BEC高级写作

BEC高级写作 一～作文结构 ;一,引言部分, 大致可以句子～第一句结是改结干第一句～述结所描述的容和写两个写叙内 结结段～用一句结括结表的大走结～不出结具字概概体数{曲结结结表不适用} The bar chart below shows the number of complaints made by consumers about different products and services in the years 1994 and 1997. The bar chart displays the changes in the number of complaints made by consumers about five kinds of products and services between 1994 and 1997.according to the diagram, there was an increase in the complaints about most of the products and services. ;二,主部分,体 1根据结表据作出合理分结;注意结目中结出的信息数/, 2每一结一自然段～每段的第一句括结一结的特征～不含具据。写个概体数 3 从体数来第二段结始用具据描述结一特征 4 如大结下分小结仍按上述方法来写 The number of complaints about package holidays abroad and financial service increased over the period. The complaints made about the package holidays abroad rose by 12.7% from 15,000 in 1994 to about 18,000 in 1997. And there were about 52,000 complaints about the financial services in 1997, 5.2% up on 1994. There were also more complaints about electric goods and second—hand cars in 1997 than 1n 1994. The complaints about the two products rose by 9.2% and 6.7% respectively. The former increased from 66,000 in 1994 to about 70,000 in 1997 and the latter went up from 80,000 to 86,000. And clothing is the only sector where the number of complaints dropped over the period. In 1994, there were around 45,000 complaints while the figure decreased by 4% to around 43,000 in 1997. 注意结结的结化,切忌一结多用。 ;三,结尾部分,再次用一句结括和结结结表～和引言的第二句相似～但更加具概很 体数～不含据;曲结结结表不适用, In conclusion we can see there were more complaints about the products and services in 1997 than in 1994 with the only exception of clothing. 二～结结结化 1 描述结的结化～ 2 增～增加～少减减 3 程度 结的结法,chart /graph/ diagram /table /pie chart;结结,状/ line graph(曲结结) 结结出, Display/reflects/illustrates/indicates 结表的结化, 1.增结,increase to/ rash to/go up to/grow to/boom to;结结, An increase of/arise of/a grow of/a boom of ;名结, to后面的是到的最高点～跟达of 跟的是增结的幅度 2.下降,fall to/decrease to/drop to/go down to(结结) A fall of/ a decrease of/ a drop of/a downward trend of 3.保持水平不结,keep/remain/stay at 结定下,来level at/level off at/ 回升,take up at+数据 pick up/recovery(n) 到, 达Reach/touch/ 波折结化～上下波结, fluctuate around+数/fluctuation of+结数结 幅度,Slowly/gradually/steadily/sunddenly/swiftly Slightly/moderately/significantly/dramatically数达据的表方式, Percent/percentage percent 后的是结 跟数percentage指的是百分率的 高低 部分比例,Proportion, A is in proportion to B/A is in direct (reverse) proportion to B 倍数Two times/triple 结结 A is just above B 大结 nearly/roughly/properly 1.Noticeably 2.Several common reasons can be attributed to this situation3.On top of that 4.Working extra hours 5.A promising prospect 6.There are few opportunities for training and further studying7.Skilled technician 8.Inevitably result in 9.Break-up 10.Confidential information 11.Play an extremely important role 12.Be essential to 13.Alternatively 14.Offer bonus and opportunities for further training and study15.Impressive contributions 16.To sum up 17.It is my pleasure to recommend ……for admission to ……18.I am happy to write a letter of recommendation for ……in support of her application to 19.The letter is intended to serve as a recommendation for20.I came to know ^^when 21.I have been acquainted with ^^for four years 22.I find myself uniquely positioned to evaluate ^^’s performance in the past four years 23.Her performance on the ^^exams demonstrates that she is competitive24.She works well with her peers 25.She has several strengths but her main strength, from my observations, is her ability to ^^ 26.She distinguished herself by submitting an exceptionally well-researched and interesting project on ^^ 27.Be blessed with 享有 students and faculty often remark that ^^is blessed with considerable talent. What many of them overlook is how hard^^works to cultivate his talent 28.^^has managed his responsibility with great ease and fitness and he always meets deadlines 29.He earned high grades and demonstrated excellent research skills throughout the semester 30.She is highly intelligent and has good analytical skills 31.Academically 32.She is unquestionably an exceptional candidate for^^ 33.She has proven herself to have the perseverance and initiative, and the intellectual creativity necessary to ^^ 34.Highly self-motivated individual 35.Gain a great deal of 36.Exceed your expectations of 37.I strongly recommend her for admission to your program 38.A bit less emotionally 39.If I have to recommend an area of improvement 40.Feel free to contact me at^^ 41.If any further assistance I can help 42.Fit the candidate specifications as detailed in your ad 43.Pursue a brand management position with^^ 44.In response to 45.Enclose my resume 46.Excellent communications skills 47.Organizational experience 48.Leadership background The column graph evidently reveals the comparison of the contributions of the washing machines, cookers and heaters of a company’s turnover in the successive years of 2000, 2001 and 2002. Washing machine played the most prominent role in the contribution of the three products to turnover in the three years, and it even displayed a general upward trend from 30%(2000) to 34%(2002). This figure in 2001 was 32%. The sale of cookers was exactly the same at 22% in 2000 and 2002, despite that a minor decline took place at 20% in 2001. Contrast with washing