短句变长句

短句变长句 六级写作拉分技巧 - 简单句变成长难句 More and more 1) a. More and more people now prefer to stay at home and watch TV. b. People in ever increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch TV. 2) a. More and more people who become more and more rich can afford a motorcycle. b. The growing number of people who become increasingly rich can now afford a motorcycle. 3) a. More and more teenagers smoke cigarettes in recent years. b. Teenage smoking is on the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline in recent years. 4) a. More and more teachers are needed with the development of economy. b. There is an increasing demand for teachers with the development of economy. 5) a. More and more trees have disappeared in the city. b. There is a sharp decline in the number of trees in the city. 简单变长难七大法则: 1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适 用于有争议性的主题. [1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently. [2]. When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...) [3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether..... 1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 . [1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/worldwide concern. [2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ...has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention) 1-3 观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法. [1]. Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/popular than... [2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that... [3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognation ot the necessity to...... Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ...... [4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that....... 1-4 引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观 点! [1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon.This remark has been shared by more and more people . "Education is not complete with gradulation." Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opnion. [2]."........." How often we hear such statements/words like thoses/this . In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this "......". 1-5 比较法 ------ 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论 的观点. [1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... . [2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new . 1-6 故事法 ---- 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题. [1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenemenon of ... has aroused public concern. [2]. I have a friend who ... Should he .... ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life. [3]. Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance now. 1-7 问题法 ----- 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题. Should/What ...... ? Options of ... vary greatly , some ..., others ...But in my opinion , ...... .