状物作文

状物作文,是生作文中的一个重要目。所状物,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训就是具体、形象地描写物体的特征、形、色彩、地等。个物训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训包括物、植物等。由于不同的物有不同的特 点,所以状物的方法也不一。训训 ，一,怎写物品训训训训 1.抓住特征 从大小、形状、色、地，制造材料,等方面,所写训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训的物品仔察。因不同的物品有不同的特点,即使训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训是同一物品,也会有某些微的区,也有它自己训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训的独特之。抓住物品的特点写,就是抓住了一物训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训品是区于另一物品的地方写。训训训训训训训训训训训 2.按照一定的序写训训训 ，1,按一分一的序写。训训训训训训训训训训 ，2,按物品各部分的空序写。训训训训训 ，3,有的物品,按先外后内的序写,即先写外表,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训后写内里的序。训训训 3.状物需要想象和想训训 展想象和想,不使所状之物更加具体生,可以训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训 拓作品的意境,增文章的感染力。强 大多数小学生都喜小物,看了以后想把它写出来来训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训到底用什方法,才能写好描写小物的作文呢,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训 1.写外形 首先,察小物，包括昆虫,的外形,一般是写小物的静。在察,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训包括色、相、个都要如写出来。其次,要抓住特训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训点,不能面面到什都写。三是按序:先整体一再局部一最俱训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训后整体。概括写整体,具体写局部,用分系的句群。最后,使训训训训训训训训训训训训训描写更形象、具体,要展丰富的想象,恰当地运用比。特要注意提训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训醒小学生像“——” 、犹如、仿佛等的使用。 “——” “——”训训训训训训 2.写性训训 写小物,要心察它的作、静和生活性,些训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训是小物的方面。例如写它吃食物、嬉的子,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训相互追逐争斗的情形,如何筑、休息的情况,等等。巢 小物也有感情、情,要靠小学生从它的叫声训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训 和作中,用人的方法去体会和想象,就能写训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训 出小物的性格,示出它的活和可,上也就训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训写出了小学生自己的感情。 ，三,怎写植物训训训训 提起植物,小学生的海力会出多花草木的子,但是训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训要将平熟悉的植物写成作文,很多同学却感到很,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训有的得无可写,有的三言两就写完了。怎才训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训能写好植物呢,首先,写前要心察所写的植物,并做察。训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训察,先看整体的形状，外形,特征,再看色、 枝叶的部特征及生境,并把所看到的情况训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训下来。其次,安排好写作序。训训训 1. 可以从整体到局部 先写植物的整体特征,再写它的局部特征。例如以主干、枝、叶、花、果等序,训训并突出写其中的一两部分。另外写的候,要求学生从各个角度训训训训训训训训训训训训去地描、刻画。训训训训训训训训训 例如描写叶,就写它的形状、色和人的感等,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训描写花,就写它的大小、香味、色彩、花期等,使人训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训有如身其境。训训训训 2.按照植物的生程行察训训训训训训训 很多植物的生、育、花、果直至衰亡,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训个期的每 形各不相同的,所以,可以按照植物的生程训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训 行察。训训训 3.写察日训训训训 可以用写察日的方法。来描述某植物在一段里训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训的生、育情况。训训训训训训训 4.以四化序训训训训训 很多植物在不同的季里割据特色,所以,可以其四的训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训 序。 5.托物抒,借物咏志训训训训训训 写植物,不能停留在外形和色彩的描写上,在文训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训章中表达作者的感情。例如,感悟人生的哲理、高尚的道德情操、训训训训训美好理想的追求等等。用方法,要借训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训助例文行必要的指,培学生 丰富的想能力,在描训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训植物形的同,予它一定的象摹征意。训训 范文: 麻辣牛肉面 在众多的美味佳肴中,我只训训训训——麻辣牛肉其中一情有独,那就是我最喜的面。那训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训好吃的感,无法用言来表达。 麻辣牛肉面看起来似乎和普通的牛肉面一,但训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训你不怎会知道它那独特的味呢你训训训 训训训训训训训训训训训训训感吃什都香。