2012-12-16 机经
describe a person who is important to you and why. give the details and examples to support your idea. 15” 45”
Format: topic sentence
description ( be short)
reasons
details
example
My bungee jumping coach
topic: 1. My bungee jumping coach is the most important person in my life.( 开门见山,开头直接给主题,不要说I think, in my opinion, as far as I am concerned...)
2. Compare to all the people around me, the most important person in my life is my bungee jumping coach.
3. When it comes to the question who is the most important person to me, the first one comes to my mind is my bungee jumping coach.
description:(不要乱描述,主要集中在人物性格和年龄,外貌等)
helpful = supportive
reliable : 可靠的。
kind - hearted, warm - hearted, nice = hospitable (热心的,好客的)
caring(会关心人的) = attentive
careful (仔细的)= considerate
strong = tough (难搞的,内心强大的)
delicate and graceful: beautiful , pretty, nice
贱: mean=bitchy=gossip
He is of vital importance to me because he is supportive and reliable and not only imparted(传授 V.) the skills about bungee jumping but also encouraged me when I was in trouble.
· be of + 名词 = 具备某种特点
he is of happiness.
Details and examples:
For example: 烂爆了!
1. Memory brings me back to 2 years ago,..........
2. I still remember it was 2 years ago,......
3. I still remember it was a sunny day,.........
4. I used to be a member of a bungee jumping club.......
My bungee jumping coach is the most important person in my life.
He is of vital importance to me because he is supportive and reliable and not only imparted(传授 V.) the skills about bungee jumping but also encouraged me when I was in trouble. Memory brings me back to 2 years ago. I used to be a member of a bungee jumping club. when I hit my first try, I was so nervous and the stress almost killed me. (because= for =since= as) For the place I was standing on was 120 meters high and I felt that my legs were even quivering when seeing the rivers under my feet. It was my coach who gave me the confidence at that time. He said :“ don’t worry, you can do it. Life waxes and wanes, after the hurricane comes the rainbow. Take the challenge and beat it” .His encouraging words eased(减缓,舒缓,变轻松 V.) my intension/pressure. After counting down: 3, 2, 1. I really made my first jump succeeded.
Therefore, I really appreciate(感谢,欣赏) what he has done for me.
city:
NAME: sf , la, bali, san diego
LV a costal / inland/ industrial,agricultural/ middle-sized/ international metropolis 大都市/ port city
countryside with fields and gardens, a flock of sheep(羊群),a herd of cattle (牛群, a school of fish, rosemary, chrysanthemum , cherry bloosom,lavender.
a tract of land covered with lavender
with a large population.
and locates on the east of China. center of .....USA
,which enjoys a high reputation(享有很高的声誉) in terms of (就。。。而言,在。。。方面)its food,entertainment and night life.
Nanchang is an inland city, locating in Jiangxi Province in the soutern part of China with a large population. I love this city first, beacuse of its food = it enjoys a high reputation in terms of the food there. For instance, if you visit this city, I strongly recommend the BBQ Fish to you. Once you try it.=...... it will brings you into a world out of this world. Second, because of its wonderful entertainment. if you are a shopping nut, the international shopping certer/ mall in the downtown should be your choice.
内容:
衣食住行文化:
shopping: mall, shopping nut, shopping festival= just Like the black friday in the U.S. ALL the things that the girls crazy about are in discount.
食物: delicious(少用!)
Yummy= tasty
colour, aroma, taste
long-lasting flavor
lemon chicken/ sushi/ chicken wrap/ taco / burrito(墨西哥卷) / Roast Duck/ hotpot/ 虾饺 /
hawaii pizza with pineapple and ham as topping
homemade food, junk food, fast food, italian food
silky , chunky, creamy
eveytime I have it, it brings me into a world out of this world.
it reminds me about the days in my childhood.
I feel that life can not be more wonderful.
住:
if you are a traveller, you can choose
drive-inn.
motel-inn
24/7 all the motel-inns in this city work 24 hours and 7 days a week.
and rent an apartment, buy a house, villa with swimming pool and backyard and my own lawn.
cozy , warm and lazy。。。 24 hours 7/11
10 minutes walk to my campus
you can enjoy the spare time alone without feeling lonely with high-speed internet on your hand.
coffee machine... espresso and cappuccino
holiday village
sunshine and beach
breeze on my face
cabin 小木屋 on the sides of the beach
waves strike the shore
beach
golden beach
sea gull :
sea food: crab,shrimp, oyster, lobster, tunas,
salmon , neat and fresh and healthy
make me relaxed and peaceful
· UNDER the near-horizon sunset, you lie on the beach with the small tides touchs you bare feet,
I still remember that it was a starry night, the sky is just like the velvet (天鹅绒)hanging there. Standing in front of the Sea, I can see,on the
other side of the blue ocean, the sketch(剪影) of the reef and rock on the beach. I can feel the moist air, smell the salty water and grab a floating sands.
small - choir
flute,violin,
symphony 9th
Bach , fugue ---- classic music
the beats,the tones ,the rhythm and the oceanic melody brings me into a world out of this world.
行:
方便,效率,便宜
subway, bart ,muni (公交车)(San francisco)
dart (dallas)
5 minutes‘ walk to the subway station,
effective
high- effeciency
cheap- economical
Farrary(double-check)
from the very east to the very west of the city。
flat , skateboard
rolly and hilly, auto
文化
statue of the Buddhua
worship
EVENT:
例题: describe one event that is most effective/ impressive to you happend in your city. give the reasons and details and example.
Topic sentence: The most impressive event that is happening to my city is the subway construction.
Reason:It is of vital importance to the city. Because first, after the construction, residents in this city would enjoy a better and more effective life. Now it spends me one hour from my campus to my home. However, when the construction is completed(完成 V.), it will be shortened to 10 minutes.
second, when the subway is fully used. It would make the environment healthier than before. Because if more people choose to use subway for commute instead of autos, the carbon footprints of the city would be sharply reduced. So(thus, hence, therefore, accordingly), the air will become fresher and cleaner.