大学生的心理健康

四级作文 大学生的心理健康 How to improve student's mental health 1、 大学生的心理健康十分重要 2、 因此，学校可以....。 3、 我们自己应当....。 题目分析： 学生的心理健康是近年来被热议的话题之一，属于经典的问题解决型，故不外乎采用举例子，作比较，分类别，列数字，打比方等方式讨论。 Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains。 Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. What's more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. (学校) From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue。(我们) 【点评】 potential threats 潜在威胁 ease 减轻，舒缓 psychological problems 心理问题 precaution 预防措施 release pressure 释放压力 play an important/critical role in sth it is widely accepted that …… To begin with, What's more, Besides, From the factors mentioned above draw the conclusion that 等等均为经典模板句式! 2 报考国家公务员的热 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Test for National Civil Servants. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)近几年兴起了一股报考国家公务员的热潮 2)分析产生这一现象的原因 3)你对此的看法是…… 【参考范文】 Test for National Civil Servants In recent years, there are more and more people who have participated in the test for national civil servants. Millions of students choose civil servant as their most ideal occupation after graduation. And among them, the high-educated, like masters and doctors, take quite a large percentage. The craze in civil servant test has attracted widespread attention. The following reasons can account for this kind of craze. Above all, nowadays college students face great employment pressure. Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions in today’s China, becomes their preferable choice. Moreover, in recent years, the welfare and salary of civil servants have been improved greatly, which undoubtedly attracts many people. Besides, the high social position of civil servants is an important factor drawing many people to take part in the civil servant test. In my opinion, this craze in civil servant test will continue in the following years. However, from the long run, it doesn’t do good to the development of the nation. If most high quality talents gather in the government departments, it might lead to a waste of resources. Therefore, both the individuals and the government should have a more objective recognition of the civil servant test craze. 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出近几年社会上出现的一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述近几年来报考国家公务员的热潮;分析产生这一热潮的主要原因;谈谈“我”对报考公务员的看法。 3 农场偷菜不如在线学英语好玩！ 2010年12月大学英语六级汇总！ 酒后驾车 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Drunken Driving. You should write no less than 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.醉酒驾车增多的原因 2.醉酒驾车的危害 3.如何减少醉酒驾车 Drunken Driving Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunken driving has been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for /behind this phenomenon. Firstly, recent decades have witnessed the rapid development of people’s living standards. As a result, cars gained ever-increasing popularity and have found their way into our everyday life. Secondly, people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink liquor/strong wine. Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive. Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians/goers, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a grievous waste of money, time and resources. Last but not least, this irresponsible driving will make the road a nightmare, and thus, it will causes serious losses of faith in governments and the society. In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things gget worse. First, it is essential that the supervisory role of laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunken driving. Secondly, the public, especially drivers, should enhance their awareness of public safety. With stringent laws and alert public, it will only a matter of time for drunken driving to become things of past. 4 大学生乱消费 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic To Curb Spending. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在许多大学生普遍花钱大手大脚，消费水平高 2. 有人认为社会整体生活水平提高了，大学生花钱多一些无可厚非 3. 你的看法 To Curb Spending 【话题分析】 大学生消费是目前家长及教育界比较关注的问题，它所反应的不仅仅是花钱这一表面现象，而是隐藏在这一现象之后的大学生的价值观、金钱观等思想层面的问题。 【范文解析】 Nowadays the campus students seem to have no idea of how money comes from, and not to care about their expenditure. They buy whatever they like for themselves, also for their friends, paying no attention to how much these things cost. Some people say that it is not a problem for college students to spend much. After all, the society is progressing and the life is being enriched. With the living standard being raised, it is reasonable to improve the expenditure of students. There is nothing to blame. For me, it is not just a habit of spending more money; it is a reflection of students' outlook on money and value. The students get money from their parents so easily that they have no idea of earning money with their hard work and effort, thus developing an awareness that they want to get things but are unwilling to work hard for their goal. Definitely, that is harmful. The campus students can improve their lives, but with the money earned by themselves. 第一段讲述了这一现象，大学生喜欢什么买什么，从不关注钱从何处来，也不关心自己的花销。 第二段提出了一些人的看法，他们认为社会进步了，生活水平提高了，大学生多花一点也无可厚非。 第三段讲述了作者自己的观点看法。在作者看来，这并不仅仅是花钱习惯，更多地反映了学生的金钱观、价值观。学生从父母那里很容易就能要来钱，所以他们就不会想通过自己的努力来赚钱，渐渐就会培养这样一种想法：希望不劳而获。