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2020届高三英语短文改错汇编短文改错1Iusedtopaylittleattentiontotheimportantofbreakfast.Ioftenstudiedlateintothenightandchoosetoskipbreakfast.BythiswayIcouldhaveafewextraminutesinbed.Felthungryinclass,Ifounditdifficulttoconcentrateonmylessons.What’sworse,Iwasevenfailedinoneofthemostimportantexam.Now,Ihaverealizedthatbreakfast,thatcanprovide30percentofthewholeday’senergy,playsessentialrole.Therefore,itisnecessaryforwestudentstostartourdaywitharegularlybreakfast.短文改错1答案解析：1.important改为名词形式importance;2.choose改为chose。时态与studied一致，示过去的动作，用一般过去时。3.By改为In。固定搭配，inthisway表示“以这种方式”。4.Felt改为Feeling。非谓语动词做原因状语，与句子主语I之间是主动关系，用V-ing。5.去掉was。主语I与谓语failed之间是主动。6.exam改为exams。oneof+名词复数，表示“最重要的考试之一”。7.that改为which。which引导非限制性定语从句，代替先行词breakfast。8.plays后面添加an。固定搭配。“起......作用”“playa/an...role(in)”,essential是元音发音开头，用不定冠词an。9.we改为us。we和students是同位语，介词for后面用宾格。10.regularly改为regular。形容词修饰名词breakfast。短文改错2Withtheenvironmentpollutionbecamemoreandmoreserious,everyoneshouldacttosavetheearth.Toprotectourenvironment,therearemanythingswecandoit.First,itisofgreatimportanttoraisetheawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Addition,wecanbeginfromverylittlethingsinyourdailylife.Forexample,weshouldnotlitterandspitorthegarbageshouldbesorted.Finally,moreandmorepeopleshouldbeinvolvingintheactivity.Weshoulduserecycledbagsinsteadofplasticones.Andridingbicyclesisgoodchoice.Notonlyshouldwegogreen,whatcallsonustouseenvironment-friendlyproducts,butalsoweshouldpersuademorepeoplearoundustodeveloprenewableresource.短文改错2【参考答案】Withtheenvironmentpollutionbecamemoreandmoreserious,everyoneshouldacttosavethebecomingearth.Toprotectourenvironment,therearemanythingswecandoi∕t.First,itisofgreatimportantto删除it       importanceraisetheawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Addition,wecanbeginfromverylittlethingsinyourAdditionally               ourdailylife.Forexample,weshouldnotlitterandspitorthegarbageshouldbesorted.Finally,moreandandmorepeopleshouldbeinvolvingintheactivity.Weshoulduserecycledbagsinsteadofplasticbags.involvedAndridingbicyclesis∧goodchoice.Notonlyshouldwegogreen,whatcallsonustousea                 whichenvironment-friendlyproducts,butalsoweshouldpersuademorepeoplearoundustodeveloprenewableresource.Resources短文改错3Ifeltsoproudlywhenmyteamwontheicehockeycompetition.ItmademefeelthatIcanachieveanything.Onlythreeyearsago,Iwasterrifyingofwalkingorskatingonice.Todealwiththis,Idecidedtojoininaskatingclub.MyteacherwasgreatandafterIknewit,Iwasabletoskate.Hethenpersuadedmetryicehockey.Ilovedoneandwassoonpractisewithmylocalteamalmosteveryevening.We'renowtrainingfornationalcompetitionsandhopetobechampionsomeday.Butmyfinalgoalistobeaicehockeyteacher.短文改错3Ifeltsoproudlywhenmyteamwontheicehockeycompetition.ItmademefeelthatIcanproud                                                         couldachieveanything.Onlythreeyearsago,Iwasterrifyingofwalkingorskatingonice.Todealwithterrifiedthis,Idecidedtojoininaskatingclub.MyteacherwasgreatandafterIknewit,Iwasabletobeforeskate.Hethenpersuadedme∧tryicehockey.Ilovedoneandwassoonpractisewithmylocalto         it       practis(c)ingteamalmosteveryevening.We’renowtrainingfornationalcompetitionsandhopetobechampionsomeday.Butmyfinalgoalistobeaicehockeyteacher.Champions              