了之后便会你的胃口大,而且可以你在寒冷的冬天里感受到一股股暖流在你的身体里流训训训训训训训训训,你不会再感到冬天的寒刺骨训训训训。 我走训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训一家面店,点了一份麻辣牛肉面。付了,我走到厨房前,看那傅起一大把面条,往训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训里一放,然后拿一只碗,往里面放了一些料,香的、辣的都有。面煮了训训 训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训 训训里出面久,傅从条再在,放准好的碗里,然后又往里面加了香菜,面上上的,面就做好了。训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训 端上桌,只训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训一辣油漂浮在面条上,的面,更人 垂涎欲滴,辣油旁训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训全有,香味蒜俱、葱弥等,真是色香 漫在整个店里。我深深地吸了一口气,那香味渗入心田,人的心都训训训训训训训训训暖暖的。面条很有筋道,排列很整,一看就训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训知道煮面条的傅功夫不浅,真是令人不训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训已:面条很粗,有点象粉条,也吊起了我的胃口,感人的也训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训消失得无影无踪了,剩下的只有快训训训训训训训在身旁。 我拿起勺子,舀起一勺子辣训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训,用嘴一吸,上面的料跟着一起象粉皮一训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训滑到肚子里,身体一下子暖起来。再拿筷子起一根面条,放入嘴里,一训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训吸,面条地来到嘴中,用嘴一咬,面条里的训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训汁散来,香味在嘴里弥漫来,再嚼几下,料的味道也跟着散训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训来了,真是美味至极。我情不自禁又加了点辣椒,再喝一口,辣辣的,有如一股暖吹训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训来,人十分陶醉。等不及品味,我端起碗喝了一口,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训滑筋道的面条,美味的,我仿佛来到了另外一个世界:我坐着一片香叶在辣海中游训训训训训训训训训训训训训训,一下子我又充了活力、激情。暖透人心,我的个每毛孔都在使地训训训训训训训训训训训训吮吸着股暖流,整个人的心儿啊,都醉了:…… 不一会训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训儿的功夫,我就享受完一碗令我回味无的面条。走出,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训我的心里不断地涌上暖流,嘴里训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训弥漫着那股香味。我已没有任何,快,快就在我的心里。哦,我最的训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训牛肉面,不,是麻辣牛肉面。我忘训训训训训训训训训……,留下快,令我以抗拒 我训训训训训吃臭豆腐 今天下午,我高高地来到了训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训……训其路小,那里有甜甜的排,有香香的烤中,我最喜的是训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训黄如金、香如醇、嫩如酥、如的臭豆腐了。我来到小前,看了训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训正在忙碌的老,他面、鼻子大大的,像一个老外,正站在油训训训训训训训训训训训训训一个前,情地客每人品招呼 他的小吃。于到训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训我了,我急不可耐地了五臭豆腐。老麻利训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训地拿起臭豆腐,将它抛入中,,中来了一里训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训啦声,那香味也油然而生,我深吸了一口气,那豆腐的臭味中训训训训训训训训训训训训训训散着人的香气,我垂涎三尺,咽了口吐沫,凑训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训去看了看,原来白白的豆腐得金黄金黄的,看上去像一训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训吸水的海一膨起来了,看着豆腐出了训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训撒上葱花等料,我激万分。 我坐到位置上和姐姐一起准训训“”训训训训训训训训训训来了,来了品臭豆腐。:在味料里洗澡的臭豆腐训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训于新出炉了。我迫不及待地拿起牙,吃了。我始耍酷,装作美食训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训的委一嚼慢咽,臭豆腐香香的,嚼在嘴里的、甜甜的,又有点嫩滑,咽下去训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训臭豆腐像滑滑梯一直奔肚子而去,味道真是好极了。不,不,我品味着……训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训了一会儿,我定睛一看,吃的姐姐竟然趁我不注意把它吃了一大半了,我气得火冒三丈,手里的筷子使地,在一大训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训堆豆腐上,嘴里加快速度,狼虎咽,嘴巴恨不得直接训训训训“训”训训训姐姐狼快到子上,但是是没有从牢里放出来的,没有法,于是,训训“”训训训训训训训冲刺我左右弓,向最后几个豆腐,我嘴里撑包,于训到了最后一个豆腐。 回到家,我像一只快要撑破肚皮的小猪一训训训训训训训训训训训躺在沙上直哼哼,肚子又又训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训想吐,很受。平老提醒的吃要嚼慢咽训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训一定要听啊:唉:臭豆腐,我你真是恨交加呀。 