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null周测1周测1答案BAADA CCCBA BDADB 16. had forgotten 17. unconscious 18. to 19. to cheer 20. which 21. them 22. others 23. the 24. In 25. that 阅读 CDBDD DACDA DADBC CCCBD EDCFA 周考一英语作文讲解周考一英语作文讲解基础写作写作步骤基础写作写作步骤1. 确定时态，人称 2.把内容分割成5句（方便自己写句子为好） 3.套用句型（关注句子间的连贯，适当加入不同的过渡词） 4.找出短语和词块，然后翻译 5. 检查（拼写，语法，单复数等）基础写作基础写作需要表达的要点如下： 1.近年来，许多家长在新学年花大量金钱为学生购买电子产品，尤其是大一新生。 2.家长用来购买电子产品的钱高达数万元。 3. 那些钱主要用来购买笔记本电脑，手机，MP3 播放器。 4.学生购买这些电子产品的原因是因为人们生活水平的不断提高和有些学生害怕丢面子儿强迫父母买。 5.我觉得这是一种不健康的社会风气，不应该提倡。 6 .学生购物时应考虑家里的家庭收入。null根据逻辑关系对要点进行整合，并考虑用高级句型（如各种从句，非谓语动词等）。 2.家长用来购买电子产品的钱高达数万元。 3. 那些钱主要用来购买笔记本电脑，手机，MP3 播放器。 思考：这两句之间有什么样的逻辑关系，可以怎样把它连接成一个句子？ 提示：定语从句null4.学生购买这些电子产品的原因是因为人们生活水平的不断提高和有些学生害怕丢面子儿强迫父母买。 思考：英语中用来表达原因的经典句型是什么？在大家都可能用到经典句型的情况下怎样做到与众不同？ 提示： The reason why... is that ...and that ... The phenomenon/trend may result from .... It is because of the ...and that ....that...(强调句型） so that从句 null5.我觉得这是一种不健康的社会风气，不应该提倡。 6 .学生购物时应考虑家里的家庭收入。 思考：这两句之间有什么样的逻辑关系，可以用什么样的连接词连接？ 提示：轻微的转折和对比 instead, 翻译短语或者词块翻译短语或者词块花大量金钱为学生购买电子产品： sb spent some money on sth/in doing sth It take sb some money to do sth sth cost sb some money A large amount of money is spent on .../ The big money goes for /sb poured money into sth null高达： The total money of ...reached ... .The money for ...is as high as ... the money sometimes gets/adds up to ... The money spent on ...is as much as .... 生活水平的不断提高: rising living standard/As people‘s living standard continues to rise, / the standard of living is constantly improving. Now our living standard has been raised,/ Since living standards have improved, null丢面子: lose face/embarrassed/humiliated /dishonorably 强迫父母买： forcesb. to do sth 或 force sb. into doing sth./sb was compelled to do so by absolute unnecessity 社会风气： social trend null不应该提倡： discourage/should not advocate/promote/encourage 考虑家里的家庭收入: take sth into consideration/account null请大声朗读范文，体会文章使用了什么句型，用了什么过渡词？null In recent years ,many parents spent a large amount of money buying electronic products for their children at the beginning of the new school year, especially parents of college freshmen. Some parents even spend tens of thousands yuan on items like the laptop, the cellphone,and the MP3 player. nullOne cause of the trend is the rising living standard. However, some students force their parents to buy these electronic products for them just because they don’t want to lose facenull. As a student, I think we should discourage this unhealthy social trend and take our family income into consideration when buying things. [写作内容] 1．以约30词概括上文的主要内容； [写作内容] 1．以约30词概括上文的主要内容； The author has been devoting most of his time to reading because he thinks it is a way to relax and explore the world. Reading has been not only his hobby but also his need.正文存在的问题正文存在的问题1。没有认真地审题（中文提示） 2。段落主题句不明显，内容空洞 3 . 兴趣爱好狭窄，空洞导致内容雷同 null2．以约120词就介绍你的爱好，内容包括： (1)你的兴趣爱好是什么？； (2)你为什么有此兴趣爱好； (3)你从该兴趣爱好中获得什么收益。 null Everyone has a hobby. My hobby is writing. (I have been spending most of my spare time writing.) I love writing since I think it is a good way to express my feelings and record what happens in my life . ( When I have a new idea or understanding, I will write it down. When I see something that touches me, I will write it down. ) 12null Writing helps me relax after a day’s study. It is also a great pleasure to reread what I have written after some time. ( Sometimes I post my writing to the local newspaper. Some of my essays have been published, which greatly encourages me . ) Writing brings me a lot of hapiness and it has been a part of my life. null请把范文抄写在笔记本上！