【吹尽狂沙系列】高中语文 经典话题作文题写作指导 “一念之间”作文审题及优作四篇

【吹尽狂沙系列】高中语文 经典话作文题写作指导 “一念之间”作文审题及优作四篇 【吹尽狂沙系列】高中语文 经典话题作文题写作指导 “一念之 间”作文审题及优作四篇 作文题目 请以“一念之间”为题写一篇不少于800字的文章。立意自定，除诗歌外，文体不限。 一、关于 审题 1.题意 本题是一篇没有任何提示语的全命题作文，乍一看题目，学生可能会感到无素材可写，似乎题目太过于狭窄，思路打不开。但如果仔细思考、拓展一下，便会发现其实可写的内容很多: “一念之间”与“一念之差”是通用的。一念之间，原是佛教用语，亦是直指人心、最为切要的一句话。我们在世间生活，是好是坏,是善是恶,是福是祸,是贵是贱,都在一念之间。一念，是用心去思考，思考就是自己给自己提问而没有回答。一个偶然的意念，会成为改变一生的重要决定。也许只因为听到一句话，也许只因为读到一行字，也许只因为看到一幅画，也许只因为听到一首歌，也许只因为偶尔抬头望见窗外的一朵云，„„一念之间，人生走出了另一条路。 对于“一念之间”，可从以下几个方面立意: 第一、天下无难易之事，只问有心无心之人:世间的事情困难吗,容易吗,很困难的事情，在有心人的前面都不困难;所谓“天下无难事、只怕有心人”。反之，即使很容易的事情，在无心着意之人的前面，也是无法成功。所以世间没有绝对的难易，有心无心，只在“一念之间”。 第二、天下无善恶之事，只问好心坏心之人:天下没有什么绝对的善、绝对的恶。像父母管教子女，老师教育学生，有时候给予挫折、压力，或打骂、棒喝，却能成就他的奋发向上，这能说不好吗,若是父母溺爱，或酒肉朋友助其吃喝玩乐，无端滋事，这种看似爱心的布施，反而成为造罪的根源。所以天下无善恶之事，只在好心坏心。好心行恶事都是功德，伪君子假恶为善，并非真善。所以善恶好坏，在于“一念之间”。 第三、天下无成败之事，只问得心失心之人:综观天下历史，谁是成功之人,谁是失败之者,贵为帝王的纣王、夏桀，在人间留下千古的骂名。曾经在囚牢里度过悠悠岁月的文天祥，为人间留下浩然正气;史可法忠君爱国，战败犹荣，赢得清王朝的尊敬，追谥为忠正。可见天下没有完全的成败，成败只在得心、失心的“一念之间”。 第四、天下无苦乐之事，只问烦心平心之人:在烦恼人之前，快乐也是苦。对平常心的人来说，无苦亦无乐。譬如千年暗室，点燃一灯，就大放光明。所以苦与乐，只在“一念之间”。 一念之间，世界可能会发生翻天覆地的变化;一念之间，也许会决定你的生老病死。说什么样的话,做什么样的事,说与不说,只在一念之间! 对与错也在这一念之间, 伤心与幸福只在这一念之间!爱与恨、好与坏、悲与乐、得到与失去、成功与失败、天使与魔鬼、天堂与地域等等都在“一念之间”。一念之间可以改变很多事情。 题目虽然简单，但本身具有很强的张力，给学生提供了广阔的写作空间，文章可实写，可虚写，可以从不同角度引发学生的联想，想到现实生活中的相似情景，比如一念之间突然体会了父母的爱、朋友的情(由亲情、友情方面生发)，一念之间自己懂得了某个生活的道理(由思想行为方面生发)，一念之间对自己的高中生活有所感悟(由学习生活中生发)等等。在一念之间体验生活的喜怒哀乐，感悟生活的酸甜苦辣，从寻常的题材中挖掘出不同寻常的深刻内涵，关注自然、社会、人生，表达出真情实感，进一步发挥自身的创造性思维。 tomorrow I go fishing to the East. Bosses don't have fish to eat. "Positions out of a fat man:" going on now in the past, the Imperial Army came after eating is bad. "Old Kings Head Rush thanked the captain rushed to the base for Hong Kong, Shen Yuezhen said:" I think so well! " Aboard the ship, told through again. Months Pro happy meals freshly prepared, Scull chunks post immediately. Card that Fu sheng of the Elves take care of: "old Kings Head tomorrow, your fish such as we Captain!" "Know" this is the King's voice, by far. At night, the ship to port, next to see a few xieye of small fishing vessels, stop eating. Alex after eating two adjacent boats stopping by. Learned from the mouths of local fishermen here have is guerrilla zones, East Taihu Lake infested with bandits, Miaogang landmark, quiet at night, sometimes in the morning zhenze Japan Devils sweep, afternoon zhenze, West of guerrilla activities. Back on the boat, monthly Pro action decided by the first programme, go to Miaogang, find focal point connector. Gently open the ship, sailed into the trackless Yang. Months Pro has lost its way, don't know direction, and had to let the old King was driving. Old King pulling two oars said: "good day to see the stars, cloudy day by feel. You take a break, go to class in a 构词成分。. "No, the cabin there was" grunting ... Shout ... "snore. The next morning, Miaogang the Lion Bridge a mourning fisherman's woman. Head wrapped in white cloth, foot-wear white shoes, selling fish in a fish line. Her a red flower on the toe in his left foot, a white flower on the toe of his right foot, which is a joint sign. Women were observed on the street that a tobacco stores, posted a lot of smoke on the door, there is no old knife brand. Shopkeepers facing West, there are another two strangers looking around. Months Pro knows this focal point has been exposed, she quickly sold the fish back to the Lake, get on