我家的生植物训训训训园 在我家典雅的训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训房里,有一个模不大的生植物园,里面训训训训训训训训训训训训着各不同的花花草草。 在训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训众多植物中,我最喜的要数一富竹了。它用一个白色的玻璃瓶装着,瓶里装了大半瓶水。繁茂的根训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训都浸在水里,看上去有点乱无章,仿佛一在一起的毛训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训,富竹提供水分。两根翠色的竹茎交叉着向上舒展,模十分挺拔。一训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训的竹茎摸上去有些粗糙。富竹的叶子的、薄薄的,有的叶子上面着一些黄斑,摸上去十分光滑。些叶子的训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训姿也是各不相同,它有的昂着,挺着胸尽力向上伸展,想得更训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训充足的阳光,有的弯着腰,低着,宛如一位睿智的老人正在思考着什,有的训训训训“”人身上,洋洋地靠在正晒着温暖的太阳浴呢:一盆训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训花也我尤喜。小小的花盆十分精致,上面画着各训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训精美案,盆口有一圈紫色花,尤美,紫砂盆有之训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训而无不及。花盆里装着一盆土,有一股淡淡的土腥味。花的叶子训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训尽力向外伸展着,嫩白嫩白,中有一训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训抹草,手感光滑而尽其生命之蓬勃与朝气。 此外,里有叶训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训片肥厚、刺的芦,叶子扁大的,有各不训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训知名的花花草草,他房增添了一分色:我家的生植物训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训园,空气更加清新、境更加美好、更人心情训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训舒,我我家的生植物园。 爬山虎 我训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训学校的走廊着一大片爬山虎,一年四季展示我不同的面貌。春天,草花,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训爬山虎的嫩芽从色的茎杆里出来。浅浅的中训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训透着嫩,嫩中透着,人想起儿的皮卷卷的又像一个个小画,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训慢慢地舒展,摸上去光光的、滑滑的。色的小生训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训命地大了翠可。 夏天,大地一片翠训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训花盛,爬山虎的叶子成深色,也得更加茂盛了。一个叶每片有幼儿手掌大小,像一把把小扇子。一训训训训训训拂,波起伏,叶儿沙沙地响,像雨点、又似训训训训训训训训训训训训琴。很快,所有的杆都被爬山虎爬训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训了,地上都有了凉。走爬山虎架全身都像沐浴之后般的清爽,那是爬山虎你训训训训训扇扇呢! 秋天,大地一片金黄,站在高训训训训训训训训训训训训训训望去没有一点色,偶冒出的色彩是菊花的美貌。的训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训爬山虎也穿上了盛装,黄底上面训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训着燃的火。儿吹来就像一个个舞蹈家在表演。有也会训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训落下几片,随像一只只彩蝶在空中舞。 冬天,爬山虎的叶落尽了,路出小而黑的果。下训训训训训训训训训训雪之后,爬山虎训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训成了一道道,上面好像着一小小的白梅。 《我的生日礼物》 前几天是我的生日,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训答我一架格斗直升机,我非常心,等礼物一到家就迫不及待地拆训训训训训训训训训训训训包装盒,想要一探究竟。 训训——训训训训训训训训训训训个礼物是雷速登翼空冲天翼武装直升机。它全身天色,配着四个用海训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训做的,如果它是真机,人看了都望而生畏。三角形的机下方有遥控接收器和探照灯,在夜训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训,灯泡里射出的光芒十分耀眼,照亮了林,照亮了草,照亮了一个每黑暗的角落……训训训训训训训训训训训训它的螺旋有四片叶子,上面有一个平衡杆,起来训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训呼啦啦,像卷一,卷起了大片大片的灰训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训。个直升机真是威凛凛,神气极了。 起初,我训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训次得遥控机每很,了几下以后,我心里竟有些害怕起来,因都要摔到地上,我训训训训训训训训训训“训训训不要地摸着它,看它哪里摔怕了。爸爸在旁鼓励我:大胆点,才能训训”训训训训训训训训听操控好遥控直升机。了爸爸的,我胆子大了一些,也更加油信心了,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训始再次。我做了个深呼吸,然后地训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训推升油,机慢慢上升,我巡了一番四周,看了一个训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训枕,我想:不如就拿它做停机坪吧:于是我立刻推训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训前手柄,向枕去,再慢减小油,于,训训训训训训训训训训训训机在枕上成功降落了。 