英语四级作文讲解及高分经典范文

四级作文分为四类: 1 立场选择型 2 问题解决型 3 道理论证型 4 比较对比型 下面是各类讲解和经典范文 第一类:立场选择型(yes or no 或A/B ) 1 观点:给出两个截然不同的观点,但在第一段中摆出自己的观点,不同意或同意哪一方的观点 不要游离在两个观点中,模棱两可。 2 框架: 第一段提出要评论的事物,说明在这个事物上的的不同看法,引出自己的观点 Nowadays, it is a heatedly discussed topic... Has become the most popular...is a popular phenomenon....交代背景。 I think... 第二段主题句承上启下,指出原因或理由并详细论述,支持自己的观点主题句 Firstly / in the first place / first of all, the reason is ... Second, Thind, The last, 第三段总结出自己的观点得出结论 1 In short / To sum up / In one word 范文1 : Should the Old People Live with Their Adult Children? Nowadays, it is a heatedly discussed topic to many families that whether or not the old people should live with their adult children. If all the factors are contemplated, I think it is better for them not to live with their adult children. There are mainly three reasons (disadvantages). Firstly, it may interfere in adult children’s independence and freedom. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. The new member of the family has no blood relations with the parents. When the relationship between the in-law and the parents is not harmonious, the sons or daughters of the parents will be in an embarrassing situation. Secondly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life; whereas the young love noises, activities, and unrestrained enjoyment, Furthermore, people of different generations have different views and values. When the old live together with their adult children, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national or international issues. There are many other advantages, like .... In short, it would be a better picture if the parents and their adult children do no t live together: both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, lead a life they like and keep intact their affections for each other. 范文2 1 Student-centered Classes or Teacher-centered Classes Although classes often seem outwardly the same because there is always a teacher and some students in a classroom, the differences between teacher-centered classes and students-centered classes, however, are enormous. I prefer student-centered classes because they are more natural and interesting ways of obtaining knowledge. There are some merits for students in student-centered classes. In student-centered classes, the teacher tries to stimulate s tudents’ interest in learning on their own by asking provocative questions, by posing problems, and most important of all, by being a participant too. Students in these classes are more actively involved in the thinking and learning process. They ask questions and then discuss in classes what they have found. On the contrary, i n teacher-centered classes, the teacher usually dominates the class. He lectures, puts outlines and language points on the blackboard, gives solutions to problems, and fills the stud ents’ heads with information. The students only sit, listen and take notes silently at their desks. To sum up, student-centered classes not only make learning active and enjoyable, bur also enable the students to learn how to find and solve problems themselves. But to realize complete student-centered classes, there’s still a long way to go tin China. 范文3 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online With the widespread application of computer technology, millions of young people are obsessed ( crazy) with making friends online. Some believe that it is a convenient way of communication, while others hold that it is a curse to the society, and I’m supportive of the latter point, that is it is not wise to make friends online. Making friends online is not wise for many reasons. The main reason for my propensity is that the Internet is unreal and the online friends are impractical. On the Internet, the independent space is different from our real world, and many people use false identities online which are not worth out trust. To make things worse, there are often cheats behind the screen that lead us to a dead end. Unfortunately, some people have suffered not only mental hurt but also property losers, even losing lives to the worst point. Another reason is that friends online can’t understand us exactly and can’t offer he lp instantly. They don’t know what kind of person we are and what kind of situation we are faced with. When we meet some difficulties, they can’t come to us right away. But fiends in the real life can share our feelings and help us to get out of trouble. They are reliable, as we can see everything from their eyes. Taking into account of these two factors, we may reach the conclusion that true friends are more helpful than on line friends and in certain circumstances, on line friends do harm to us. W e should get on well with friends in the real life and cherish them. 范文4 Are Parents the Best Teachers? In a person’s lifetime, parents can be very important teachers in our lives; most people believe that “like parents, like children”. …In my view, parents are not always the best teachers. There are several reasons. First, parents may be too close to their children emotionally. Sometimes they can only view their children in a protector’s point of view. It’s very likely to limit their children’s freedom in the name of safety. Secondly, parents may expect their children’s interests to be similar to their own. If they love mathematics, they may try to force their children to love mathematics too, without inquiring their children’s o wn favors. Thirdly, parents are always eager to pass on their values to their children. Parents neglect the fact different generations need different ways of thinking. In this way, their children are unlikely to keep up with the rapid social changes or technological advances, due to the old traditions value fed by their parents. A student may find his or her parents don’t really understand or appreciate the digital revolution in modern times. When kids have to find their own way to what they believe in, they may find their parents’ belief out-of-date. 范文5 Living in University Dormitories or Apartment in the Community Junior and senior students often have a choice of places to live. Some may choose to live in university dormitories, while others may prefer to live in apartments in the community. In fa ct, I think it’s better for students to live in university dormitories. There are many advantages for students living in university dormitories. In the first place, students living in university dormitories can have easy access to classrooms and school f acilities. It’s convenient for students to go to classrooms, libraries or other school facilities if living in dormitories. In the second place, students living in university dormitories are easy to make more friends. Dormitory provides students more opportunities to get in touch with other students from different majors, and different background, thus they are mare likely to get along with different people, and improve their communicative skills and scope of knowledge. In the third place, students living in dormitories on campus won’t ge t distracted as easily as those living outside. Because dormitories are in a relatively quiet environment compared with apartment, students are surrounded with schoolmates and are near to school facilities. It’s easy to focus more attention on study in a scholar environment for students living in university dormitories. In conclusion, as students at university are adults, they have a choice o places to live since they can be responsible for their own choice. Though living in apartment in the community can probably offer a relatively luxurious life, living in university dormitories can provide a scholar, friendly and convenient environment for university students. 范文6 Should newly graduated college students get to work or establish a business? 思路一:工作更好,原因在于大学生创业缺乏资金,技术和人脉,工作则更加体面和稳定,可以积累经验。 思路二:创业更好,原因在于给自己打工,主动灵活,更具挑战性,更加锻炼人,且一旦成功,回报更多。 At present, career planning becomes a significant question for newly graduated college students. As a matter of fact, most of them prefer to find a job in company, while others prefer to set up their own business. As for me, I would like to get to work first as an employee rather than risk my precious time to establish a business. Getting to work after graduation is absolutely better than establishing a business for three reasons. First, newly graduated college students are for from possessing the necessary assets such as capital, technology, and public relations if they want to establish a business. Operating a business is a very comprehensive and complicated project. Many elements are required and any one of them may easily bring the business to a haul (get) or even an end. Second, working as an employee can give students professional experience and practical capacities. What college students lack is not opportunity but superior ability. Even giv en an already profitable business, they can’t operate it well for absence of strong leadership and relevant experience. Thus, college s tudents must first improve themselves by accumulating a lot of experience and leadership in jobs. Third, establishing a business is very risky, while a full-time job could guarantee a stable life . As mentioned above, a business needs a huge input of many elements. According to an authoritative survey, just five percent beginning entrepreneurs succeed at last. This is so risky that too few people can bear the burden of failure. However, a job can make people enjoy a regular and stable life. In a word, it is better for newly graduated college students to find a job instead of rashly establishing a business. It is notable that working as an employee is less risky and could foster all kinds of abilities. 范文6 Studying alone or studying in a group Studying habit is a very individual thing. Some people like to study alone, while others prefer to study in a group. Both ways of study have their own advantages. Personally I would rather study alone than study in a group. 第二类问题解决型 要领:就某种社会现象或问题提出积极的解决,立意在“方法”、“途径”、“怎么办”主要遵循两种模式:1:提出问题目前状况提出解决问题的途径------原因或好处------结尾(四种方法)模式2:提出问题分析问题----提出多种解决办法-------选择最佳方法并说明原因-。模式1、2的题目相同。模式3:提出问题现状——多种途径或办法——总结等4种方法(how to…/ the ideas of …) 题目出现形式有: 1 One W ay to... 2 The W ay to... 3 The Best W ay to ... 4 How to ... 5 My Idea of a Successful Interview 6 The ideas of … 第一段:引言。对现状形势或困难的描述,提出问题。 1Currently, ... become a matter of concern. 2 Recently the problem of ...has been concerned by plenty of people. 3 people are beginning to realize that... 4 ... attract a lot of public attention. 5 Thinking of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. 6 think it is the most effective way to solve this problem ... is that the government should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through education.(提出自己的论点)。 第二段:原因、好处。多种途径或问题解决的种种方法。 1 The benefits for my ideas can be generalized to two major ones. One is ... The other is ... 2 There are several ways to... 3 There are two reasons for the improvement in people’s living conditions. In the first place, we have been carrying out the reform and opening-up policy. Secondly, there has been a rapid expansion of our national economy. 第三段:评价或选择。对第二段中提及的途径进行简要评价,或选取其中一两种自己认为合适的方法、途径并简要阐述其依据。 In brief, ... 范文: In modern society, most people seem to be under great stress, which has caused a lot of psychological problems among them and serious social problems too. What do you think of it? How to solve the problems? Give your opinion on the topic: How to Cope with Stress Currently, how to cope with stress becomes a hot issue of the society. Too much stress contributes to a lot of psychological and social problems. There are several ways to cope with stress. First, you have to revaluate the priorities of your life. Do you really need those lavish things, like fashionable clothes and a brand-new car? Or do you really need to do those things? If you learn to be content with what you have, you probably will find that all these things are not so urgent, or you don’t want them that much. Thus, you won’t have to take a second job or spend your weekend in the office. Second, regular exercises will help you relieve your stress. No matter how busy you are, find time to play some games, preferable with your families or at least with your kids. Y ou won’t feel upset with your self. Third, you should learn to relax. The world won’t come to an end if you stop and smell the rose on the roadside. Relaxation will help you enjoy your own life more .Being content and happy with your life won’t burden you’ instead, it will relieve you a lot. In conclusion, you’ll find yourself with enhanced physical strength and mental vigor. In this case, you could cope with stress successfully. 范文1 The Best W ay to fight against smoking Nowadays, public smoking has become a matter of concern. Many passersby reluctant to inhale 吸入the smoke from the smokers around them. The governments have tried many ways to ban smoking in public, but the result is not satisfying. A new citywide smoking ban has been released recently in Beijing. It is said that people could not smoke at public places like sports venues 体育场馆, hospitals, schools, cultural heritages sites, etc. I fully agree with this regulation because I think it is the most effective way to fight against smoking now in China. The benefits for my idea can be generalized to two major ones. First of all, banning smoking in public protects the health of nonsmokers. As everyone knows, smoking is harmful t o one’s health. It causes many diseases such as lung cancer and TB. Smokers should take the full responsibility for their voluntary choice. However, it is not fair for nonsmokers when they have to bear the smell of smoke and later the diseases caused by ot hers’ smo king. Another benefit is that it deters sending a message that smoking in public places is no longer socially acceptable, and it decreases the appeal of smoking to adolescents青少年. Kids’ perceptions认知of how many people are smoking are a major factor for them to decide whether they’ll smoke. In conclusion, … 范文2 My idea of a university arts festival The students union of our university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester. I would like to contribute my idea about it. I reckon it should be a festival involving all the students in the university via varied and colorful ways. The benefits for my ideas can be generalized to three major ones. First, more students should be involved in the festival. It should not merely be for a small number of gifted students to organize and demonstrate their talents in singing, dancing, drawing, playing musical instruments and performing on the stage, etc. It should attract the average students,who used to be treated as passive spectators, to play an active role in it. Second, I advise to build a communication platform in BBS, e-mail or face-to-face way. On this platform, students could communicate with each other freely, discussing their favorite arts or activities. Furthermore, they could raise many questions, which would be answered by students of teachers specializing in it. Their works or performances will be instructed as well. In conclusion, university arts festival should not only give the students a chance to appreciate different arts, but also provide them a platform to learn, communicate and entertain. The essence of arts festival is to enhance the college life and benefit university students spiritually. 范文4 Hard work --- the only way to success Rapid as Chinese economic development is, an unprecedented reform is going on in Chinese people’s mind. Diligence worship has gradually transferred to luck worship in the fast-changing world. Old traditional values have been rewritten with new thoughts and ideas. More and more money goers regard luck as the only way to success by scarifying their reputation and even dignity. However I think the only way to success is and will always be by hard work. Hard work is the only way to success for many reasons. First, hard work is the keystone to success. Hard work lays a solid foundation for one’s success. Luck is something surprising and one would fail to succeed even if luck comes around. Secondly, no one can succeed without hard had been working for years before he came to the conclusion of his famous theory of Relativity. Finally, good luck contributes as little as 2% to success. The remaining 98% is dedicated to long-term struggle and hard work. In conclusion, hard work is the milestone to one’s aim, the time-consuming procedure and it’s the only way to success. Those who are eager to become rich overnight have to rely upon long-term hard work. 第三类道理论证型 1 要领:从题目中,已经可以看出这个话题的观点,要求考生对这一现象或者这一事物进行分析和论证,说明此事物的意义、重要性或危害性。 2 常见题目有: The Importance of … / The Benefits of / Why … 或者题目本身就是一个观点明确的话题eg:Travel Broadens the Mind 3 各段详解: 第一段:引用题目作为自己的论点 1 People begin to realize the importance of… 2 The importance of … has been brought to public attention. 3 Currently, there is a growing tendency that … 4 It might be time to place emphasis on … 第二段:直奔主题—列举2-3个理由 1 This phenomenon is never accidental for many reasons. 2 A number of factors could account for … 3 There are many benefits of … 第三段:总结等4个方法 范文:Some important characteristics of a good colleague In modern society, we spend a long time with our colleagues both in working time and spare time. As far as working class is concerned, a colleague’s characteristic is not only important to a team’s success, but also crucial to one’s own career. First, a colleague should be cooperative. In the company, one is expected to cooperate with other colleagues and contribute their efforts to the team. In other words, one should have that sense of cooperation during his of her work. Only in this way, one can be accepted by others and work with them happily. Second, a good colleague should be adaptable. One should not be stubborn to one point but seek to get accustomed to changes in routines. A good colleague should accommodate himself or herself to a new task easily and can therefore conquer the difficulties. In this way, one may get respect from his or her colleagues. Thirdly, a good colleague should be helpful. He or she should always be ready to help others. Those who are too mean to give their help to others will not get others’ help either. To sum up, a good colleague should be cooperative, adaptable and helpful. These important characteristics will contribute to a success both in life and career. 范文1 Why do people attend college or university With the development of modern education, more and more people have easy access to college or university. Most students have been working for about 12 or more than 12 years in order to pass the National Entrance Examination to university. People attend college or university for a great variety of reasons. First , students can acquire knowledge and experience form college or university. Teachers in college or university are good at teaching life experiences which can help students learn problem-solving skills. With such help, students can enrich both basic and professional skills which are helpful to their future work and life. Secondly, students can learn how to manage their own time in a reasonable way. Before entering college or university, students’ life is always arranged by their parents or teachers. However, by studying in the college or university, students can learn to arrange their time on their own. This is very important experience of students’later work and life. Thirdly, studying in college or university enables students to have opportunities to live with others and learn to cooperate with them. Students in college or university have to cooperate with each other and solve a lot of problems together. This develops their ability of cooperation which is beneficial for their later life in the society. Students who cooperate with each other well are likely to establish better connections with others in the society. All in all, students not only acquire new knowledge in college or university, but also learn necessary experiences such as time arranging ability and cooperation skills which are beneficial for their future work and life. I suggest all the high school students go to college or university to receive higher education. 范文2 The Importance of Psychological Education in College Nowadays, the mental health of colleges students has aroused more attention of the whole society. Many universities and colleges offer courses to the enrolled students concerning mental health and also provide psychological consultation to those who need help. I am very glad to see that mental health is being given more importance. This phenomenon is never accidental(次要的). Firstly, mental health is equally important to our daily life. People may encounter setbacks and mental difficulties every day. If not properly addressed, they may obstruct people from enjoying the life and doing their work. Secondly, people need professional suggestions to care more about their mental conditions. Faced with mental setbacks, people sometimes do not know what to do. This is when they are most in need of care and love. However, giving care and love to them in an inappropriate way makes the situation even worse. They sometimes would go to extremes and there occur tragedies. Therefore, students need experts’psychological education. Furthermore, university students are in a special adolescence period in which they grow more mature. However, such a stage is no easy for them and they have to deal with all sorts of pressure, depression and setbacks, therefore they need special care of and attention to their psychological balance. In conclusion, I do hope that everyone can realize mental health is also important to our daily life. It is the responsibility of colleges and universities to conduct more comprehensive mental health education among the students. I believe that providing university students with professional psychological courses and consultation will help them deal with difficulties more efficiently. 