Board of the old King said:is Shen Yuezhen, xiaozhengxin them. A few days ago, Shen Yuezhen listen to Jones Lang LaSalle said his family had firearms, ammunition, Ding Bingcheng newly established Jiangsu Taihu Lake is in need of volunteers for the war guns and ammunition, will mobilize he offered his gun out. This small secondary progressive, PWC. Today, he leads Shen Yuezhen in backyard behind a rock. Several people quickly dug seven or eight rifles, four small pistol and some bullets, sack up, carried off the secondary courtyard. To xibaiyang, a small fishing boat approaching, Shen Yuezhen on their fishing vessel disappeared into the mist. Shen Yuezhen is a peripheral organization of the central section of the East China people's armed forces of the anti-Japanese National Salvation Association of a Communist and KMT: Wu Jiang County Government's traffic warden. She returned to her own house Dai Jia Wan, think of importation of firearms program, is afraid of diwei check months Pro frown. The next day, she came to the fishermen's uncle Wang's boat, said importation of firearms, Wang not only down, but also a good idea, brows that make the month pro stretch ... Bei Ma Yang, ship and base for Hong Kong, the Sun has been the West, the monthly Pro will kill fish, wash, place a oil sauce, cooking rice, steamed fish in the rice cooker on. Wang mentioned fish basket selling on minglilai, after the Elves when the sentry, Wang carried out from the basket of three good Mandarin fish, said with a smile: "Mister lucky, MA Yang, this is net live fish, Fu sheng's brother to try it. "The elves called Fu sheng came holding a fish said:" old Kings Head, today luck was not bad! " "Thanks to the blessing of day, only a little fish. Brothers, let me of the Ming dynasty to the North of the road Yang swings to get some fish? " "No, Ah, Eastern foreigner to prohibit! and I am not the first, not to master. "" That is a shame 2(构思举例 这篇作文可以写成记叙文。写一个人一念之间发生的故事，一种决定、一种选择、一种态度、一种处理问题的方式„„ 这道题也可以写成议论文。对生活中、历史上一念之间发生的事情加以评说，提出自己的看法、不同的见解，然后从不同的角度加以分析论证。材料古今中外比比皆是。教材中也不乏类似的例子，现实生活中包括学生自己也会有类似的材料。 还可写成其他文体。比如用日记的形式记下一个人一念之间的心理历程，用话剧的形式展示几个人面对同一个事情在一念之间的不同态度等等。 二、评分标准 1(基本分 文章在基本切题的前提下，达到“三基本”(中心基本明确，结构基 完整，语言基本通顺)要求的，可视具体文章在54—55分之间赋分。在此基础上，只要发现有“亮点”，(如叙述描写流畅生动的、构思巧妙新颖的、有真情实感富有生活气息的、有自己独特的思考感悟的、动人情怀启人深思的)就应该将分数上浮5—10分，最高可到满分。 2.关于亮点 记叙类文章:有相当精巧的构思，有鲜明的人物形象，有真实感人的生活故事，有鲜明的个性特点，有深远的意境，有相当的语言表达机智。 议论类文章:有较高的立意，能选取比较新颖、生动、有个性的材料作为事实论据，论证有层次感，议论语言有逻辑性和文化底蕴。 只要发现有“亮点”，就应该将分数上浮到63—70分。 3(特殊赋分 ?明显偏题、走题的，或没有时时点击牵连，给人以若即若离之感的作文，应判为四类或五类卷，最高分不得超过40分。 ?确认为抄袭，其中三分之二以上与原作相同，最高不超过20分，内容基本相同的不超过10分。 ?仿佛有几个层次，其实只是事例的罗列与情节的铺排，相当于一大段，原则上不超过52分。 ?低幼化的语言、过于寒伧的语言应该在基本分以下。 ?完篇而字数不足，正常赋分之后，每少50字扣1分，扣满3分为止;明显未完篇的，视篇幅和内容的实际情况而定，但最高分不能超过46分。 ?错别字，每错一字扣1分，扣满5分为止。卷面明显较差的，酌情扣分。 7文体写成诗歌的，上限为5分。 (江苏省兴化中学 顾维萍老师撰稿) 作 文 题 一个偶然的意念，会成为改变一生的重要决定。也许只因为听到一句话，也许只因为读到一行字，也许只因为看到一幅画，也许只因为听到一首歌，也许只因为偶然抬头望见窗外的一朵云，„„一念之间，人生走出了另一道道路。 请以“一念之间”为题写一篇不少于800字的文章，立意自定，诗歌除外，文体不限。 