作文兴趣班教案

作文兴趣班 第一讲:人物动作细节描写 教学目标: 1、通过学习，能够理解动作细节描写的作用。 2、掌握动作细节描写的基本方法。 3、能够运用动作细节描写刻画人物。 教学重点: 培养动作细节描写的基本能力。 教学过程: 一、动作细节描写的作用 1、表现人物心理的作用 2、刻画人物性格方面的作用 3、表现人物情绪和揭示文章主的作用. 二、什么叫动作细节描写 动作细节描写，就是对人物细小的动作的描写。 描写人物行动时，不仅要写出他在做什么，更要写出他在怎样做，特别是他“怎样做”时常常被人忽略的细枝末节，即看似无关紧要的“小动作”，以此来凸现人物的个性特征——思想的、品格的、性格的、心理的以及习惯的，等等，这就是“于细微处见精神” 三、小结: 动作细节描写在文章中起着重要作用，它可以使被描写的人物形象生动、栩栩如生、活灵活现、呼之欲出、跃然纸上、真实可感，个性特征更加鲜明。一个或一处成功的动作细节描写往往胜过千言万语的表白。 四、练习: 写一个片断，要有多处动作细节描写。 要求: ? 要写出人物个性特征。 ?适当运用修辞。 ? 要表露思想感情。 ? 要准确使用动词。 注意:写好后，将动作描写的词语圈出来。 personal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussion, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflection and further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of practical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a qualified member of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do try to do, to set an example. Two lies in the doing. To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is the focus of this study and education and essential point. A qualified party members not only to watch his Constitution Party rules and talk to learn how, through, dark and light, and also what does he end up doing, is not a unity. This study and education, is essential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. In learning education in the, each members are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation discipline qualified; told moral, and has conduct, do conduct qualified; told dedication, and has as, do play role qualified" "four told four has" this put ruler, often measure himself, view himself, transformation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. To firm to to Central par, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political 第二讲:学习对话描写 生动形象地表情达意 学习目的: 在于借助、依托语言这个载体，对人物、事件、环境等进行刻画和描写，目的是使读者如见其人、如闻其声、深入其心、身临其境、如睹其物，让读者透过语言信息获得真、善、美的人文精神的陶冶。 学习重难点: 1、分段 2、提示语 学习过程: 一、思考:1、语言描写有那些作用呢, 2、有那些要求呢 (1)要求个性鲜明，符合人物的身份、年龄、经历、性格 (2)常同神态、动作描写结合使用 二、练兵场 设置情景，让学生进行对话描写的写作训练。 (要符合人物的身份、年龄、性格特征，力求避免冗长的叙述) 1、老师和自己谈心 2、家长的告诫 3、课间交流 4、班会上的发言 5、班门被踢坏了，老师追查时和同学们的对话 personal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussion, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflection and further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of practical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a qualified member of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do try to do, to set an example. Two lies in the doing. To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is the focus of this study and education and essential point. A qualified party members not only to watch his Constitution Party rules and talk to learn how, through, dark and light, and also what does he end up doing, is not a unity. This study and education, is essential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. In learning education in the, each members are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation discipline qualified; told moral, and has conduct, do conduct qualified; told dedication, and has as, do play role qualified" "four told four has" this put ruler, often measure himself, view himself, transformation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. To firm to to Central par, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political 沙湾作文兴趣班 辅导教师:赵荣 第三讲:景 物 描 写 学习目的: 让学生学会描写景物的方法，学会用所学到的方法描写自己的校园，表达自己的感情。 教学过程: (一)言之有物(有什么景物、有什么样的景物) ?五觉法 视觉(形状、颜色、数量、静态、动态 (变化)等) 听觉(声音[变化]等) 嗅觉(气味[变化]等) 味觉(味道[变化]等) 触觉(质地、冷暖等) ? 联想法、想象法 练习:你来说说看(任选其一) 1、公园里有许多花。(将这一短句扩展成一个60字以内的片段，要求包括时令、颜色、形状、气味、等要素。 2、鱼儿在水中游动。(将这一短句扩展成一个60字以内的片段，要求包括颜色、数量、动态变化、想象等要素。 (二)言之有情 运用主观色彩浓的词语，运用抒发感情或主观感受的句子 温馨提示:注意保持感情的一致 (三)言之有文采 练习:你来美化它(运用拟人、比喻等修辞描写下面任意一种景物) 琴声悠扬、湖水清清、明月皎洁、 谈谈你的收获: (一)言之有物 (二)言之有情 (三)言之有文采 作业:请你东道主来介绍《我们的校园》 要求扩展后的景物描写: 1、要抒发自己的感情。 2、至少使用一种修辞。 personal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussion, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflection and further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of practical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a qualified member of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do try to do, to set an example. Two lies in the doing. To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is the focus of this study and education and essential point. A qualified party members not only to watch his Constitution Party rules and talk to learn how, through, dark and light, and also what does he end up doing, is not a unity. This study and education, is essential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. In learning education in the, each members are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation discipline qualified; told moral, and has conduct, do conduct qualified; told dedication, and has as, do play role qualified" "four told four has" this put ruler, often measure himself, view himself, transformation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. To firm to to Central par, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political 第四讲:尽情地想 尽情地写 教学目的:培养学生的想像、创新能力。 