最后作者强调，学生提高自己的生活水平并没有什么不对，但要用自己赚来的钱。 【高分妙招】 议论文经常出现在六级作文中，考生要注意合理表达自己的观点，表明自己对问题的看法。在论述中，不要仅仅停留在表面层次，而要深究其内在原因，才能给考官留下深刻的印象。 5 和谐社会 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled A Harmonious Society in My Mind. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1. 建立和谐社会成为了一种潮流和趋势 2. 我心中的和谐社会是…. 3. 为了建立和谐社会，我们应该如何去做? 【话题分析】 和谐社会是目前中国建设的目标之一，是比较热门的社会话题。报纸、杂志、电视新闻等，经常讨论此话题。考生应多关注社会新闻，为写作收集素材。 【范文解析】 Nowadays, it seems known to everybody that one of the objectives of China's modern construction is to build a harmonious society. All of a sudden, "a harmonious society" has become a frequently-used phrase in media news, newspaper etc. It is the trend of China's development. But what is a harmonious society? In my mind, there are several aspects included in building a harmonious society. First, a harmonious society has democracy in its politics to ensure the maximum benefits of the people. Second, a harmonious society has equality and justice to protect the rights of every citizen. Third, a harmonious society has good faith and friendly relation between people to create a favorable atmosphere for living and doing business. Forth, a harmonious society has energy to make sure its creativity. Fifth, a harmonious society has stability and order to provide people with a comfortable environment. Sixth, a harmonious society has harmony between humankind and nature for a sustainable development of economy. To be true, it needs joint efforts of every person in China to realize this great goal. For me, I am a student in college. What I can do is develop good relations with people around me, help others as much as possible, spread this awareness to as many people as possible, laying a foundation for this tall building. 文章一开始就提到目前中国现代化建设的目标之一，就是构建和谐社会。一时之间，构建社会成为中国发展的趋势。 第二段从六个方面讲述了和谐社会的内涵：1)民主政治，保证人们的最大利益;2)公平正义，保证每个公民的权利;3)诚信友好，为生活和生产提供良好环境;4)充满活力，确保社会的创造力;5)稳定有序，保证生活平稳安定;6)人与自然和谐相处，实现经济可持续性发展。 第三段从自身出发，讨论在构建和谐社会时自己该如何做。作为一名学生，作者认为：和周围人发展友好关系，乐于助人，传播“和谐社会”的意识，为这个宏伟目标奠定基础。 【高分妙招】 六级作文很贴近国家大事，因为对时事政治的了解是对当代大学生的要求之一。出现一个新的命题，考生应多关注其内涵及相关评论，这样写作过程中才能做到“胸有成竹”，写出来的作文才“言之有物”。 6 农场偷菜不如在线学英语好玩！ 2010年12月大学英语六级答案汇总！ 购买彩票 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)目前社会上有许多人喜欢购买彩票 2)分析产生这种现象的原因 3)提出你的建议 思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求“我”针对该现象给出建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述当前社会上人们热衷于购买彩票的现象;分析导致人们购买彩票的原因;针对购买彩票提出一至两点“我”的建议。 【参考范文】 Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries? Nowadays, there exist all kinds of lotteries in our society, such as welfare lottery, sports lottery, computer lottery, and so forth. Anyone, whether men or women, the young or the old, may buy lottery tickets. But why do so many people like buying them? The following reasons can account for the popularity of lotteries. First of all, most people are trying their luck on lottery tickets. They have a long-cherished dream of making big money overnight. In addition, there are some people who want to make donation to public welfare by buying lottery tickets. Besides, some people buy them just for fun. As far as I am concerned, there are some risks in buying lotteries. People never should count on making big money by buying lotteries. Furthermore, lotteries to some extent are similar to gambling, so people should not spend too much money and energy on them. In a word, people should keep a clear head when buying lotteries. 7 农场偷菜不如在线学英语好玩！ 2010年12月大学英语六级答案汇总！ 网络犯罪 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Cyber Crimes. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)随着互联网的普及和应用，网络犯罪开始摆在世人面前 2)应该如何来打击和预防网络犯罪越来越成为人们必须要解决的一个难题 3)作为大学生，你应该怎么做? 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点指出解决该问题的紧迫性，提纲第3点要求谈谈大学生应该如何应对该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络犯罪出现的背景及问题现状;指出解决网络犯罪问题的紧迫型，说明解决办法;从大学生的角度谈谈应该如何应对网络犯罪。 【参考范文】 Cyber Crimes With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem facing us. Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet. To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers. As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses. However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more. It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes. First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly. Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber crimes. Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses. As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes. For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission. For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information. In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes. 8 大学生信用卡消费 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡 2)分析产生该现象的原因 3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。 【参考范文】 Credit Cards on Campus In recent years, credit cards have gained more popularity among college students. With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for credit cards and begun to consume by them. The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards on campus. Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, which is a big attraction for those students who have not much money for their domination. Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. Drawn by these policies, many college students have applied for credit cards. As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit card debt. Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards. 9 大学生创业 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Starting Their Own Undertakings. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)现在有不少大学生毕业后开始自主创业，政府鼓励这种行为，而且还给大学生创业提供了许多优惠和便利措施 2)产生这一现象的原因 3)你的看法 思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析现象产生的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述目前许多大学生自主创业的现象;分析大学生选择自主创业的原因;阐述“我”对大学生自主创业的看法。 【参考范文】 College Students’ Starting Their Own Undertakings Nowadays there are many college students who choose to start their own undertakings instead of finding a job after graduation. The government encourages this practice, and provides many preferential policies and facilitation measures for college students. This phenomenon has aroused great concern from the whole society. However, why do so many college students take the way of starting their own undertakings? Firstly, college students are facing severe employment situations. Many college graduates couldn’t find ideal jobs, which forces them to set up their own businesses. Moreover, some ambitious college students are not satisfied with being employed by others. They want to develop and prove their talents by running their own businesses. Besides, the government’s encouragement and the media’s reports on college students venture stars have stimulated more college students’ enthusiasm to take this way. As for me, it is a good choice for college students to start their own undertakings. However, it is a very difficult cause, which needs firm determination, clear mind, ability to endure hardship and a feasible project. Therefore, think it over and make full preparation before you decide to start your own business. 10 大学生毕业去向 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Choices after Graduation. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the table and the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)根据下图描述某高校近两年毕业生去向分布情况 2)分析这样分布的原因 3)你的看法 引用 毕业去向 就业 考研 出国留学 其它 所占比例 50% 30% 17% 3% 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式图表命题。提纲第1点要求根据所给图表描述一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：根据图表中的数据，描述近两年某高校毕业生去向分布情况;分析导致这样分布的原因;阐述“我”对毕业生去向的看法。 【参考范文】 Choices after Graduation From the above table, we can see that the students of this university have three main choices after graduation. Of these choices, the students who have found a job only take up 50%. In contrast, students who pursue further study by taking the postgraduate entrance exam or going abroad have increased greatly than before, with the total percentage of 47%. Indeed, this phenomenon is also quite common in other universities. The following factors can account for the choices of graduates. Above all, with the enrollment extension of universities, college graduates are facing the severe employment situation, which forces them to find another way out. Moreover, in information age, knowledge is updated very rapidly. Many college students find their knowledge is not enough for their future career. Besides, some college students would not like to enter into the complicated society and want to escape from the reality temporarily by going to further study. From my point of view, one’s choice after graduation should be based on his individual condition. Though taking the postgraduate entrance exam or going abroad for further study is a good choice, it is not necessarily true of everyone, because it might involve many factors, such as your future career direction, your economic condition. Therefore, we should take a full account before we make our decisions. 11 网络隐私 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Internet and Piracy. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)网络几乎已经渗透到人们生活和工作的方方面面，包括我们的一些个人隐私 2)网络会对个人隐私产生哪些影响 3)你认为应该如何保障我们在网络上的个人隐私 思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象带来的负面影响，提纲第3点要求说明应该如何防止该负面影响，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述如今网络在人们生活和工作的重要地位，引出网络对隐私的侵犯这一问题;分析网络对个人隐私产生的主要影响;说明应该如何保障网络上的个人隐私。 【参考范文】 Internet and Piracy Internet has penetrated into all the aspects of our life and work. We can study and work by it; we can find a job by it; we can communicate by it; we can entertain by it; we can buy and sell by it. We can do almost everything on the Internet, and almost anywhere anytime. However, at the same time Internet provides services for us, it is inevitably invading our privacy to some degree. The services on most websites require our registering. If we want to enjoy these services, we have to provide much private information, including our names, gender, address, telephone number and sometimes bank account. Due to the poor Internet administration and weak network security, our information might be open, stolen or sold. Even sometimes the information will be misused by the criminals. Considering the above-mentioned, we must enhance the alertness when using the Internet. First, when we need Internet service, we should always log on those big legal websites. Second, if the service requires important private information, you should think twice before you type in it.