话题作文新编1饮食男女

话题作文新编1饮食男女 话题作文新编 探究饮食 饮食这个话题内容主要包括食物食品、饮料、健康饮食、饮食文化、个人卫生、饮食习惯与爱好、疾病与防治、肥胖问题等，利用这个话题可以写出记叙文、文、日记或书信等不同文体。 话题锦囊 ?常用词汇 go on a diet 节食 be high/ low/rich in含量高/低/丰富 low-fat food低脂肪食物 help yourself to请随便吃 fast food快餐 take three meals a day一天三餐 have dinner吃饭 put on weight 增加体重 lose weight 减肥 fill „with„用„把装满 add „to增添 cut up切开 ?常用句式 What kind of food you eat? 你喜欢吃哪种食物, What do we have for breakfast? 我买早餐吃什么呢, It’s necessary for us to have healthy eating habits. 健康的饮食习惯对我们很重要。 Food gives us energy, so we must have enough food to keep healthy every day. 食物提供我们能量，所以我们每天必须吃足够的食物保持健康。 Unless you keep a balanced diet, you will put on weight. 除非你保持均衡的饮食，否则将会增加体重。 Healthy eating is important for us in our daily life. 健康的饮食在我们的每天生活中很重要。 Eating too much is bad for your health. 吃的过多有害于我们的健康。 Food can give us energy and help us build up our body. 食物能提供我们能量，并且有助于我们争强体质。 ? 经典语段 To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don’t have enough to eat. To eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food. It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. 对节约粮食，我们不应该浪费食物。我们要吃了所有的食物。我们用餐时不应该点太多的食物，因为世上有许多人还缺少粮食。为了吃的健康，我们不应该吃垃圾食品而要健康饮食。饮食平衡有利于我们健康。 作文展示 (2013年荆州) 健康对我们来说非常重要, 我们有很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇80个词左右的短文，倡议“健康生活”，从三个方面说明如何保 持健康。短文首句已给出，不记入总词数, 可适当发挥。 1. food a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat… 2. exercise do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games… 3. happiness keep happy, make friends, smile… 写作指导 (1)内容分析 本试题要求学生以“ Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为主题写一篇议论文介绍日常生活中保持身体健康的三种方法。试题主要写作信息呈现出了饮食、健身和愉快的心情三方面内容，要点明确，内容具体非常贴切学生学习生活，因此本文写作重点应放在段落结构和遣词造句上。文章开头已给出，第二句点出了主题，本文主体部分分别从饮食、健身和保持愉快的心情这三方面来论证保持健康的重要性，结尾部分要用概括性的语言来总结全文，表达自己的观点，得出结论。 写作模式可采用四或五段式，具体写作要点如下: 1. 第一段主题句已给出，你知道保持身体健康的方法吗, 2. 第二段介绍饮食上对保持身体健康的作用。 3. 第三段介绍体育活动有利于身体健康。 4. 第四段介绍愉快的心情有助于身体健康。 5. 第五段简单总结这三点的对保持身体健康的作用，提出自己的看法，得出结论，回归话题。 (2)可能用到的词汇与句式 词汇:a lot of, had better, kinds of, play sports, keep fit, take walks, instead of, do more exercise 句型:playing sports every day„ after school we can spend„ . When we are lonely or unhappy„ If you smile often„ (3)注意事项: ? 本文是一篇议论文勿要写成说明文。 ? 尽力运用短语、多种表达方式，使句式富于变化。 ? 段落的衔接上要恰当地使用过度词，例如first, second, third„ ? 所给提示要点不可遗漏。 满分文赏析1 Good Ways to Keep Healthy It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy? First, ? we need to have healthy eating habits. We can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of foods are necessary, ? it’s also important to eat a balanced diet. Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school ?we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day. Happiness is another way to keep healthy. ?When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends, it is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. ?So, be happy to be healthy. (127words) 点拨亮点 本文作者能够根据题目和提示要点围绕着主题介绍了保持身体健康的方法。所写内容齐全，行文中运用了提示词语，重点阐述了保持身体健康的方法，有理有据符合生活实际，段落结构严谨，层次清晰，适当的运用了一些短语和句式表达灵活，这为本文增添增色。具体亮点如下: ?本段中运用了过渡词first，使文中段落衔接自然清晰，引出了话题得的主题句。 ?句式为主系表结构，形式主语it代替不定式to eat a balanced diet避免头重脚轻，表大自然。 ?句型spend time doing sth中的playing basketball or„为动词-ing形式作介词宾语表达了体育活动方式。 ?When时间状语从句强调了孤独或悲伤对健康的影响。 ?表达简洁，用了so代替了前文中的“you smile often, you also feel happy”，使本句型富有变化，增强了 表达力。 话题写作训练 (一) 2012年乐山 今年的3.15晚会曝光了北京一麦当劳店将过期食品改换包装再次出售一事，引来舆论哗 然，食品卫生安全再次成为人们关注的焦点。作为一名中学生消费者，该如何维护自己的权益，吃到放 心的食品,请你根据下面提供的要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇80词左右的短文，并谈谈自己的看法。 1. 买食品前检查生产日期，查看是否过期; 2. 识别食品是否新鲜或变质; 3. 购物以后索取并保管好发票; 4. 发现问题食品以后，拨打12315或向当地消费者协会寻求帮助。 注意: 1. 词数:80词左右;开头已给出，不计入总词数; 2. 应覆盖所有要点:可适当增加细节，使行文连贯; 3. 参考词汇:date日期;overdue过期的;go bad变质;invoice发票;Consumer Association消费者 协会。 Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests? One Possible Version: Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests? First, before buying food, we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue. Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad. After we pay for the food, we should get the invoice and take good care of it. Last but not the least, if we find there’s a problem with the food, call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help. Food safety is of great importance in our daily life. In my opinion, the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers’ rights. On the other hand, we should learn to be wise consumers. (二) 【2011湖南长沙】近年来，中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题 谈谈你的看法。 要求:(1)内容包括?列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ? 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。 (2)字数:60---80词。 (3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。 范文:Every one wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But we don’t pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at the weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke. It is important for us to have good habits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy. (三) 【2011福建福州】提示作文(12分) 115. 目前中学生早餐问题已经引起社会关注，你所在学校的学生会在5月20日“全国学生营 养日”开展问卷调查，其结果令人担忧。请你根据调查结果写一篇短文，倡导营养早餐。 提示词:regularly, active, junk food(垃圾食品), a balanced diet, as a result 要求: 1. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并发表自己的看法。 2. 所给的提示词必须全部用上，可适当发挥。 3. 字数80词左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Breakfast Is Important Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its important. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students ____________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ Breakfast Is Important Breakfast is important. But not all the students have realized its important. Here’s the result of our survey. About 55 percent of the students have breakfast regularly every day. They keep healthy and look active. 25 percent of them just have junk food instead. They don’t have a balanced diet. (It is bad for their health.) 20 percent (of the students) go to school without breakfast. As a result, these students often fell hungry in class and can’t listen to teachers carefully. What’s worse, they get ill easily. It’s necessary/important (for us) to have breakfast and we should also have the right kinds of food for breakfast.