站在一旁训训训训训训训“训既看的然装作一副考官的子,会玩武着刁的口气装只,升了,也会打训训训训”训训我了吧,我你想都不想,一个料瓶,一次性打中就行了。口答训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训了。心想:可不能被嘲笑,于是就和爸爸一起商策训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训,一翻考徐之后,我想了一个好点子。我先把训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训机地行,机像小汽一靠近地面,慢慢训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训到瓶子前,接着了四枚全部命中,我高的跳了起来。直升机,是你我训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训体到了成功的喜悦,是你我的生活丰富多彩,是你我的生活训训训……训训训训训训训训训训来了一快我你,空翼号直升机。 小 训 训 在我家训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训的缸里,了多条小,有两条"清工训训",些小在训训训训训训训缸里是活训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训乱跳的,得十分快。 　　我很喜些训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训皮的小精灵,不的坐在缸前欣它训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训游泳美的作。有一条小非常好看,身上五光十色的,就如同天空中那美训训训训训的彩虹。 　　它吃训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训西的候很有趣。我把食撒去,它就一个个争先恐后、你争我训训训训训训训训训训训训训训的游到食物聚集的地方狼虎 咽地吃起来,吃了的小得训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训十分自在,有的追逐打有的在训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训石上休息,有的好像在跳高,一直不停地跳上跳下,很人喜。　　它训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训睡的候也很好玩。一个个都漂在水面上一不,像停了训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训机的潜艇浮在水里一。小仔可真有趣,全部都藏到石训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训的隙里去了。好像在跟我玩捉迷藏。 　　它训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训游的候最有趣。当我不留神的候,只听缸里"训"的一声,一只小从训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训缸一端游到另一端,其它小也成群地 跟着游起来。嘿:它训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训竟然玩起了游泳比,坐在一旁的我也想成一训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训条小去跟它一起玩呢。 　　训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训是一可的小物,我非常喜缸里的那些小。 我家有只小花猫 我家有一只美训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训的小花猫。背上松黄松黄的毛着一条条雪白的斑训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训,毛茸茸的上嵌着一双宝石般的大眼睛,不训训训训训训训训训训训训 皮的眨着,亮。 我家的小花猫真可。有它在训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训你的身上左、右,有爬上你的肩,和你玩捉迷藏游训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训天放,有在每学回家你的里睡大。,小花猫在我的身上撒训训训训训训训训训训训训 ,像是一个皮的孩子。 我家的小花猫很凶猛。夜训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训,它极其敏的眼睛。只要老鼠把训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训溜出来,它就像离弦的箭似的冲去,把老鼠逮住。即使跑得再快的老鼠,也逃不出它的手掌心。 我家的小花猫机灵极了。在它睡训训训训训训训训训训训训训训怎,它的候,不步我脚都能听训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训。不是,小花猫很有念。一到吃的训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训 ,它就会像慢的汽似的移来,不用人叫。 我家的小花猫训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训在玩。我常用抖着的子来逗它玩儿。有一回,我趁它吃得正香的候,训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训悄悄到阳台,用一个来的塑料球故意出沙沙声。不一会儿,只小花猫匍匐着根训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训、桌角,探探的摸房来。它小心翼翼地看看、西嗅嗅,然后离训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训球一米多的候,它伏下身体,将肚皮着地,伸脖子,向塑料球的挪那训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训注的目光,随着小球的跳一上一下地移。啊:越来越近了,忽然,小花猫以一副惊人的速度跑了来。训训训训训训训训训训训训“训训训”训利我没品有反溜来,只小花猫早已着走了。 我家的小花猫的确好。有,它会训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训跟一只心,西跳,有,它会训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训跟一只到乱走,鼻子离地很近很近…… 我家的小花猫特训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训睡到中每。午,小花猫躺在阳台上晒太阳。你瞧,它两脚抱着训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训袋,成一,鼻尖儿到雪白的肚皮下面,直打呼,肚皮一起一伏。只有两只耳训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训训高高的立在那里。当我用手摸它的,它会舒适的将四肢展得意地甩着尾巴,训“训训训训”训训训训训训训训、的的叫两声昵地哩。 我常常望着入睡的小花猫,心想:是一“训训训训训训训训训”只多可的小花猫呀: