习作3 介绍自己的家乡

习作3 介绍自己的家乡 苏教版四年级 习作3介绍自己的家乡 一、教学目标 1(读懂例文—王磊的一封信，了解信的，知道作者从风光、风俗两方面来介绍自己的家乡。认识书信的，借助例文帮助学生领会写信的要点。 2(按习作要求，讨论交流家乡的风光、风俗等进行介绍，深入的了解自己的家乡。选择自己想说心里话的对象，选择写作的切入点，写清自己想要说的内容，并注意详略得当。 3(通过此次习作练习，让学生了解自己家乡，培养学生热爱家乡的思想感情，树立长大为家乡建设出力、做贡献的志向。 二、教学重点 1(读懂例文，明确此次习作要求。掌握书信的格式，知道写信与回信的不同。 2(选择家乡的一两个方面，从风俗习惯入手借鉴例文的写法，写一封信，向远方的亲朋好友介绍自己的家乡。 三、教学难点 引导学生选材，找出自己家乡的风俗、生活方面的独特地方。写作时做到有话可说，有感可发。(学生由于年纪小对于家乡的风俗、民俗、生活特点不是很明白，感觉没地方可写，所以老师做好引导帮助学生选材。) 四、教学评价 1.评价主体多元化:教师评价、学生自评、生生互评相结合。 2.评价策略多元化:教师收集整理学生在课前做的问卷调查表，评价学生的心愿。小组内互动，说说本领，打开素材。对习作通过自评、互评、师生共同赏析等评价策略共同提高。 五、教学准备 利用问卷调查学生准备的家乡风俗。完成问卷。(附:“独特的家乡风俗、生活特点”调查问卷) 六、教学课时: 两课时 七、教学过程 Monitoring Center security deployment statistics are as follows: security point distribution statistics-medical building, rehabilitation building, 2nd floor, serial number F1 F2 F3 F4 F5 B1 B2 camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera detection medical alarm building 41, # # 5 16 6 # 5 3 7 # # 4 3 9 18 10 6 4 6 4 2nd on the rehabilitation floor, building 2, 1 ... To alarm system, depending on audio monitoring management system and public broadcast, access system linkage of means on rehabilitation center of patients, and medical personnel, and family, crowd of flow achieved full control, each emergency button, and detector triggered police love signal Shi can and other system linkage management, dang alarm police love triggered alarm Shi, alarm host will to sound light alarm form in monitoring Center issued alarm, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, in monitoring center specified monitor Shang automatically switch the alarm regional image, When essential goods and medicines, dangerous goods storage warehouse of access without hospital management authority was illegally opened, front-end alarm device to send a signal, alarm on alarm management platform automatically warn the person on duty in red on the map. Dang door was illegal open, and door opened Hou failed to in provides time within return bit or lock failed to normal lock live Shi, will automatically triggered emergency alarm system, and in Control Center to sound light alarm way corresponding, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, triggered depending on audio system linkage management. until alarm lifted, to this to elimination exists 第一课时 环节一、作前指导?观察体验，激活愿望。 一、谈话导入: 同学们，有一个小朋友叫王磊在天山脚下的大草原上。他给好朋友李阳写了一封信，你想知道写的是什么吗,那就让我们来读一读他写给远方的小伙伴李阳的信。 板书:写书信——介绍自己的家乡 二、学习例文读王磊的信，领悟书信的内容，把握书信的格式。 1(读书信，明确书信内容。 (1)学生自读王磊的信。思考:信中写了什么内容, (2)学生回答，老师根据学生回答板书:美丽风光 独特的风俗 (3)这些地方为什么会给你留下深刻的印象,王磊是怎样来写的呢,老师建议大家再去读读这封信。 (4)组织学生交流，教师根据学生所说总结:在信中作者为了表达自己对家乡的热爱，先简单写了迷人的风光，又详写了家乡独特的风俗习惯——赛马写得特别具体。(在引导学生明白书信内容的同时，教导学生写作文要注意详略得当。) (看书信，学习书信格式。 2 (1)这是一封信，你发现了写信的格式与我们平时的习作有什么不同了吗, (2)同桌互相交流。在书上把不同的地方画下来。(不动笔墨不读书，在书上把不同之处标出来，可以有助于学生发现不同之处，并且在以后写信时不犯错。) (3)指名交流。一起做批注。教师相机点拨引导:书信由六部分组成:称呼、问候语、正文、祝贺语、署名、日期。 (4)学生观察对比总结各部分格式:称呼在信的开头，要顶格写。称呼后面加冒号，表示请你注意下面我有话要说;第二行空两格写问候语;第三行空两格写正文。正文是信的主要内容，凡是要说的话，要谈的事都写在这部分。一层意思可以分为一个自然段;祝贺语另起一行空两格写，一般是写表示敬意、祝愿、勉励的话;正文写完后，另起一行，在靠右处写署名，在署名的下一行靠右写日期。 (5)教师编顺口溜，帮助学生掌握书信格式。 