教学过程: 一、出示一个圆形:从这个圆形，你想到了哪能些东西 (自行车、手表、闹钟、苹果、水池„„) 二、你能通过下列图形来展示你高超的想像力吗,(说说各个东西发生的) 三、展开想像的翅膀 生活中:家庭用品、动植物、体育用品、交通公具、办公用品、学习用品 想像中:大自然、宇宙、科学研究„„ 四:习作要求: 1、想像丰富(与众不同，想像合理) 2、内容具体(交代起因、经过、结果) 3、词句优美(用上比喻、排比等修辞) 五、练习: 请根据提供的三个图形(两个圆、一根直线)展开丰富的想像，可以将图形进行任意组合。 、记实文(生活中的所见所闻) 1 《关于望远镜的故事》、《家庭演唱会》„„ 2、想像文(童话、科幻小说) 《神奇的望远镜》《时空隧道》„„ personal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussion, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflection and further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of practical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a qualified member of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do try to do, to set an example. Two lies in the doing. To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is the focus of this study and education and essential point. A qualified party members not only to watch his Constitution Party rules and talk to learn how, through, dark and light, and also what does he end up doing, is not a unity. This study and education, is essential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. In learning education in the, each members are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation discipline qualified; told moral, and has conduct, do conduct qualified; told dedication, and has as, do play role qualified" "four told four has" this put ruler, often measure himself, view himself, transformation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. To firm to to Central par, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political 沙湾小学作文兴趣班 辅导教师:赵荣 第五讲:让心灵说话 ——细腻的心理活动描写指导 学习目标: 1 、掌握刻画人物心理活动的几种方法; 2 、培养细腻地再现人物在特定情景下的心理活动的能力。 教学过程: 一、什么叫心理描写: 心理描写指对人物的心理活动加以描写,以表现人物的思想和性格的写作方法。 二、类别: 1、心理活动 2、心理状态 三、要求: 符合身份、表现性格、 结合环境、扣住主题。 四、思考:如何进行具体可感的心理描写呢, 可分为两大类:直接描写和间接描写。 直接描写包括:内心独白、神态描写、梦境和幻觉描写等。 间接描写包括:环境烘托、动作语言描写。 五、佳作赏析 六、练习:写一篇有心理描写的习作 七、习作讲评: 要求:,、小组内交流所写片段，以心理描写方法的运用及语言的表达效果为主要标准进行评价。 ,、推荐组内最优秀的一篇佳作在全班交流，并由一名组员点评。 personal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussion, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflection and further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of practical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a qualified member of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do try to do, to set an example. Two lies in the doing. To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is the focus of this study and education and essential point. A qualified party members not only to watch his Constitution Party rules and talk to learn how, through, dark and light, and also what does he end up doing, is not a unity. This study and education, is essential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. In learning education in the, each members are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation discipline qualified; told moral, and has conduct, do conduct qualified; told dedication, and has as, do play role qualified" "four told four has" this put ruler, often measure himself, view himself, transformation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. To firm to to Central par, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political 第六讲:爱的细节在屋檐下 ——〈感悟亲情〉作文指导课 教学目的: 培养学生能够选择身边所发生的小事，以小见大，捕捉鲜活的细节，表现亲情。 教学过程: 一、理解亲情 亲情是在我饥肠辘辘时母亲端上的一碗蛋炒饭; 亲情是在我犯错时父亲愤怒举起又轻轻落下的手掌; 亲情是在父母疲惫时我又手送上的一盏清心的茶; 亲情是 。 二、捕捉细节，体味亲情 出示图片:仔细观察，图片中的人物是怎么做的,其中哪些话，哪些行为让你感动, 提示:亲情是生活中的细节，只要我们细细品味，爱就时时溢满我们的心房。 三、欣赏细节感受亲情: 出示:〈天亮了〉这首歌后面的故事 请同学们仔细阅读材料，看看作者是通过什么方法让我们也为之动容的, 四、写作小技巧: 1、选身边事，抒心中情 2、抓动情点，以小见大 3、鲜活细节，表现人物 五、交流:现在请同学们讲讲自己关于亲情的感人故事。 