see the stars, cloudy day by feel. You take a break, go to class in a y toPro has lost its way, don't know direction, and had to let the old King was driving. Old King pulling two oars said: "good da the first programme, go to Miaogang, find focal point connector. Gently open the ship, sailed into the trackless Yang. Months ed bymorning zhenze Japan Devils sweep, afternoon zhenze, West of guerrilla activities. Back on the boat, monthly Pro action decid rmen here have is guerrilla zones, East Taihu Lake infested with bandits, Miaogang landmark, quiet at night, sometimes in thefishe eye of small fishing vessels, stop eating. Alex after eating two adjacent boats stopping by. Learned from the mouths of localrow, your fish such as we Captain!" "Know" this is the King's voice, by far. At night, the ship to port, next to see a few xitomor ro happy meals freshly prepared, Scull chunks post immediately. Card that Fu sheng of the Elves take care of: "old Kings Headaptain rushed to the base for Hong Kong, Shen Yuezhen said:" I think so well! " Aboard the ship, told through again. Months PImperial Army came after eating is bad. "Old Kings Head Rush thanked the c tomorrow I go fishing to the East. Bosses don't have fish to eat. "Positions out of a fat man:" going on now in the past, thener to prohibit! and I am not the first, not to master. "" That is a shameoreiglittle fish. Brothers, let me of the Ming dynasty to the North of the road Yang swings to get some fish? " "No, Ah, Eastern f s called Fu sheng came holding a fish said:" old Kings Head, today luck was not bad! " "Thanks to the blessing of day, only ae elvethree good Mandarin fish, said with a smile: "Mister lucky, MA Yang, this is net live fish, Fu sheng's brother to try it. "Ther on. 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To xibaiyang, a small fishing boat acondary progressive, PWC. Today, he leads Shen Yuezhen in backyard behind a rock. Several people quickly dug seven or eight rll sed Jiangsu Taihu Lake is in need of volunteers for the war guns and ammunition, will mobilize he offered his gun out. This smadays ago, Shen Yuezhen listen to Jones Lang LaSalle said his family had firearms, ammunition, Ding Bingcheng newly establishe A few en exposed, she quickly sold the fish back to the Lake, get on Board of the old King said:is Shen Yuezhen, xiaozhengxin them.nife brand. Shopkeepers facing West, there are another two strangers looking around. Months Pro knows this focal point has beold k hich is a joint sign. Women were observed on the street that a tobacco stores, posted a lot of smoke on the door, there is noes, selling fish in a fish line. Her a red flower on the toe in his left foot, a white flower on the toe of his right foot, wwear white sho-woman. Head wrapped in white cloth, foot. "No, the cabin there was" grunting ... Shout ... "snore. The next morning, Miaogang the Lion Bridge a mourning fisherman's 构词成分。2 【范文】 一 念 之 间 历史的星空中，那众多的闪念如流星般绚烂。 当那一念之间，人类经纬了宇宙;当一念之间，天下震惊于腾飞的卧龙;当一念之间，曾经辉煌的帝国日暮途穷;我们常被惊得手足无措，待那惊魂甫定，面对历史的落崖惊风，我们的赞叹中有着思索„„ 历史，真的在偶然的闪念中决定吗, 当17世纪，那颗著名的苹果从一个智慧的头脑中砸出了天地间不变的法则，历史仿佛在借牛顿说“是的”。 当残汉，那林泉中的隐者，不求闻达的孔明突然出山，以其旷古才学震撼了天地，历史仿佛在说“是的”。 当滑铁卢，那不败的军神竟在一念之间忽视了断送法兰西勇士们的实安凹路，从而从王座走向了圣赫勒拿岛时，历史仿佛又在说“是的”。 于是我们赞叹历史的跌宕，回环之美，我们浮想联翩。是不是，人类的福祉要感谢那只苹果呢,是不是，那美丽多变，教人惊叹的三国历史，曾可能在一念之间从历史中消逝呢,是不是，若不是那一念之差，法兰西便会在西欧屹立千百年呢,历史啊历史，你的偶然的闪念，成就了多少英雄的史诗，书写了几多绚丽的神话～ „„ „„ 可是历史并没有赞同。历史告诉我们的只是另外的一些奇景。它告诉我们，全英国的梨，在那个思想解放的时代，都准备为那只苹果代劳;它告诉我们，显著的仁德，迟早要惊起伏龙;它更告诉我们，那个斗志昂扬的科西嘉人，凭着天赋英才和一腔热情，是绝对不能维持力量极不平衡的欧洲的，民族解放与自由的浪潮，迟早会让我们为英雄的末路哀伤。 历史是美丽的。历史决定于一念，或曰，跌宕起伏，扣人心弦是这种美的外化。历史发展的内因以浑厚不可阻挡的理想维持着必然性的无上威严，仿若不止东去的滚滚长江之水;那纷繁复杂的外因则以其缤纷多彩处处制造波澜，昭示着偶然性的存在，便似那长江中卷起的朵朵浪花。必然性以雄浑之美而存在，偶然性，那些流星般改写历史的闪念，则以跌宕之美而存在。历史没有必然之美便流于涣散，没有偶然之美便沉于单调，但历史的曲折发展绝不意味着历史必然的消弭，恰恰相反，这一偶然性的作用成就了必然。 