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外贸业务全套英文邮件
第一步
1. 向顾客推销商品
Dear Sir: May 1, 2001
Inquiries regarding our new product, the Deer Mountain Bike, have been coming in from
all parts of the world. Reports from users confirm what we knew before it was put on the
market - that it is the best mountain bike available. Enclosed is our brochure.
Yours faithfully
2. 提出询价
Dear Sir: Jun.1, 2001
We received your promotional letter and brochure today. We believe that your would do
well here in the U.S.A. Kindly send us further details of your prices and terms of sale. We
ask you to make every effort to quote at competitive prices in order to secure our business.
We look forward to hearing from you soon..
Truly
3. 迅速提供报价
Dear Sir: June 4, 2001
Thank you for your inquiry of June the 1st concerning the Deer Mountain Bike. It gives us
great pleasure to send along the technical information on the model together with the
catalog and price list. After studying the prices and terms of trade, you will understand
why we are working to capacity to meet the demand. We look forward to the opportunity of
being of service of you.
交易的契机
4. 如何讨价还价
Dear Sir: June 8, 2001
We have received your price lists and have studied it carefully. However, the price level in your quotation is
too high for this market, If you are prepared to grant us a discount of 10% for a quantity of 200, we would agree
to your offer. You should note that some price cut will justify itself by an increase in business. We hope to hear
from you soon.
Yours truly
5-1 同意进口商的还价
Dear Sirs: June 12, 2001
Thank you for your letter of June the 8th. We have accepted your offer on the terms
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suggested. Enclosed our will find a special price list that we believe will meet your ideas
of prices. You should note that the recent advances in raw materials have affected the cost
of this product unfavorably. However, for your order we have kept our prices down.
Sincerely
5-2 拒绝进口商的还价
Dear Sirs: June 12, 2001
Thank you for your letter of June the 8th. We regret that we cannot meet your terms. We
must point out that the falling market here leaves us little or no margin of profit. We must
ask you for a keener price in respect to future orders. At present the best discount offered
for a quantity of 200 is 5%. Our current situation leaves us little room to bargain. We hope
you will reconsider the offer.
Truly
6. 正式提出订单
Dear Sir: June 15, 2001
We have discussed your offer of 5% and accept it on the terms quoted. We are prepared to
give your product a trial, provided you can guarantee delivery on or before the 20th of
September. The enclosed order is given strictly on this condition. We reserve the right of
refusal of delivery and/or cancellation of the order after this date.
Truly
7. 确认订单
Dear Sir: June 20, 2001
Thank you very much for your order of June 15 for 200 Deer Mountain Bikes. We will make
every possible effort to speed up delivery. We will advise you of the date of dispatch. We
are at your service at all times.
Sincerely
8. 请求开立信用证
Gentlemen: June 18, 2001
Thank you for your order No. 599. In order to execute it, please open an irrevocable L/C
for the amount of US$ 50,000 in our favor. This account shall be available until Sep. 20.
Upon arrival of the L/C we will pack and ship the order as requested.
Sincerely
9. 通知已开立信用证
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Dear Sir: June 24, 2001
Thank you for your letter of June 18 enclosing details of your terms. According to your
request for opening an irrevocable L/C, we have instructed the Beijing City Commercial Bank
to open a credit for US$ 50,000 in your favor, valid until Sep. 20. Please advise us by fax
when the order has been executed.
Sincerely
10. 请求信用证延期
Dear Sir: Sep. 1, 2001
We are sorry to report that in spite of our effort, we are unable to guarantee shipment
by the agreed date due to a strike at our factory. We are afraid that your L/C will be
expire before shipment. Therefore, please explain our situation to your customers and secure
their consent to extend the L/C to Sept.30.
Sincerely
11. 同意更改信用证
Gentlemen: Sept. 5, 2001
We received your letter today and have informed our customers of your situation. As
requested, we have instructed the Beijing City Commercial Bank to extend the L/C up to and
including September 30. Please keep us abreast of any new development.
Sincerely
通知已开立信用证
Dear Sir: June 24, 2001
Thank you for your letter of June 18 enclosing details of your terms. According to your
request for opening an irrevocable L/C, we have instructed the Beijing City Commercial Bank
to open a credit for US$ 50,000 in your favor, valid until Sep. 20. Please advise us by fax
when the order has been executed.
Sincerely
回复客户投诉的信函范文
客户投诉我们的同事工作效率和理解能力低下:
Michael:
I appreciate if u get involve with Jane, she is not following po's instructions and get
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back to us in the same subject with difference. Last week was Vet certificates, then Bill
of ladings explanations, now is packaging when we are attaching all e-mail's for you and
her reference which is been discussed to be use on 3 months. We want to continue and trust
in oiur relationship but it's issues which has to be stop.
