydaythatyoudon’tpaymuchattentiontoyourhealth.Iamworriedaboutyou.Ihopeyoucankeephealthy.Youoftendrivetoyouroffice.Itisnotfar.Whataboutwalkingtherebecauseitcanmakeyoumuchstronger?I’dlikeyoutoplaybasketballorgoswimminginthegymatleastonceaweek.Itisimportanttoeathealthyfoodsuchasvegetables,meat,eggsandfruits.Thoughyourworkishard,Istillhopethatyoucangotobedearlysothatyoucangetenoughsleep.　　I’mlookingforwardtoreceivingyourletter.　　Yourlovingson(daughter)　　Tom(Mary)　　这两篇作文使用了I’dliketo…，Whynot…?Itisimportanttodo…,Trynottodo…,Ihopethat…,Whataboutdoing…?I’dlikeyoutodo…,You’dbetterdo…等婉转口气的请求句式，表达出了作者对父(母)的关心，信息点完整，内容充实，注重了书信的结尾形式。热点四 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Bill来邮件询问你平时体育锻炼及今年中考体育考试情况,请你根据下面提示,给Bill回封英文邮件。提示:1．谈谈今年中考体育考试分值提高到60分的意义(已给出)及体育锻炼的重要性;2．你过去是如何进行体育锻炼的;3．你将来有什么新的锻炼。要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;2．必须包含所给提示,并做适当发挥;3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;4．词数:80-100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。DearBill,Thanksforyourlaste-mail.I’mgladtotellyouthatourscoresofP.E.addupto60attheSeniorHighSchoolEntranceExamination,whichencouragesustotakeanactivepartinexercise.Lookforwardtoyoure-mail.Yours,LiHuaDearBill,Thanksforyourlaste-mail.I’mgladtotellyouthatourscoresofP.E.addupto60attheSeniorHighSchoolEntranceExamination,whichencouragesustotakeanactivepartinexercise.Asyouknow,myfavoritesubjectisP.E.Ithinkdoingsportsisgoodforbothmyhealthandstudy.Ididverywellintheexam,too.Inthepast,IpracticedcarefullyineachP.E.class,learningtoplaybasketball,runandsoon.OnweekendsIusuallyplayedping-pongwithmyfriends.However,Ican’tswim.Inthecomingsummervacation,I’lllearnit.Duringseniorhighschool,Iplantojointheswimmingclub.Canyougivememoreadvice?Lookforwardtoyoure-mail.Yours,LiHua写作指导】热点五开头：文章开头给，直接入题Fujianisourhometownanditisbeautiful.AsamemberofFujian,Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtomakeitmorebeautiful.，不计入词数。正文：具体描述1.Environment方面（rubbish，spit…）；2.People方面（friendly,helpful,respect,takecareof…）；3.Trafficrules…方面4.自由发挥，补充一到两点信息。结尾：文章结尾已给不计入字数。HowtoMakeOurHometownMoreBeautiful?Fujianisourhometownanditisbeautiful.AsamemberofFujian,Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtomakeitmorebeautiful.Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tthrowawayanyrubbish.Weshouldn’tspitanywhere.We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.Secondly,wearesupposedtobefriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Weshouldrespecttheoldandtakecareoftheyoung.It’spoliteforustogiveseatswhennecessary.What’smore,weoughttoobeythetrafficrules.Don’tplayontheroad.Wecancrosstheroadonlywhenthelightsaregreen.Lastbutnotleast,remembertosaveenergy.Weshouldshutofftheelectricitywhenweleavearoom.Ifwetravelashortdistance,we’dbetterwalkorrideabikeinsteadoftakingataxiorabus.Ibelieveourhometownwillbecomemoreandmorebeautifulaslongaswetryourbest.热点六.中学生是否应该有零花钱学校正举办主题为“MyPocketMoney”的英语征文活动，请你就以下三个方面谈谈自己的看法：中学生是否应该有零花钱？你平时是如何使用零花钱的？怎样更好地管理你自己的零花钱？提示词语：pocketmoney,buy,makeuseof,managemoney提示问题：•Shouldstudentshavepocketmoney?•Howdoyouusuallyspendyourpocketmoney?•Howcanyoumanageyourpocketmoneybetter?经典范文：Ithinkstudentsshouldhavesomepocketmoneybecausesometimeswe needtobuysomenecessariesanddeveloptheskillofmanagingmoney aswell.Iusuallyspendmypocketmoneyonsnacks.Schoolthingsalsocostmoney.Besides,Ioftenbuymyfavoritethings suchasbooksorCDs.Inmyopinion,itisreallyimportantto makebetteruseofthemoney. Aboveall,makingplansisagoodchoice.Inthisway,IcanthinkaboutifIspendthemoneyproperly.Secondly,it'snecessarytosavesomemoneyforsomethingurgent.Ifpeopleneedmyhelp,Iwilltryto givethemahand.热点七.中学上网网络为我们的日常学习与生活带来了极大的便利，但是也有一部分中学生上网成瘾，严重影响到他们的健康和学习。假如你们班在下周班会上将谈论有关问题，请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿。提示词语：learn,play,spendtoomuchtime提示问题：•Whataretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofgettingonline?•Whatdoyouthinkofgettingonlineformiddleschoolstudents?