an短文改错4Adetectiverecentlyfoundthatawell-dressedwomanalwayswentintoalargestoreinMondaymornings.OneMonday,therewerefewpeopleintheshopthanusualwhenthewomancamein,soitwaseasierforthedetectivetoobservehim.ThewomanchoseoneofthemostexpensivedressandhandittoashopassistantTheshopassistantwrappeditupforherasquicklyaspossibly.Thenthewomanputtheparcelunderherarmandwalkedouttheshopsecretlywithoutpayforit.Whenshewasarresting,thedetectivefoundoutthattheshopassistant“gave”hermothertoafreedressonceaweek.短文改错4【参考答案】1.inMondaymorning in→on        2.fewpeople few→fewer3.toobservehim him→her4.dress→dresses5.handitto  hand→handed6.possibly→possible7.walkedout后加of8.pay→paying9.arresting→arrested10.去掉to短文改错5Theotherday，wemovedtothenewschoolyard，whereliesinthefarnorthofthecity.Wewereallonhighspirits.Itismuchbigthantheoldone.Theclassroomsarebrightandclean.Wehavealotofmodernequipment，makingconvenientforstudentstolearneverysubject.Nowwecanhavealotofafter­schoolactivityonthenewplayground.Ourteachersoftenplaythebasketballandsoccertogetherwithus.Asspringapproached，theflowersnewlyplantingintheyardhavejustcomeout.Withsuchmanygreentreesandfragrantflowersaround，wefeelitlesshardlytostudyandourschoollifemoreenjoyable.短文改错5【答案】　Theotherday，wemovedtothenewschoolyard，liesinthefarnorthofthecity.Wewereallhighspirits.Itismuchthantheoldone.Theclassroomsarebrightandclean.Wehavealotofmodernequipment，makingconvenientforstudentstolearneverysubject.Nowwecanhavealotofafter­schoolonthenewplayground.Ourteachersoftenplaybasketballandsoccertogetherwithus.Asspring，theflowersnewlyintheyardhavejustcomeout.Withmanygreentreesandfragrantflowersaround，wefeelitlesstostudyandourschoollifemoreenjoyable.短文改错6TheMoments(朋友圈)sectionofWeChathasbecomethepopularpartofthesocialnetworkingplatform.Wecanshareeverythingabouttheirlifeonitwithourfriend.Manyteenagers,however,chosetokeeptheirparentsouttheirMoments.Theyarguethatiftheirparentsgetinvolved,andtheywillfeelupset.AsfarasIamconcerning,IfeelhappilywhenmyparentscommentonmypostsinmyMoments.Itshowstheirloveandcareforme.What'smore,shutthemoffmaymakethegenerationgapbiggerandbigger,wheninvitingtheminwouldhelpuscommunicatebetterandfeelclosertoeachotherthanbefore.短文改错6TheMoments(朋友圈)sectionofWeChathasbecomepopularpartofthesocialnetworkingplatform.Wecanshareeverythingaboutlifeonitwithour.Manyteenagers,however,tokeeptheirparentsouttheirMoments.Theyarguethatiftheirparentsgetinvolved,theywillfeelupset.AsfarasIam，IfeelwhenmyparentscommentonmypostsinmyMoments.Itshowstheirloveandcareforme.What'smore,themoffmaymakethegenerationgapbiggerandbigger,invitingtheminwouldhelpuscommunicatebetterandfeelclosertoeachotherthanbefore.短文改错7【答案】　ThismorningIhappenedtomeetaforeignerwhenIwastakingwalkinthepark.ItwasagoodchanceformetopractisemyspokenEnglish,Iwentuptohim,introducedinEnglishandexpressedmywishtohaveatalkwithhim.mysurprise,hejuststaredatme,looking.IthoughtIhadnotmademyself，soIrepeatedwhatIhadsaid.ButhejustsaidthatIdidn'tunderstand.IsuddenlyhewasnotanEnglishspeaker!NotallspeakEnglish.