当我们再次在那一念之间决定历史的惊人图景面前惊魂甫定时，赞叹那历史的跌宕之美吧～但不要忘记，在这纷繁的偶然之美，在那“一念之间”的背后，是历史巨轮不可阻挡的永恒回响„„ ?评语: 本文视阈开阔，立意深远，语言大气滂沱。开篇“历史的星空中，那众多的闪念如流星般绚烂”即是不俗之语，意境开阔。紧随而出的是三个经典事例:牛顿、诸葛孔明、拿破仑。将三人置于“历史，真的在偶然的闪念中决定吗”的疑问中，进行深入地思考，通过理性的思辨，最终推出“一念之间”的偶然是永远藏匿于必然性之中的。 本文在处理事例论证方面有独到之处。作者凝练地使用这些事例的同时，还用三个事例来谋篇布局，使得文章结构极为清晰。可谓“一箭双雕”。 本文的论述中使用大量长句来表达，可见，作者非常强的逻辑思维能力，但在考场作文中较难让读者短时间理解，而遭成隔阂。 一 念 之 间 boat, iet at night, sometimes in the morning zhenze Japan Devils sweep, afternoon zhenze, West of guerrilla activities. 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She returned to her own house Dai Jia Wan, think of impo Japanese National Salvation Association-ral organization of the central section of the East China people's armed forces of the anti, a small fishing boat approaching, Shen Yuezhen on their fishing vessel disappeared into the mist. Shen Yuezhen is a peripheaiyange quickly dug seven or eight rifles, four small pistol and some bullets, sack up, carried off the secondary courtyard. To xibred his gun out. This small secondary progressive, PWC. Today, he leads Shen Yuezhen in backyard behind a rock. Several people offeDing Bingcheng newly established Jiangsu Taihu Lake is in need of volunteers for the war guns and ammunition, will mobilize hzhen, xiaozhengxin them. A few days ago, Shen Yuezhen listen to Jones Lang LaSalle said his family had firearms, ammunition, n Yueknows this focal point has been exposed, she quickly sold the fish back to the Lake, get on Board of the old King said:is She on the door, there is no old knife brand. Shopkeepers facing West, there are another two strangers looking around. Months Proright foot, which is a joint sign. Women were observed on the street that a tobacco stores, posted a lot of smoke wear white shoes, selling fish in a fish line. Her a red flower on the toe in his left foot, a white flower on the toe of his-ite cloth, footwoman. Head wrapped in wh. "No, the cabin there was" grunting ... Shout ... "snore. The next morning, Miaogang the Lion Bridge a mourning fisherman's 构词成分。ng two oars said: "good day to see the stars, cloudy day by feel. You take a break, go to class in a pullinto the trackless Yang. Months Pro has lost its way, don't know direction, and had to let the old King was driving. Old King monthly Pro action decided by the first programme, go to Miaogang, find focal point connector. Gently open the ship, sailed i3 王 远 航 一个偶然的意念，会成为改变一生的重要决定也许只因为听到一句话，也许只因为读到一行字，也许是一幅画、一首歌、一片云„„也许那句话、那行字、那幅画，那片云并不重要„„ 一念之间，人生走出来另一条道路。但并不是一念让我们改变，而是这一念之间，我们看到了真正的自己。 鲁迅弃医从文，人们都说是他看到耻辱的录像，不禁盛怒，于是一念之间，毅然决然，放弃学医治病，而选择从文治心。从此，这一念之间使中国有了文学的泰斗、正义的良心、执着的战士。但这怎能仅仅一念之间就能做到。无可否认，鲁迅，当他还不叫鲁迅的时候，身体里便流淌着爱国的血液，他的灵魂里也早已融入了不甘屈辱，不甘沉默的骨气。所以，鲁迅之所以成为鲁迅，不在一念之间，而在本心已然。 戎马一生，居功至伟的华盛顿，当他身为“国父”，万众爱戴之时，却急流勇退，一念之间放弃了继续连任美国总统的机会。看看他为国家所作的贡献:带领人民获得国家的独立，民族的解放。没有任何强有力的证据，没有任何不利的言谈，甚至没有一个强劲的对手，华盛顿悄然退出政坛。好像这件事唯一的解释便是四个字:“一念之间”。但是，不然，有时放弃也是一种选择，华盛顿深知，战斗时为了和平，战斗了一生终于得到了宁静和平，何必一次次再去加入“新的战斗”，他也不想自己参与制定的宪法被后人视为一纸空文，为何不为继任者做个榜样呢,看到高高飘扬的国旗，他知道自己是该离开了，只是这时候在别人看来，是那样突然。 一念之间，胡同里的穷小子成了商业巨头;一念之间，码头的水手成了影视明星;一念之间，学校里的老师转身成了将军;一念之间，天使也可以变成魔鬼。 人的头脑里都有一个更真实的自己，他知道什么才是自己真正想要的。只是有时，生活的轮盘总是驱使你不断向前，使人很难接近那真实的“我”。偶尔的一段旋律、一抹色彩、或是一片景色，会让我们走近并触摸到那个“我”。于是，一念之间，平庸者迸发出才华，消极者迸发出激情，怯懦者迸发出勇气。一念之间，一生走入了另一条道路。 一念之间，方显本心。 ?评语: 本文质朴之中藏匿着一个真实的独立的存在，这是一个思考者。 全文首尾两段利用原题材料中的语句谋篇布局:前文刚刚引用，后文马上就是一转，而翻出自己的观点。进而运用两个很有说服力的例子:鲁迅和华盛顿。