Monitoring Center security deployment statistics are as follows: security point distribution statistics-medical building, rehabilitation building, 2nd floor, serial number F1 F2 F3 F4 F5 B1 B2 camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera detection medical alarm building 41, # # 5 16 6 # 5 3 7 # # 4 3 9 18 10 6 4 6 4 2nd on the rehabilitation floor, building 2, 1 ... To alarm system, depending on audio monitoring management system and public broadcast, access system linkage of means on rehabilitation center of patients, and medical personnel, and family, crowd of flow achieved full control, each emergency button, and detector triggered police love signal Shi can and other system linkage management, dang alarm police love triggered alarm Shi, alarm host will to sound light alarm form in monitoring Center issued alarm, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, in monitoring center specified monitor Shang automatically switch the alarm regional image, When essential goods and medicines, dangerous goods storage warehouse of access without hospital management authority was illegally opened, front-end alarm device to send a signal, alarm on alarm management platform automatically warn the person on duty in red on the map. Dang door was illegal open, and door opened Hou failed to in provides time within return bit or lock failed to normal lock live Shi, will automatically triggered emergency alarm system, and in Control Center to sound light alarm way corresponding, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, triggered depending on audio system linkage management. until alarm lifted, to this to elimination exists 称呼一定顶格写，问候话语别忘记。 信的正文分段写，另起一行写祝语。 名字写在右下方， 紧接一行写日期。 三、根据要求，展开想象，准备材料，开始写作。 1(读了王磊写给李阳的信，我们了解了天山脚下的迷人风光和古老的风俗，让每一个读了这封信都产生了要到他的家乡走一走，看一看的愿望。如果让你也来像王磊一样来介绍介绍我们自己的家乡，你想介绍什么呢,静静地想一想。 2(调动观察储备，说家乡特色。 学生说一下自己的调查问卷，把自己搜集的反映家乡特色的素材，包括看到的、听到的讲出来。(引导学生从衣食住行等方面来想，可以扩宽学生的写作思路。) 3(回顾以前描写家乡的文章，寻找家乡的亮点。 学生根据以前所学来交流《石榴》、《抱犊崮》等 4(教师出示枣庄当地景点、民俗等特色。(给学生丰富材料，让学生有东西 可写。) 景点:枣庄抱犊崮、枣庄冠世石榴园、枣庄 熊耳山、枣庄台儿庄大战纪念馆、枣庄甘泉 禅寺、台儿庄古城、枣庄熊耳山洪门葡萄村、 枣庄李宗仁史料馆 名吃:羊肉汤 菜煎饼 辣子鸡 张家狗肉 等。 5、交流作文构想，明确写作要点。 学生在课堂共同讨论交流的基础上，说说自己选择的要点，确定写作顺序和结构安排。 环节二、下笔成文?文笔互动，习作实践 四、选择写作对象，完成习作。 1、确定收信人后，引导学生注意习作的语言要得体，老师要指导学生把信的几个注意点写好:称呼、问候语、正文、祝贺语、署名、日期。 Monitoring Center security deployment statistics are as follows: security point distribution statistics-medical building, rehabilitation building, 2nd floor, serial number F1 F2 F3 F4 F5 B1 B2 camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera detection medical alarm building 41, # # 5 16 6 # 5 3 7 # # 4 3 9 18 10 6 4 6 4 2nd on the rehabilitation floor, building 2, 1 ... To alarm system, depending on audio monitoring management system and public broadcast, access system linkage of means on rehabilitation center of patients, and medical personnel, and family, crowd of flow achieved full control, each emergency button, and detector triggered police love signal Shi can and other system linkage management, dang alarm police love triggered alarm Shi, alarm host will to sound light alarm form in monitoring Center issued alarm, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, in monitoring center specified monitor Shang automatically switch the alarm regional image, When essential goods and medicines, dangerous goods storage warehouse of access without hospital management authority was illegally opened, front-end alarm device to send a signal, alarm on alarm management platform automatically warn the person on duty in red on the map. Dang door was illegal open, and door opened Hou failed to in provides time within return bit or lock failed to normal lock live Shi, will automatically triggered emergency alarm system, and in Control Center to sound light alarm way corresponding, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, triggered depending on audio system linkage management. until alarm lifted, to this to elimination exists 2、动笔习作，教师巡视，针对现场习作进行个别指导。 