短文改错7【答案】　ThismorningIhappenedtomeetaforeignerwhenIwastakingwalkinthepark.ItwasagoodchanceformetopractisemyspokenEnglish,Iwentuptohim,introducedinEnglishandexpressedmywishtohaveatalkwithhim.mysurprise,hejuststaredatme,looking.IthoughtIhadnotmademyself，soIrepeatedwhatIhadsaid.ButhejustsaidthatIdidn'tunderstand.IsuddenlyhewasnotanEnglishspeaker!NotallspeakEnglish.短文改错8Schoollifeisalargepartofmyadolescence.Ihavelearnedhowtogetonwellwithmyfellowschoolmateandteachersatschool.It'squiteusualwhatargumentshappenbetweenstudents.Foranexample,wemayhavedifferentopinionswhenitcometoorganizinganactivity. However,wehavetolearntorespectotherpeople'sopinionsandthinkaboutitcarefully.Itisnecessaryforustohaveadiscussionafterwemakeafinaldecision.Schoollifehadreallytaughtmehowtocommunicateeachother.Itwillcertainplayanimportantroleinhelpmefindagoodjobinthefuture.短文改错8【答案】　Schoollifeisalargepartofmyadolescence.Ihavelearnedhowtogetonwellwithmyfellowandteachersatschool.It'squiteusualargumentshappenbetweenstudents.Forexample,wemayhavedifferentopinionswhenittoorganizinganactivity. However,wehavetolearntorespectotherpeople'sopinionsandthinkaboutcarefully.Itisnecessaryforustohaveadiscussionwemakeafinaldecision.Schoollifereallytaughtmehowtocommunicateeachother.Itwillplayanimportantroleinmefindagoodjobinthefuture.短文改错9Isitnecessarytopracticehandwriting?Somestudentsconsiderhandwritingleastimportantthanbefore.Theypreferredthekeyboardtothepennow,fortheformerisfast,convenientandclear.Theythinkitiswasteoftimepracticinghandwriting.However,othersthinkChinesehandwritingisanimportantpartofourtraditionalculture.Thoughcomputersareveryconvenient,buthandwritingstillplaysanimportantroleinthemodernworld.Beside,beautifulhandwritingmakesagoodimpressioninothers.Itshowsyourattitudetodothings.Chinesecharacterareverybeautifulandrichinculture.Asforme,whenreadinganeatwrittenarticle,youwillfeelpleasedandrelaxed.短文改错9Isitnecessarytopracticehandwriting?Somestudentsconsiderhandwritingimportantthanbefore.Theythekeyboardtothepennow,fortheformerisfast,convenientandclear.Theythinkitiswasteoftimepracticinghandwriting.However,othersthinkChinesehandwritingisanimportantpartofourtraditionalculture.Thoughcomputersareveryconvenient,handwritingstillplaysanimportantroleinthemodernworld.，beautifulhandwritingmakesagoodimpressionothers.Itshowsyourattitudeto/things.Chineseareverybeautifulandrichinculture.Asforme,whenreadingawrittenarticle,willfeelpleasedandrelaxed.短文改错10Thereisatraditioninmyfamily.OnNewYear'sEve,allmyrelativewillcometoourhouseforafeast.Asmatteroffact,itisn'tthefoodthatbringustogetherbutthesenseofbelongingdoes.Makingdumplingswasalwaysgreatfun.Weputacoinintooneofthedumplings.Everybodyexpectstoeattheonewiththecoininside,becauseitissaidwhomevergetsthecoinwillhavegoodfortuneinthefollowedyear.Whenmymomservesthedumplings,theyhelpourselvesimmediately,hopingtogetthegoodluckofourentirelyyear.Thecoinnevercomestome,andIamprettysureofthattheluckisalwaysthere.短文改错10【答案】　Thereisatraditioninmyfamily.OnNewYear'sEve,allmywillcometoourhouseforafeast.Asmatteroffact,itisn'tthefoodthatustogetherbutthesenseofbelongingdoes.Makingdumplingsalwaysgreatfun.Weputacoinintooneofthedumplings.Everybodyexpectstoeattheonewiththecoininside,becauseitissaidgetsthecoinwillhavegoodfortuneintheyear.Whenmymomservesthedumplings,helpourselvesimmediately,hopingtogetthegoodluckofouryear.Thecoinnevercomestome,Iamprettysurethattheluckisalwaysthere.