这两个例子分别成段，叙述精当，议论到位。紧随其后的是三个排比句，将事例推而广之。最后上文，紧急收束全文，但字字珠玑，确耐人寻味。 看来，优秀的文章不全在于语言的优美，更在于文章后面有一个真实的独立的思考者，能用“己手写己心”。 一 念 之 间 ed bymorning zhenze Japan Devils sweep, afternoon zhenze, West of guerrilla activities. Back on the boat, monthly Pro action decid rmen here have is guerrilla zones, East Taihu Lake infested with bandits, Miaogang landmark, quiet at night, sometimes in thefishe eye of small fishing vessels, stop eating. Alex after eating two adjacent boats stopping by. Learned from the mouths of localrow, your fish such as we Captain!" "Know" this is the King's voice, by far. At night, the ship to port, next to see a few xitomor ro happy meals freshly prepared, Scull chunks post immediately. Card that Fu sheng of the Elves take care of: "old Kings Headaptain rushed to the base for Hong Kong, Shen Yuezhen said:" I think so well! " Aboard the ship, told through again. Months PImperial Army came after eating is bad. "Old Kings Head Rush thanked the c tomorrow I go fishing to the East. Bosses don't have fish to eat. "Positions out of a fat man:" going on now in the past, thener to prohibit! and I am not the first, not to master. "" That is a shameoreiglittle fish. Brothers, let me of the Ming dynasty to the North of the road Yang swings to get some fish? " "No, Ah, Eastern f s called Fu sheng came holding a fish said:" old Kings Head, today luck was not bad! " "Thanks to the blessing of day, only ae elvethree good Mandarin fish, said with a smile: "Mister lucky, MA Yang, this is net live fish, Fu sheng's brother to try it. "Ther on. Wang mentioned fish basket selling on minglilai, after the Elves when the sentry, Wang carried out from the basket of e cookng, the Sun has been the West, the monthly Pro will kill fish, wash, place a oil sauce, cooking rice, steamed fish in the rics, Wang not only down, but also a good idea, brows that make the month pro stretch ... Bei Ma Yang, ship and base for Hong Koirearmis afraid of diwei check months Pro frown. The next day, she came to the fishermen's uncle Wang's boat, said importation of fang County Government's traffic warden. She returned to her own house Dai Jia Wan, think of importation of firearms program, Japanese National Salvation Association of a Communist and KMT: Wu Ji-l section of the East China people's armed forces of the antihing, Shen Yuezhen on their fishing vessel disappeared into the mist. Shen Yuezhen is a peripheral organization of the centrapproacifles, four small pistol and some bullets, sack up, carried off the secondary courtyard. To xibaiyang, a small fishing boat acondary progressive, PWC. Today, he leads Shen Yuezhen in backyard behind a rock. Several people quickly dug seven or eight rll sed Jiangsu Taihu Lake is in need of volunteers for the war guns and ammunition, will mobilize he offered his gun out. This smadays ago, Shen Yuezhen listen to Jones Lang LaSalle said his family had firearms, ammunition, Ding Bingcheng newly establishe A few en exposed, she quickly sold the fish back to the Lake, get on Board of the old King said:is Shen Yuezhen, xiaozhengxin them.nife brand. Shopkeepers facing West, there are another two strangers looking around. Months Pro knows this focal point has beold k hich is a joint sign. Women were observed on the street that a tobacco stores, posted a lot of smoke on the door, there is noes, selling fish in a fish line. Her a red flower on the toe in his left foot, a white flower on the toe of his right foot, wwear white sho-woman. Head wrapped in white cloth, foot. "No, the cabin there was" grunting ... Shout ... "snore. The next morning, Miaogang the Lion Bridge a mourning fisherman's 构词成分。