范文3 Harmonious Dormitory life in my mind 115 A harmonious dormitory life is necessary and important to the students who live there. A harmonious dormitory atmosphere is a premise of a safe, sanitary, comfortable civilized dormitory life for every boarding student so that they can enjoy homelike warmth. To learn how to get along with roommates is the first thing students have to deal with at college. A harmonious dormitory life could be achieved in the following ways. First and the most important point is to respect our roommates. Be careful not to expose the others’ privacy. To protect the others’ right of privacy is a symbol of a civilized person and it can promote the development of a harmonious dormitory life. Second, we have to learn to compromise(妥协). We are prepared to make some concession on minor details, but not compromise on fundamentals(原则问题). Third, we must learn to communicate. The roommates are from different places and with different habits and in different traditions. To communicate with roommates is the best way to clear up misunderstanding which is sometimes inevitable to run into conflicts. It can be concluded that a harmonious dormitory life comes from all room members’ cooperation. Only by respect, compromise and communication can we live a harmonious and happy dormitory life. 范文6 Sensitivity: the most important characteristic In modern society, different people have different characteristics …. What is the most important characteristic in one’s life? I think it is sensitivity. Sensitivity is the most important characteristic for several reasons. First, sensitivity can help a person know the place of his or her other characteristics well, such as ability, honesty and intelligence. He or she, therefore, could develop more smoothly and quickly than others on career. Secondly, a sensitive person knows how to balance things. A sensitive person knows how to respond properly to different persons in different situations for the maximum benefits for both other persons and himself. Third, a sensitive person will always care about others’ feelings. He or she knows how to treat others in a proper way that are more likely to be accepted, and in turn, may gain gratitude from others. A sensitive person pays attention to the people around him or her and makes others feel comfortable. A sensitive person is ready to establish a harmonious relationship with others. In conclusion, a sensitive person understands how to demonstrate his or her other merits such as honesty, intelligence, and avoids shortcomings. To be sensitive is to be considerate about matters, kind to others and well-balanced of his or her relationship with others. Thus, sensitivity is really important to a person’s development. 第四类比较对比型 1 要领:与立场选择型相似,(两者选其一,然后论证)不同点是:不需要气质相明,可以兼顾两方,但是最终还是要选择一个重点。 2 常见题目: The main difference between my college life and my middle school life The advantages and disadvantages of … 3 详解 主线一:一个现象或事物:某一现象--- 其不同---(利或弊)--- 我的看法 及理由 第一段,现象、状况、对同一事物的不同看法 第二段,分别阐述这些看法的立足理由或优劣 It has advantages as well as disadvantages. 第三段,第三段给出自己的观点 From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldn’t be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school. 主线二:比较两个事物的主要不同之处: 第一段:建议用现象陈述或提问,引出要比较的两个事物,提出两个事物存在着明显的差异或两个事物的不同特点 第二段:直接评述事物A的主要特点并加以说明:然后,指出事物B的主要特点并加以说明(比较与对比方法) 第三段:通过比较得出倾向性的结论,明作者的态度。 Overweigh / I prefer… 范文 Advantages and disadvantages of spending a great amount of time practicing sports Many people practice sports in their free time as a major interest. However, a few people regard sports as their whole life, spending a great amount of time practicing sports. This has both advantages and disadvantages. Sports are good for people in many ways. First and foremost, sports are beneficial to people’s health. 有益健康By practicing sports, people can keep fit and stay in shape. In addition, sports can help; people purify their mind. 提升精神境界培养乐观面对人生的态度。People who love sports can enjoy a rise in spir9itual world and are likely to develop a positive attitude toward life. It’s tested that those who are fond of sports will probably be more hardworking than those who are not. People practice sports not only for physical health, but also practice may result in a drop in physical health. Human fitness will start to collapse. W e may find a good many of athletes death suddenly due to too much physical activities. In addition, excessive practice may interfere in their study and career. People tend to get addicted to their favorite sport if they play it too often. This addition to sports may cause distraction from work and thus undermine their study and career. In conclusion, moderate exercise if fundamental to good health, but excessive sports can be harmful. It’s advisable that one should balance practicing time and energy in sports activity, so that one could enjoy a safe and sound sports journey.