第二课时 五、写法指导、动笔习作 1(动笔习作，教师巡视，针对现场习作进行个别指导。 预设:个别指导 (1)写出家乡的特色:从风光，民俗、风俗等方面写。 (2)由条理地写，语句要通顺，注意详略得当 。 (3)看看书信格式是不是正确。 2(学生独立完成习作草稿，教师巡视。 六、师生评议，完善习作。 1(自读自改。 写好后自己放声朗读，听听是否顺口，想想词语用的是否恰当，句子是否通顺，内容是否具体，注意了详略了没有，书信的格式是否正确。 2(小组互改。 、内容是不是从风光、风俗现在请小组内读一读自己的作文，再评一评:A 两方面来写,B、书信格式是否正解,C、作文有没有注意详略,D、有没有写清楚家乡的风光、风俗。 也可以交换着改一改，互相提一提建议。 3(全班交流。 让写得好的同学在前面读自己的作文，师生共同评论。点出好的地方与不足之处。(经过这样的自评，全班评，可以让学生找到自己习作中的不足之处，并且知道怎么使自己的习作写得更好些。) 4(学生再次修改自己的习作。 作文的提高要经历不断的修改，逐步使自己的习作水平提高，这篇习作是写家乡的，应该从家乡的实际出发，写出一篇精彩的文章。刚才同学的读可能触动你的灵感，请同学们再次修改你的习作，让它更好，更完整。 七、板书设计: Monitoring Center security deployment statistics are as follows: security point distribution statistics-medical building, rehabilitation building, 2nd floor, serial number F1 F2 F3 F4 F5 B1 B2 camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera detection medical alarm building 41, # # 5 16 6 # 5 3 7 # # 4 3 9 18 10 6 4 6 4 2nd on the rehabilitation floor, building 2, 1 ... To alarm system, depending on audio monitoring management system and public broadcast, access system linkage of means on rehabilitation center of patients, and medical personnel, and family, crowd of flow achieved full control, each emergency button, and detector triggered police love signal Shi can and other system linkage management, dang alarm police love triggered alarm Shi, alarm host will to sound light alarm form in monitoring Center issued alarm, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, in monitoring center specified monitor Shang automatically switch the alarm regional image, When essential goods and medicines, dangerous goods storage warehouse of access without hospital management authority was illegally opened, front-end alarm device to send a signal, alarm on alarm management platform automatically warn the person on duty in red on the map. Dang door was illegal open, and door opened Hou failed to in provides time within return bit or lock failed to normal lock live Shi, will automatically triggered emergency alarm system, and in Control Center to sound light alarm way corresponding, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, triggered depending on audio system linkage management. until alarm lifted, to this to elimination exists 写信——介绍自己的家乡 称呼，顶格写 问候语，即正文开始每段开头空两格 正文每一段表达一个意思，情真意切，句句为真。 附:“介绍自己的窗缝”问卷调查 与学生沟通，心与心的交流，说出真心话。 1、家乡有哪些美丽的景点, A B C D 2、家乡有哪些有名的名吃? 3、家乡独特的风俗习惯有哪些, Monitoring Center security deployment statistics are as follows: security point distribution statistics-medical building, rehabilitation building, 2nd floor, serial number F1 F2 F3 F4 F5 B1 B2 camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera detection medical alarm building 41, # # 5 16 6 # 5 3 7 # # 4 3 9 18 10 6 4 6 4 2nd on the rehabilitation floor, building 2, 1 ... To alarm system, depending on audio monitoring management system and public broadcast, access system linkage of means on