I will appreciate if you come back to us with a determination for the future.
Thanks,
第一次草拟的回复如下(没发给客人):
1 Re. the balance of packaging
It’s our fault that we did not explain well and cause the confusion.
When we advised 3 months in the early email, we meant to ship these packaging in 3
months, and when we talked about 1 month, we meant to receive your order for these
packaging in 1 month, but the ship date can be Nov.
Pls advise if you will be able to place the order in 1 month or you need more time. We
will also improve and take care in future communication. Thank you.
2 Re. The communication efficiency
We review the emails of these days. For the email back and forth, we think the most
important reason is because we do not know well about your company internal organization and
each person’s work scope, so sometimes we do not address the right person to clarify our
questions, and the message we received from different people is not consistent. We got this
problem when we got back to you for Vet and BL.
Pls advise your company internal organization’s function, and we can contact the right
person in future communication. Thank you.
Apology again for any inconvenience. We will take care and improve our communication in
future.
修改以后,最终发给客人的版本:
1 Re. the balance of packaging
Sori for inconsistent info we provided and confuse you.
When we advised 3 months in the early email, we meant to ship these packaging in 3
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months, and when we talked about 1 month, we meant to receive your order for these
packaging in 1 month, but the ship date can be Nov or later.
Pls advise if you will be able to place the order in 1 month? We will provide consistent
info and prevent confusion in future. Thank you.
2 Re: The communication efficiency
We did notice it take too many back and forth communication on B/L & Vet, it sounds to
me that our people don’t know well about your internal organization, we address question
to improper people which come back inaccurate info and bring confusion to us, this create
lots of unnecessary back and forth communication & make both parties loss efficiency.
In order to improve communication efficiency, could you pls advise who we should
address for below area;
1. PO placement, PI (We notice both Mislay and Angela place Pos.)
2. Any question related to PO
3. logistic & Customs clearance, including import permit, Shipping document / Vet
Document, etc.
4. New product development
5. Packaging & artwork approval
6. Production sample approval
7. Accounting (We suppose we should contact Michael Reid, pls double cfm)
Again, apology for inconvenience. We will improve communication efficiency in future.
• 外贸函电范文汇总
外贸函电
写基本原则
一、Courtesy 礼貌
语言要有礼且谦虚,及时地回信也是礼貌的
现。
例如:
We have received with many thanks your letter of 20 May, and we take the pleasure of sending
you our latest catalog. We wish to draw your attention to a special offer which we have made
in it.
You will be particularly interested in a special offer on page 5 of the latest catalog
enclosed, which you requested in your letter of 20 May.
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二、Consideration 体谅
写信时要处处从对方的角度去考虑有什么需求,而不是从自身出发,语气上更尊重对方。
例如:
“You earn 2 percent discount when you pay cash. We will send you the brochure next month.
”就比 “We allow 2 percent discount for cash payment. We won't be able to send you the
brochure this month.” 要好。
三、Completeness 完整
一封商业信函应概况了各项必需的事项,如邀请信应说明时间、地点等,确忌寄出含糊不清的信件。
四、Clarity 清楚
意思表达明确,要注意:
(一)避免用词错误:
例如:As to the steamers sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco, we have bimonthly direct
services.
此处 bimonthly 有歧义:可以是 twice a month 或者 once two month.故读信者就迷惑了,可以改写为:
1.We have two direct sailings every month from Hong Kong to San Francisco.
2.We have semimonthly direct sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco.
3.We have a direct sailing from Hong Kong to San Francisco.
(二)注意词语所放的位置:
例如:
1. We shall be able to supply 10 cases of the item only.
2. We shall be able to supply 10 cases only of the item.
前者则有两种商品以上的含义。
(三)注意句子的结构:
例如:
1.We sent you 5 samples yesterday of the goods which you requested in your letter of May 20
by air.
2.We sent you, by air, 5 samples of the goods which you requested in your letter of May 20.
五、Conciseness 简洁
(一)避免废话连篇:
例如:
1.We wish to acknowledge receipt of your letter...可改为:We appreciate your letter...
2.Enclosed herewith please find two copies of...可改为: We enclose two copies of...
(二)避免不必要的重复:
(三)短句、单词的运用:
Enclosed herewith----->enclosed
at this time----->now
due to the fact that----->because
a draft in the amount of $1000----->a draft for $1000
六、Concreteness 具体
七、Correctness 正确
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外贸函电:约定
约定
Appointments
Dear Mr. / Ms.,
Mr. John Green, our General Manager, will be in Paris from June 2 to 7 and would like to
come and see you, say, on June 3 at 2.00 p.m. about the opening of a sample room there.