see the stars, cloudy day by feel. You take a break, go to class in a y toPro has lost its way, don't know direction, and had to let the old King was driving. Old King pulling two oars said: "good da the first programme, go to Miaogang, find focal point connector. Gently open the ship, sailed into the trackless Yang. Months4 高三学生考场作文 一念之间，瞬息万变，一念之间，一生之变。 有的人一念之间赢得万家信任，有的人一念之间声名狼藉。 有的运动员一念之间通过兴奋剂站在领奖台上，受内心折磨，有的运动员一念之间与奖牌失之交臂，但因凭真本领而内心坦荡。 有的官员一念之间青史留名，有的官员一念之间空对铁窗。 人生中有太多的一念之间，而这一念之间也让我们记住了一些人，遗忘了一些人。 李白少时不学无术，整日游手好闲，可谓极尽颓废，但苍天不会让一个前无古人后无来者的浪漫诗人如此过活，于是在一次李白出游时安排了一位磨铁杵的老妇，只是一句“铁杵磨成针”，李白豁然开朗，一念之间，万事皆明，从那时起，便再没有公子哥式的李白，有的只是寄情山水自由豪逸的浪漫诗人。 与李白稍有不同，鲁迅从小便立志报国，东渡日本求学问道，希望医治国人受伤的肉体，可也就是一念之间，他看到了中国学生对自己同胞被杀害的麻木时，他决定弃医从文，因为他知道，心强体弱比心弱体强更为重要。 从顺境坐出来的人，一念之间，可以活得与众不同，但从逆境爬出来的人，一念之间，可能就是绝处逢生。 用史铁生自己的话说就是“活到最狂妄的年龄，忽地失去了双脚”。相信这对于任何人来说都是致命的打击，因此而一蹶不振，从此意志消沉。但那决不会是史铁生，当他看到地坛中太阳的潮升夕落，落叶雀鸟，行人和老母时，一念之间，黑暗的夜空中出现了微弱的朝霞，既而扩大，照亮整个夜空。 可能有些人会比林肯更不幸，但林肯肯定比他们更能忍受不幸和痛苦，与史铁生肉体的折磨不同，林肯遭受的是心灵上的折磨，面对一次次的丧亲竞选失败，林肯在每一念之间，选择的都是坚持，坚持竞选，坚持演说，他肯定的意念没有错，因而最后林肯终于如愿以偿，完成了自己的梦想。 可能一念之间使希特勒走上法西斯道路。可能一念之间便有了万有引力定律一样的发现。 有的人说一失足成千古恨，有的人说一着棋错，满盘皆输。 一念之间，的确可以改变一生，所以关注每一个一念之间，不要让人生留下任何遗憾。 所以一念之间，一生之变。 ?评语: 本文观点明确，结构清晰。 开篇模仿臧克家的《有的人》的语言和结构，匠心独具。文中例证较多，能看出作者平时的阅读积累。但李白的事例稍显牵强，如果注意语言表述，可能使文章逻辑力量更强大，更有说服力。 一 念 之 间 boat, iet at night, sometimes in the morning zhenze Japan Devils sweep, afternoon zhenze, West of guerrilla activities. Back on thefrom the mouths of local fishermen here have is guerrilla zones, East Taihu Lake infested with bandits, Miaogang landmark, qurned to port, next to see a few xieye of small fishing vessels, stop eating. Alex after eating two adjacent boats stopping by. Lea care of: "old Kings Head tomorrow, your fish such as we Captain!" "Know" this is the King's voice, by far. At night, the shipake told through again. Months Pro happy meals freshly prepared, Scull chunks post immediately. Card that Fu sheng of the Elves t Kings Head Rush thanked the captain rushed to the base for Hong Kong, Shen Yuezhen said:" I think so well! " Aboard the ship, Imperial Army came after eating is bad. "Old tomorrow I go fishing to the East. Bosses don't have fish to eat. "Positions out of a fat man:" going on now in the past, theish? " "No, Ah, Eastern foreigner to prohibit! and I am not the first, not to master. "" That is a shamesome fto the blessing of day, only a little fish. Brothers, let me of the Ming dynasty to the North of the road Yang swings to get s brother to try it. "The elves called Fu sheng came holding a fish said:" old Kings Head, today luck was not bad! " "Thanks heng'rried out from the basket of three good Mandarin fish, said with a smile: "Mister lucky, MA Yang, this is net live fish, Fu ssteamed fish in the rice cooker on. Wang mentioned fish basket selling on minglilai, after the Elves when the sentry, Wang ca rice, ang, ship and base for Hong Kong, the Sun has been the West, the monthly Pro will kill fish, wash, place a oil sauce, cookingt, said importation of firearms, Wang not only down, but also a good idea, brows that make