六、描写细节，表现亲情 让我们赶快拿起笔，记下最感人的一幕吧～ personal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussion, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflection and further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of practical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a qualified member of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do try to do, to set an example. Two lies in the doing. To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is the focus of this study and education and essential point. A qualified party members not only to watch his Constitution Party rules and talk to learn how, through, dark and light, and also what does he end up doing, is not a unity. This study and education, is essential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. In learning education in the, each members are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation discipline qualified; told moral, and has conduct, do conduct qualified; told dedication, and has as, do play role qualified" "four told four has" this put ruler, often measure himself, view himself, transformation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. To firm to to Central par, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political 沙湾小学作文兴趣班 辅导教师:赵荣 第七讲:精心打造作文的开头 教学目的:让学生学会运用各种不同的开头，让作文更精彩。 教学过程: 一、如何打造亮丽开篇? 1.引用诗词名句等 开头引用名言警句、谚语俗语、歌曲诗词等，既富含文采，又易于引发读者的共鸣。这是提升作文档次的一种有效手段( 2.巧用修辞 开篇使用修辞方法，以引起读者对所要面对的事物或观点的兴趣，使文章一开始就新颖动人，富有吸引力。同样能使你的文章熠熠生辉( 3.情境对话 以人物对话开篇，牵引读者进入特定情境(这种写法入题较快，有先声夺人之势，或引出故事，或揭示矛盾冲突(能很快抓住读者的眼球，激发阅读欲望( 4.运用题记 题记是指写在题目下面(正文之前的文字(巧用题记开篇，既起到了提纲挈领的作用，又能揭示文章主旨，给人耳目一新的感觉。巧妙拟写题记，能为你树起一道亮丽的风景线，使文章锦上添花( 二、开篇的原则和注意事项 1、开篇的原则: 简洁 生动 优美 三、开篇注意事项: 开篇要为内容和中心服务，是文章的有机组成部分。 四、不可取的开篇 • 1、远离中心;• 2、交待不清;• 3、戴大帽子; • 4、平淡、平庸;• 5、浮泛，似是而非。 五、开篇小练习 请你为作文《为自己鼓劲》写一个开篇 六、课后练习 请你运用今天学习的开篇方法,为中考作文《这就是幸福》写两个不同的开头. personal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussion, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflection and further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of practical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a qualified member of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do try to do, to set an example. Two lies in the doing. To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is the focus of this study and education and essential point. A qualified party members not only to watch his Constitution Party rules and talk to learn how, through, dark and light, and also what does he end up doing, is not a unity. This study and education, is essential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. In learning education in the, each members are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation discipline qualified; told moral, and has conduct, do conduct qualified; told dedication, and has as, do play role qualified" "four told four has" this put ruler, often measure himself, view himself, transformation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. To firm to to Central par, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political 第八讲:写一个给你留下深刻印象的人 教学目的: 1、培养学生运用所学的动作、语言、心理活动等方法，描写一个人。 2、让学生掌握写人的基本方法。 教学过程: 一、提问:生活中哪个人给你留下的印象最深,想一想，这个人为什么会给 你留下深刻的印象。 二、写作注意点: 1、要适当地描写人物的外貌 2、要简要地点明你与他的关系 3、要选择一件具体的事例来表现这个人的特点 4、要对这个人的语言、动作、神态和心理活动进行描写 三、评一评:通过修改前和修改后的片段，让学生评一评哪一种好。 四、练习:拿起笔来，把给你留下深刻印象的人写下来。 personal and collective learning on your own, combining learning reading and discussion, read, learn, and understanding of the original principles, focused learning around topics discussion, ongoing positive and negative type education. Members should close their own thoughts, work, real life, comparing reflection and further improve the pertinence and effectiveness of learning, continue to unlock the buttons, correct wrong, think of practical realization in mind, party rules discipline, firm and correct political orientation, develop discipline, and being a qualified member of the adherence to the Constitution Party rules and political discipline. Second, "to do" as the key, seriously, do try to do, to set an example. Two lies in the doing. To learn to do, and the unity of knowledge, qualified party member, is the focus of this study and education and essential point. A qualified party members not only to watch his Constitution Party rules and talk to learn how, through, dark and light, and also what does he end up doing, is not a unity. This study and education, is essential to enhance the party's political awareness, awareness of overall, core, par. In learning education in the, each members are to control "told political, and has faith, do political qualified; told rules, and has discipline, do implementation discipline qualified; told moral, and has conduct, do conduct qualified; told dedication, and has as, do play role qualified" "four told four has" this put ruler, often measure himself, view himself, transformation himself, with actual action reflected learn of effectiveness, and reflected belief faith of power. To firm to to Central par, to XI General Secretary par, to party of theory, and route, and approach par, to Central of the decision deployment par, strongly maintenance Central of authority, maintenance XI General Secretary this core, strongly obey Central of concentrated unified led, in thought, and political