Please let us know if the time is convenient for you. If not, what time you would suggest.
Yours faithfully
约定
尊敬的先生/小姐,
我们的总经理约翰格林将于六月 2 日到 7 日在巴黎,有关在那开样品房的事宜,他会于六月 3 日下午 2:
00 点
拜访您。
请告知这个时间对您是否方便。如不方便,请建议具体时间。
您诚挚的
外贸英语函电范文
外贸函电
Foreign Economic Relations & Trade Committee of What City
Address: 地址略-------
Tel: 电话号码 Fax: 传真号码 ________
To: Ms Jaana Pekkala, Consultant for China Swiss Organization for Facilitating Investments
Fax: +41-1-249 31 33
Total pages of this fax: 2
_________________________
Dear Ms Jaana Pekkala,
We understand from The Swiss Business Guide for China that your organization is helping
Swiss firms in seeking opportunities of investing in China and business cooperating with
Chinese partners. To establish business relations with your organization and attract Swiss
companies' investment here in What, We write to introduce our city, the city of What, as one
of the open cities in Liaoning Province, China and also ourselves, Foreign Economic
Relations & Trade Committee of What, as a What government initiative to facilitate business
relationship with foreign companies.
Our committee provides advice and assistance to What firms seeking to export their services,
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goods to foreign areas and import goods and services abroad. We also assist Whatfirms in
establishment of joint ventures and carry the procedures for examination and approval of
joint ventures and foreign sole investment firms. Our Committee can provide What companies
with information on the world market and specific commercial opportunities as well as
organize trade missions, seminars and business briefings.
Our committee facilitates and encourages investment from other countries into targeted
sectors of What economy and maintains active promotion of What through its network of
contacts in domestic and abroad areas.
Nowadays, we are seeking foreign investment in the field of capital construction, such as
improving of tap water system and highway construction. Also, we are setting up a tannery
zone in Tong'erpu, the largest leather clothes producing and wholesaling base in North
China. We invite Swiss companies with most favorable polices to set up their firms in any
form on tanning, leather processing and sewage treatment.
Any information on investment projects into What and on business cooperation with firms in
What is highly appreciated and will be pass on to anyone who have approached us with
interest in similar project. You are also invited to our city for investigation and business
tour.
Should you have any questions, please fell free to contact us.
Thank you for your attention and looking forward to your prompt reply.
Sincerely yours,
Qiming Di
Commercial Assistant
For Foreign Economic Relations & Trade Committee of What City
外贸英语函电范文:邀请与答复
外贸函电:邀请与答复
Invitation and Reply
Dear Mr. / Ms,
We should like to invite your Corporation to attend the 2000 International Fair which will
be held from August 29 to September 4 at the above address. Full details on the Fair will be
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sent in a week.
We look forward to hearing from you soon, and hope that you will be able to attend.
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,
在上述地址,我们想请贵公司参加于八月二十九日到九月四日举办的 2000 国际商品交易会,关于交易会
的
详情我们一周内将寄给你。希望不久能收到你的来信,并能来参加。
您诚挚的
肯定答复
Dear Mr. / Ms,
Thank you for your letter of June 28 inviting our corporation to participate in the 2000
International Fair. We are very pleased to accept and will plan to display our electrical
appliances as we did in previous years.
Mr. Li will be in your city from July 2 to 7 to make specific arrangements and would very
much appreciate your assistance.
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,
感谢六月二十八日来信邀请我们公司参加 2000 国际商品交易会。我们乐于参加并
展示我们前几年生
产
的电子设备。李先生将于七月二日至七日去你市做具体安排,非常感谢你的协助。
你诚挚的
否定的答复
Dear Mr. / Ms,
Thank you very much for your invitation to attend the 2000 International Fair. As we are
going to open a repair shop in your city at that time, we are sorry that we shall not be
able to come.
We hope to see you on some future occasion.
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,
非常感谢您邀请我们参加 2000 国际商品交易会。由于我们将于同一时间到你市新开一家维修店,非常抱
歉
我们不能前去。
希望以后在某些场合见到您。
您诚挚的
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外贸函电:祝贺信
Congratulation letter 1
Dear Mr. / Ms,
On the occasion of the 35th anniversary of your National Day, please accept our heartiest
congratulations. May the trade connections between our countries continue to develop with
each passing day!
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐,
值此国庆三十五周年之际,请接受我们最真诚的祝贺。愿我们两国之间的贸易联系持续发展。
你诚挚的
Congratulation letter 2
Dear Mr. Minister
Allow me to convey my congratulations on your promotion to Minister of Trade. I am delighted
that many years service you have given to your country should have been recognized and
appreciated.