•Howshouldstudentsgetonlineproperly?Goodafternoon,class.Todaylet'stalkaboutgettingonline.Manystudents经典范文：Goodafternoon,class.Todaylet'stalkaboutgettingonline.Manystudentslikegettingonlineverymuch.Theycanlearnmoreknowledgeandhowtousethemodernmachine—computerwheretheycangetmoreinformation.Inthisway, it'sagoodway toenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizon. Butsomestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesandeven stayuplatetochatwithfriendsonline. Ittakesthemtoomuchtime.Gradually,they findithardtofocusonthestudy. What'sworse,someareevencheatedorrobbedbytheirnetfriends.It'sunwisetobantheInternetintheinformationage.So it'sbettertomakeaplanofthefreetime,andcontrolthetimewellonthecomputer. Makesurenottospendtoomuch timeontheInternet.热点八.从浪费谈节约假如你是李华，在生活中你看到过各种浪费现象，比如：浪费时间、浪费食物、浪费资源等等。为了培养同学们的节约意识，学校和某英文网站共同以“节约×××”为题征文。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中应该节约的某种东西，为什么应该节约它以及如何节约。提示词语：population,limit,time,reuse,callon提示问题：•Whatshouldwesave?•Whyshouldwesaveit?•Whatdoweusuallydotosaveit?经典范文：Inmypointofview,allofusshouldsavewater.Peoplecan'tlivewithoutwater.Buttherealsituationisthat theshortageofwaterisbecomingaseriousproblem inmanypartsoftheworld duetogrowingpopulationandthepollutionoftheriversandlakes.To dealwiththewaterproblem,wecandosomethingtoavoidwastingwaterinourlife. Firstly,weshouldremembertoreusewater. Forexample,thewaterleftoverafterwashingvegetablescan beusedtowaterplantsortocleanthefloor. Secondly, we hadbetterlimitourshowertime.Also,wecan callonmorepeopletosavewater indifferentways.Inshort,water holdsgreatvaluetohumanbeings.Let'sdo asmuchaswecantosavewater.热点九中国传统礼仪、习俗【预测题目】假设你是张华，你的美国朋友MIKE想通过你了解中国的传统礼仪和习俗。请你根据提示，给Mike写一封e-mail，向他介绍中国的礼仪、习俗。1.谈论中国的礼仪习俗和被期望做的事。2.正确运用besupposed/expectedtodo…表示应该或被期望做的事情.3.正确使用Itis+adj.+todo…表达看法和观点。【参考范文】DearMike,I’mgladtohearfromyou.It’struethatChinesecustomsaredifferentfromyoursinAmerica.LetmegiveyousomesuggestionsaboutChinesecustoms.Whenyoumeetothersforthefirsttime,youaresupposedtoshakehandsinsteadofkissing.It’spolitetohandoutyourrighthandandshakeitwithanotherperson’srighthand.Whenyouareeatingatthetable,youshouldlettheoldstartfirst.Whenyouareeatingwithyourchopsticks,it’simpolitetopointatotherpeoplewithyourchopsticks.It’salsoimpolitetostickyourchopsticksintothebowlofriceandleavethemthere.Whenyougooutwithpeople,youaresupposedtotellthehostesswhereyouaregoing,whoyouaregoingwithandwhenyouwillcomeback.Inourculture,thehostesswillworryaboutthesafetyofherguests,soit’spolitetoletherknowthesethings.HaveasafetripandIlookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Yours,ZhangHua热点十某英语报开展“HowtoDealwithOurStudyProblems”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：1.尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；2.我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”；3.也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间；4.任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得大的进步。5.有问题时，我们…要求：1.内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.词数90个左右；3.第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2句话补充完整。【优秀满分范文】HowtoDealwithOurStudyProblemsAlthoughweoftenfeelstressed,weshouldfindsuitablewaystodealwithstress. Wecanwearcalmcolorslikeblueandwhitetomakeusfeelrelaxed.Weshouldbecarefulenough,because“amissisasgoodasamile”.Weshouldalsoachieveabalancebetweenschoolworkandhobbies.Trytoplanyoursparetimewell.Don’tloseheartatanytime.Youwillmakegreatprogressthroughhardwork. Whenhavingproblems,wecanaskpeoplearoundusforhelp.It’snotwisetokeepourworriestoourselves.热点十一“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成为一名绿色使者吗？请行动起来吧！其实，环保就在我们身边。请以“HowtoBeaGreenerPerson”为题，写一篇短文。注意：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2.短文词数90左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：draw,bothsidesofpaper,plastics,watertap,collect,waste,can,sort【优秀满分范文】 HowtobeagreenerpersonIt’sourdutytoprotecttheinviyonmentaroundus. Whenwegotoschool,weshouldrideabikeortakeabus.Whenwegooutforactivities,weshouldn’tsteponthegrass.Wecan’tdraweverywhere.Whenwegoshopping,we’dbetteruseaclothbag.Athomewecansavewaterandelectricity.Whenweleavearoom,weshouldturnofftheligts.Atschoolwecancollectwastpaperandrecyclethings,suchasbottles,cansandplasticbags.Weshoudn’tlistentopopmusicorspitinpublic. Let’sdosomethingtoprotectourenvironment.