rehabilitation center of patients, and medical personnel, and family, crowd of flow achieved full control, each emergency button, and detector triggered police love signal Shi can and other system linkage management, dang alarm police love triggered alarm Shi, alarm host will to sound light alarm form in monitoring Center issued alarm, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, in monitoring center specified monitor Shang automatically switch the alarm regional image, When essential goods and medicines, dangerous goods storage warehouse of access without hospital management authority was illegally opened, front-end alarm device to send a signal, alarm on alarm management platform automatically warn the person on duty in red on the map. Dang door was illegal open, and door opened Hou failed to in provides time within return bit or lock failed to normal lock live Shi, will automatically triggered emergency alarm system, and in Control Center to sound light alarm way corresponding, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, triggered depending on audio system linkage management. until alarm lifted, to this to elimination exists 课后反思: 成功之处:利用课前搜集的大量资料，加上学生平时对家乡的熟悉，让学生有话可说有话可写，在课堂上对学生进行认真的引导，通过对例文的分析，让学生对于作文有了一个大概的框架，这样在写作时边平时写作有难度的学生也能很好的完成此次习作练习，写出的文章能做到详略得当，主次分明。 不足之处:作文看似不难，但内容却很多，可以是两篇习作结合在一起，即是写家乡又是写信，这样就增加了写作的难度。虽然有大量的资料，但大都是理论方面的，学生缺少这方面的感性材料，因此在写的时候也加强了难度。 教学建议:指导更细致，一定要两方面都要强调，反复让学生说练。感性材料方面可以从两方面去准备:一、提前让学生跟随家长去多接触这些景点。形成感性材料，二、是利用网络，搜集这方面的图片，视频方面的资料让学生看。这样在写作时就能做到有感而发。 Monitoring Center security deployment statistics are as follows: security point distribution statistics-medical building, rehabilitation building, 2nd floor, serial number F1 F2 F3 F4 F5 B1 B2 camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera camera alarm detection access control alarm detection access control pickup pickup camera detection medical alarm building 41, # # 5 16 6 # 5 3 7 # # 4 3 9 18 10 6 4 6 4 2nd on the rehabilitation floor, building 2, 1 ... To alarm system, depending on audio monitoring management system and public broadcast, access system linkage of means on rehabilitation center of patients, and medical personnel, and family, crowd of flow achieved full control, each emergency button, and detector triggered police love signal Shi can and other system linkage management, dang alarm police love triggered alarm Shi, alarm host will to sound light alarm form in monitoring Center issued alarm, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, in monitoring center specified monitor Shang automatically switch the alarm regional image, When essential goods and medicines, dangerous goods storage warehouse of access without hospital management authority was illegally opened, front-end alarm device to send a signal, alarm on alarm management platform automatically warn the person on duty in red on the map. Dang door was illegal open, and door opened Hou failed to in provides time within return bit or lock failed to normal lock live Shi, will automatically triggered emergency alarm system, and in Control Center to sound light alarm way corresponding, while alarm host to monitoring system matrix issued linkage signal, triggered depending on audio system linkage management. until alarm lifted, to this to elimination exists