the month pro stretch ... Bei Ma Ys boartation of firearms program, is afraid of diwei check months Pro frown. The next day, she came to the fishermen's uncle Wang'of a Communist and KMT: Wu Jiang County Government's traffic warden. She returned to her own house Dai Jia Wan, think of impo Japanese National Salvation Association-ral organization of the central section of the East China people's armed forces of the anti, a small fishing boat approaching, Shen Yuezhen on their fishing vessel disappeared into the mist. Shen Yuezhen is a peripheaiyange quickly dug seven or eight rifles, four small pistol and some bullets, sack up, carried off the secondary courtyard. To xibred his gun out. This small secondary progressive, PWC. Today, he leads Shen Yuezhen in backyard behind a rock. Several people offeDing Bingcheng newly established Jiangsu Taihu Lake is in need of volunteers for the war guns and ammunition, will mobilize hzhen, xiaozhengxin them. A few days ago, Shen Yuezhen listen to Jones Lang LaSalle said his family had firearms, ammunition, n Yueknows this focal point has been exposed, she quickly sold the fish back to the Lake, get on Board of the old King said:is She on the door, there is no old knife brand. Shopkeepers facing West, there are another two strangers looking around. Months Proright foot, which is a joint sign. Women were observed on the street that a tobacco stores, posted a lot of smoke wear white shoes, selling fish in a fish line. Her a red flower on the toe in his left foot, a white flower on the toe of his-ite cloth, footwoman. Head wrapped in wh. "No, the cabin there was" grunting ... Shout ... "snore. The next morning, Miaogang the Lion Bridge a mourning fisherman's 构词成分。ng two oars said: "good day to see the stars, cloudy day by feel. You take a break, go to class in a pullinto the trackless Yang. Months Pro has lost its way, don't know direction, and had to let the old King was driving. Old King monthly Pro action decided by the first programme, go to Miaogang, find focal point connector. Gently open the ship, sailed i 5 景 芳 园 就像一点星火可以驱走荒原的黑暗，一颗流星可以划出漫天的光芒，一闪念，也可能成为改变一生的重要决定，成为人生长路上的重要转折，一念之间，风云变幻，一念之间，沧海桑田，一念，也可以带来其实与警醒，一念，也可以带困惑和灾难，把握好一念之间，让生命驶向正确的航向。让人生闪光。 人生总有太多的事取决于一念之间:胜负，一念之间;成败，一念之间;生死，一念之间。只有把握住着一念之间，做出正确的抉择，才会穿越迷茫的雾霭，走向光明。 一念之间，人生走出了一条光辉的路。一句“只要功夫深铁杵磨成针”唤醒了李白，激励了李白，中国的史诗上从此留下了“诗仙”的名字;一个影片中的场面，震撼了鲁迅，弃医从文，他用自己的呐喊终使国人不再彷徨;一句“如果你想同时坐两把椅子，你只会从中间的缝隙中摔下去。”的劝告使帕瓦罗蒂从选择教师还是歌唱为事业的矛盾中解脱出来，用歌声震颤了全世界的心灵。一念之间，改变了他们的一生，让他们得以拨开眼前的迷雾，走上明朗的坦途。 一念之间，有时也会陷入困顿，甚至走向灭亡。一念之间，使曹操拴紧了战船，终在赤壁的滔滔火光中狼狈而归;一念之间，崇祯帝杀掉了袁崇焕，终于加速了明朝的衰败灭亡。一念之间，致有《南京条约》之耻，一念之间，致有十年动乱之祸。没有把握好一念之间的选择，最终招来了祸患与灾难。一念之间，也可以从光辉的顶点一下子跌落进万丈深渊。 然而在现实生活中，有的人不能正确对待这一念之间。“一失足成千古恨，再回首已是百年身”，同是一念之间，他们不是选择光明，而是选择黑暗和沉沦，一念之间，让他们丧失了自我，迷失了方向，最终只能落得可悲的下场。 一念是火，可以给人温暖，也可以将人吞噬;一年是水，可以给人甘甜，也可以把人淹没。一念之间，人的个性再次得以彰显，人生道路就此而改变。 一念之间，大有智慧。 . "No, the cabin there was" grunting ... Shout ... "snore. The next morning, Miaogang the Lion Bridge a mourning fisherman's 构词成分。