machine, the heaters’ market kept shrinking in these three years, from 16%(2000) to 14%(2001) to 7%(2002). From the graph we can see that the comparison among these three products had been increasingly evident. Cookers almost remained steady but washing machine soared whilst heaters descended. The disparity between washing machine and heaters were 14%(2000), 18%(2001) and 27%(2002) separately. The pie diagram apparently demonstrates the percentages of the planned expenditure on IT by European and South-East Asian companies concerning ‘increase’, ‘stay the same’ and ‘decrease’ in the following year. Equally 35% percent of investigated European companies choose to increase their budget on IT or keep it at this year’s level. However, 30% of the companies will shrink their spending on IT in the coming year. In South-East Aisa, more than half of the companies(59%) will expand their expenditure on IT next year, the percentages of ‘stay the same’ and ‘decrease’ are separately 25% and 16%. Generally speaking, a lot more South-East Asian companies will choose to increase their spending on IT in the following year. On the contrary, approximately doubled number of European companies will reduce their budget on IT. A slight more number of European companies are going to keep their spending on IT steady than their South-East Asian counterparts. 1. 先上升后下降的句型, 　　...... increased slowly during…… and …… but fell sharply in …….　　A steady fall in …… during …… and …… followed the sharp increase in ……. 　　2. 先下降后上升的句型, 　　…… fell before …… began to make a recovery ……　　…… continue the recovery, climbing to …… 　　…… dropped during …… but increased again in ……　　…… fell and then pick up during …… 　　…… collapsed before rising to ……at the end of ……　　3. 起伏波结的句型, 　　…… fluctuated sharply all through …… 　　4. 波结不大的句型, 　　…… hardly changed through the period between ……and ……　　柱结形的描述状 　　结结结结形结形的描述 　　结结形的描述状 　　结于百分比结行描述所使用的句型, 　　…… % the …… is/has/have/are …… 　　…… accounts for ……% of the total 　　…… takes up ……% in the whole chart 　　结结的比结 　　1. 表示相似的句型 (结例) , 　　Both share prices rose sharply in January. 　　Neither company has made a profit yet. 　　Like X, Y fell in June. 　　X rose just as sharply as Y. 　　2. 表示差的句型异(结例), 　　X fell sharply whereas/while Y remained steady.　　X fell quickly compared to Y. 　　Unlike Y, X rose by 10%. 　　X rose far more dramatically than Y. 　　3. 表示倍的句型, 数 　　the …… doubled/tripled in …… compared with those in ……　　4. 客结比结的句型, …… is …… in contrast to …… 结结的比结 　　1. 表示相似的句型 (结例) , 　　Both share prices rose sharply in January. 　　Neither company has made a profit yet. 　　Like X, Y fell in June. 　　X rose just as sharply as Y. 　　2. 表示差的句型;结例,,异 　　X fell sharply whereas/while Y remained steady. 　　X fell quickly compared to Y. 　　Unlike Y, X rose by 10%. 　　X rose far more dramatically than Y. 　　3. 表示倍的句型,数 　　the …… doubled/tripled in …… compared with those in …… 　　4. 客结比结的句型, 　　…… is …… in contrast to …… 第二作文个 As is well known to the board of directors, the performance of our company last year has been very satisfactory. An increase of ,1.5 million in the sales volume was achieved as a result of our intensified market campaign and improved distribution network. In order to achieve further success, and additional budget of ,10,000 is needed in the marketing department. The specific reasons are as follows: a) Two extra staff are needed with the public relations advertising. In the past, there were no personnel specially assigned to those functions. However, to further improve our company and brand images, we need such specialists in these two areas. b) Furthermore, our office space must be expanded and interior decoration carried out, our company system also needs updating to meet the requirements of internet advertising. c) In the coming year, we plan to launch a series of TV advertising campaigns and distribute free samples to the public. In addition, we intend to organize a lucky draw event to attract more customers to our new product, Wash Bright. d) This new investment is expected to generate a projected , 500,000 in sales revenue next year, because a wide range of customers will be made aware of our product lines and the benefits they will bring about. Mr. Black, the sales manager in the East Region, is recommended as the candidates for this month’s award in our department. The reasons that he is recommended are as follows: a) Mr. Black has been very much productive in his work. His sales volume reached ,23,000 the first year he joined in our department in 2008, which was above the average level in our department during the whole year. From then on, his outstanding performance always impressed us with convincing figures. This month, ,9,800. b) Mr. Black also enjoys a good relationship with our customers. Firstly, this can be proved by his sales volume. Secondly, up to 200 customers have written to our department to express their compliments and gratitude for Mr. Black. c) The human resource department opens a flexible training course on sales. Due to Mr. Black’s impressive achievements, he is invited as the instructor. According to the feedbacks from the attendants of the course, Mr. Black has given very useful and beneficial lectures in this course. Mr. Black also expresses his fondness of the job.