We wish you success in your new post and look forward to closer cooperation with you in the
development of trade between our two countries.
Sincerely
尊敬的部长先生,
请允许我向您升任贸易部长表示祝贺。多年来你对国家的贡献被认可,欣赏,我非常高兴。我们祝愿您在
新的职位取得成功,期待我们两国在贸易发展上进一步合作。
诚挚的
回信
Dear Mr. / Ms,
Thank you for your letter conveying congratulations on my appointment. I wish also to thank
you for the assistance you have given me in my work and look forward to better cooperation
in the future.
Sincerely
尊敬的先生/小姐,
感谢你来信对我的任命表达的祝贺。我也感谢您对我的工作给予的支持,并期望未来能有更好的合作。
诚挚的
外贸函电:咨询
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Consultation
Dear Mr. / Ms,
We are much concerned that your sales in recent months have fallen considerably. At first we
thought this might be due to a slack market, but on looking into the matter more closely, we
find that the general trend of trade during this period has been upwards.
It is possible that you are facing difficulties of which we are not aware. If so, we would
like to know what we can do to help. We, therefore, look forward to receiving from you a
detailed report on the situation and suggestions as to how we may help in restoring our
sales to their former level.
Yours faithfully
咨询
尊敬的先生/小姐:
我们非常关心你方销售近几个月大幅度下降。开始我们以为是市场疲软,但仔细研究问题,我们发现过去
这段时间贸易的总趋势是上升的。有可能你方面临我方还不知道的困难,如是这样,我方想知道是否能帮
助什么。我们期望收到关于问题的详细
,及建议我们怎样帮助才能把销售恢复到原来的水平。
您诚挚的
建立与发展关系函电
们从我驻巴基斯坦使馆商务参赞处得悉贵公司的名称和地址,现借此机会与你方通信,意在建立友好业务
关系。
我们是一家国营公司,专门经营台布出口业务。我们能接受顾客的来样定货,来样中可具体需要产品
的花样图案,规格及包装装潢的要求。
为使你方对我各类台布有大致的了解,我们另航寄最新的目录供参考。如果你方对产品有兴趣,请尽
快通知我方。一俟收到你方具体询盘,即寄送报价单和样本。
盼早复。
SPECIMEN:INTRODUCING BUSINESS OPERATION
Dear Sirs,
RE:TABLECLOTH
We have your name and adress from the Commercial Office of Chinese Embassy in
Pakistan.We take this opportunity to write to you with a view to set up friend business
relations with you.
We are a state-owned company dealing specially with the export of tablecloth.We are in
a position to accept orders according to the customer's spmples.In the customer's
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spmples,request about the assorted pattern,specification and package of the needed goods can
be indicated particularly.
In order to give you a gengral idea of various kinds of the table-cloth we are
handling,we are airmailing you under separate cover our latest catalogue for your
reference.Please let us know immediately if you are interested in our products.We will send
you our price list and sample to you as soon as we receive your specific inquiry.
Looking forward to your early reply,we are.
Yours faithfully
范文 2 求建立直接贸易关系
寻求建立贸易关系
我们和____交往多年,承他向我们推荐了贵公司。
目前,我们专门从事____地区的贸易,但尚未与贵公司有贸易交往。
由于我们对推销____感兴趣,故特致函,以求能早日与贵方建立直接的贸易关系。
我们期待贵方能寄来你们有兴趣出售的各种_____(货物)的详细说明和外销价格。我们将愉快地调
查我方市场可能销售的情况。
另一方面,若贵公司愿从我方购买产品,承蒙关照,请将你们感兴趣的货物逐项列表,一并寄来,以
便视我方供货能力,向贵公司提供一切所需的资料。
盼早日赐复。
范文 3 接受推荐客户
同意建立业务关系
谢谢贵公司 5 月 7 日来函,非常感谢____向你推荐了我们。承作为_____的出口商,你愿意与我们建
立
直接贸易关系,这恰巧与我们的愿望一致。我们非常愉快地答复你对____所需要的资料。所附上的商品样
车,将会给你提供一套完整的各种货物的详细说明和出售价格。
目前,我们对混纺人造纤维感兴趣,如蒙贵公司寄来商品目录、样车以及有关需要的资料,便于我们
熟悉贵公司的供货用料和质量情况,将不胜感激。
我们保证,如果贵公司货物的质量及价格均具有竞争性,我方将大量订货。
欣然等候贵方通知。
范文 4 恢复业务往来
恢复业务往