see the stars, cloudy day by feel. You take a break, go to class in a y toPro has lost its way, don't know direction, and had to let the old King was driving. Old King pulling two oars said: "good da the first programme, go to Miaogang, find focal point connector. Gently open the ship, sailed into the trackless Yang. Months ed bymorning zhenze Japan Devils sweep, afternoon zhenze, West of guerrilla activities. Back on the boat, monthly Pro action decid rmen here have is guerrilla zones, East Taihu Lake infested with bandits, Miaogang landmark, quiet at night, sometimes in thefishe eye of small fishing vessels, stop eating. Alex after eating two adjacent boats stopping by. Learned from the mouths of localrow, your fish such as we Captain!" "Know" this is the King's voice, by far. At night, the ship to port, next to see a few xitomor ro happy meals freshly prepared, Scull chunks post immediately. Card that Fu sheng of the Elves take care of: "old Kings Headaptain rushed to the base for Hong Kong, Shen Yuezhen said:" I think so well! " Aboard the ship, told through again. Months PImperial Army came after eating is bad. "Old Kings Head Rush thanked the c tomorrow I go fishing to the East. Bosses don't have fish to eat. "Positions out of a fat man:" going on now in the past, thener to prohibit! and I am not the first, not to master. "" That is a shameoreiglittle fish. Brothers, let me of the Ming dynasty to the North of the road Yang swings to get some fish? " "No, Ah, Eastern f s called Fu sheng came holding a fish said:" old Kings Head, today luck was not bad! " "Thanks to the blessing of day, only ae elvethree good Mandarin fish, said with a smile: "Mister lucky, MA Yang, this is net live fish, Fu sheng's brother to try it. "Ther on. Wang mentioned fish basket selling on minglilai, after the Elves when the sentry, Wang carried out from the basket of e cookng, the Sun has been the West, the monthly Pro will kill fish, wash, place a oil sauce, cooking rice, steamed fish in the rics, Wang not only down, but also a good idea, brows that make the month pro stretch ... Bei Ma Yang, ship and base for Hong Koirearmis afraid of diwei check months Pro frown. The next day, she came to the fishermen's uncle Wang's boat, said importation of fang County Government's traffic warden. She returned to her own house Dai Jia Wan, think of importation of firearms program, Japanese National Salvation Association of a Communist and KMT: Wu Ji-l section of the East China people's armed forces of the antihing, Shen Yuezhen on their fishing vessel disappeared into the mist. Shen Yuezhen is a peripheral organization of the centrapproacifles, four small pistol and some bullets, sack up, carried off the secondary courtyard. To xibaiyang, a small fishing boat acondary progressive, PWC. Today, he leads Shen Yuezhen in backyard behind a rock. Several people quickly dug seven or eight rll sed Jiangsu Taihu Lake is in need of volunteers for the war guns and ammunition, will mobilize he offered his gun out. This smadays ago, Shen Yuezhen listen to Jones Lang LaSalle said his family had firearms, ammunition, Ding Bingcheng newly establishe A few en exposed, she quickly sold the fish back to the Lake, get on Board of the old King said:is Shen Yuezhen, xiaozhengxin them.nife brand. Shopkeepers facing West, there are another two strangers looking around. Months Pro knows this focal point has beold k hich is a joint sign. Women were observed on the street that a tobacco stores, posted a lot of smoke on the door, there is noes, selling fish in a fish line. Her a red flower on the toe in his left foot, a white flower on the toe of his right foot, wwear white sho-woman. Head wrapped in white cloth, foot6