热点十二【写作要求】“灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄?”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄…… 一．DrNormanBethune    1．Natlonality(国籍):Canada        2．Hobby:takingphotos        3．Mainstories:savedalotofChinesepeople;openedhospitals;inventedmedicaltools 二．LiuXiang1．Nationality:China2．Hobby:singing3．Mainstories:wonthefirst4．Olympicgoldmedalinthemen's110mhurdleseventinAthens;setaworldrecordinthesameeventinLausanne 从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄，以TheHeroinMyHeart为题写一篇短文。要求：①包含所选信息卡上的内容；②适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等；③不能出现表明你身份的信息；④词数80左右，不含已给出部分。【优秀满分范文1】TheHeroinMyHeartAsweknow，mostpeoplehaveheroesintheirhearts.Forme,DrNormanBethuneistheheroinmyheart.HewasagreatdoctorfromCanada.DrBethunewasgoodatperformingoperations.Andtakingphotoswashishobby.In1938，hecametoChina.Heopenedhospitalsandinventedmedicaltools.HeworkedsohardthathesavedthousandsofChinesepeople.Hedidn’tstoptotakecareofhisowninjuredhandanddied.Iamdeeplymovedbyhisstories.SoI’llworkhardtodayanddomybesttohelpothers.【优秀满分范文2】TheHeroinMyHeartAsweknow,mostpeoplehaveheroesintheirhearts.Forme，LiuXiangistheheroinmyheart.HeisafamousChinesesportsman.LiuXiangisgoodatrunning.In2004，hewonhisfirstOlympicgoldmedalinthemen，s110mhurdleseventinAthens.Then,hesetaworldrecordinthesameeventinLausanne. Besidestrainingandtakingpartincompetitions,LiuXiangalsolikessingingandhesingswell. Withhishardwork,heiswinningcompetitionsoneafteranother.Thisencouragesmetostudyharderfromnowon.热点十三【写作要求】请以“MyFavouriteGreatBook”为题,根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文,注意适当表达自己的看法。1.Whoisthewriterofthegreatbook?2.Whatisthemainideaofthebook?3.Whoaretheimportantcharacters?4.What’sthethemeofthestory?【优秀满分范文】MyFavouriteGreatBookMyfavouritegreatbookisTheAdventuresofTomSawyerbyMarkTwain. TomSawyerisalivelyandcleverboy.HeliveswithhisauntPolly.Hisauntisstrictwithhim,soherunstoanislandinthemiddleoftheMississippiRiverwithtwofriends,HuckandJoe.WithHuck,hegoeslookingfortreasure;withBecky,hegetslostinacave.AndfinallyTomandHuckfindaboxofgold.Tomistheheroofthestory,butthereareotherimportantcharacters.Beckyisprettywithfairhair.HuckisTom’sbestfriend,andInjunJoeisthebadmanofthestory.Thethemeofthestoryistodowithchildrengrowingupandbecomingmoreserious.热点十四【写作要求】某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇80个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动: 1.父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;2.你对这些问题的看法;3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。【优秀满分范文】HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Theydon’tallowmetochoosemyownclothes,either.Andtheypaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ithinkmyparentsdon’tquiteunderstandme.However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpressure,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.Inordertokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Istudyhard,listentothem,talktothemasfriends,tellthemmytroubles,andhelpthemdomorehousework.热点十五【写作要求】Mary在学校参加了一个BuddyClub,从那以后，她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示，写一篇英语短文。 Inthepast Now Personalities shy,quiet,getnervouseasily brave,outgoing… Hobbies reading reading,singing… Abilities goodatdancing,singing…要求:1.覆盖要点，可以合理增加细节；2.80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。【优秀满分范文】Joiningaclubsometimeschangesapersongreatly.Maryusedtobeashyandquietgirl.Sheusedtogetnervouseasilyandherfaceoftenturnedredwhenshespokewithstrangers.Shelikednothingbutreadingaloneinherfreetime.However,shehaschangedalotsinceshejoinedtheBuddyClub.Now,Maryissobraveandoutgoingthatsheisn’tafraidofspeakingoutinpublicanymore.What’smore,shehaslotsofhobbies,suchassinging,writinganddancing.Sheisgoodatthemaswell.Peoplesurechangeallthetime,right?WhatweshoulddoistolearnfromMary.Changeourselvesandchoosetobethebestofourselves.Dearpeter,Howisitgoing?There’llbealectureonPekingOperainourschool.IfthereisanythingthatIcando,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHuaIt’soneofourtraditionalvirtuestobethrifty.