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Simon考官9分大作文范文合集9分雅思大作文范文合集作者:英国雅思前考官Simon人送外号“雅思白求恩”目录0.alittlesecretaboutmyessay....................................................................................................31.foreignfilms............................................................................
Simon考官9分大作文范文合集
9分雅思大作文范文合集作者:英国雅思前考官Simon人送外号“雅思白求恩”0.alittlesecretaboutmyessay....................................................................................................31.foreignfilms................................................................................................................................42.foreigntourists...........................................................................................................................53.independence.............................................................................................................................64.salary........................................................................................................................................75.animaltesting.............................................................................................................................86.artists..........................................................................................................................................97.unpaidwork..............................................................................................................................108.music.........................................................................................................................................119.videogames..............................................................................................................................1210.lifeexpectancy........................................................................................................................1311.help.........................................................................................................................................1412.technology..............................................................................................................................1513.hobbies...................................................................................................................................1614.equality...................................................................................................................................1715.genderanduniversity............................................................................................................1816.museums................................................................................................................................1917.读与工作...........................................................................................................................2018.minoritylanguages................................................................................................................2119.人与环境...............................................................................................................................2220.Happiness...............................................................................................................................2321.wildanimals...........................................................................................................................2422.RoadSafety.............................................................................................................................250.alittlesecretaboutmyessay——13句原则ItsurprisessomepeoplewhenItellthemthattheyonlyneedtowrite13sentencesforwritingtask2:Introduction(开头段):2句Firstmainbodyparagraph(主体段1):5句Secondmainbodyparagraph(主体段2):5句Conclusion(结尾):1句Pleasenote:Itisnota'rule'thatyoumustwrite13sentences.Thisisjustmyapproachormethod.1.foreignfilms题目:Manypeopleprefertowatchforeignfilmsratherthanlocallyproducedfilms.Whycouldthisbe?Shouldgovernmentsgivemorefinancialsupporttolocalfilmindustries?范文:Itistruethatforeignfilmsaremorepopularinmanycountriesthandomesticallyproducedfilms.Therecouldbeseveralreasonswhythisisthecase,andIbelievethatgovernmentsshouldpromotelocalfilm-makingbysubsidisingtheindustry.Therearevariousreasonswhymanypeoplefindforeignfilmsmoreenjoyablethanthefilmsproducedintheirowncountries.Firstly,theestablishedfilmindustriesincertaincountrieshavehugebudgetsforaction,specialeffectsandtoshootscenesinspectacularlocations.Hollywoodblockbusterslike‘Avatar’ortheJamesBondfilmsareexamplesofsuchproductionsandtheglobalappealthattheyhave.Anotherreasonwhythesebig-budgetfilmsaresosuccessfulisthattheyoftenstarthemostfamousactorsandactresses,andtheyaremadebythemostaccomplishedproducersanddirectors.Thepoorquality,low-budgetfilmmakinginmanycountriessuffersincomparison.Inmyview,governmentsshouldsupportlocalfilmindustriesfinancially.Ineverycountry,theremaybetalentedamateurfilm-makerswhojustneedtobegiventheopportunitytoprovethemselves.Tocompetewithbig-budgetproductionsfromoverseas,thesepeopleneedmoneytopayforfilmcrews,actorsandahostofothercostsrelatedtoproducinghigh-qualityfilms.Ifgovernmentsdidhelpwiththesecosts,theywouldseeanincreaseinemploymentinthefilmindustry,incomefromfilmsales,andperhapsevenariseintouristnumbers.NewZealand,forexample,hasseenanincreaseintourismrelatedtothe'LordoftheRings'films,whichwerepartlyfundedbygovernmentsubsidies.Inconclusion,Ibelievethatincreasedfinancialsupportcouldhelptoraisethequalityoflocallymadefilmsandallowthemtocompetewiththeforeignproductionsthatcurrentlydominatethemarket.(295words,band9)2.foreigntourists题目:Foreignvisitorsshouldpaymorethanlocalvisitorsforculturalandhistoricalattractions.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?范文:Itissometimesarguedthattouristsfromoverseasshouldbechargedmorethanlocalresidentstovisitimportantsitesandmonuments.Icompletelydisagreewiththisidea.Theargumentinfavourofhigherpricesforforeigntouristswouldbethatculturalorhistoricalattractionsoftendependonstatesubsidiestokeepthemgoing,whichmeansthattheresidentpopulationalreadypaysmoneytothesesitesthroughthetaxsystem.However,Ibelievethistobeaveryshortsightedview.Foreigntouristscontributetotheeconomyofthehostcountrywiththemoneytheyspendonawiderangeofgoodsandservices,includingfood,souvenirs,accommodationandtravel.Thegovernmentsandinhabitantsofeverycountryshouldbehappytosubsidiseimportanttouristsitesandencouragepeoplefromtherestoftheworldtovisitthem.Iftravellersrealisedthattheywouldhavetopaymoretovisithistoricalandculturalattractionsinaparticularnation,theywouldperhapsdecidenottogotothatcountryonholiday.TotaketheUKasanexample,thetourismindustryandmanyrelatedjobsrelyonvisitorscomingtothecountrytoseeplaceslikeWindsorCastleorSaintPaul’sCathedral.Thesetwositeschargethesamepriceregardlessofnationality,andthishelpstopromotethenation’sculturalheritage.Ifoverseastouristsstoppedcomingduetohigherprices,therewouldbeariskofinsufficientfundingforthemaintenanceoftheseimportantbuildings.Inconclusion,Ibelievethateveryeffortshouldbemadetoattracttouristsfromoverseas,anditwouldbecounterproductivetomakethempaymorethanlocalresidents.(269words,band9)3.independence题目:Somepeoplethinkthatinthemodernworldwearemoredependentoneachother,whileothersthinkthatpeoplehavebecomemoreindependent.
Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.翻译:Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherwearemoreorlessdependentonothersnowadays.Inmyview,modernlifeforcesustobemoreindependentthanpeoplewereinthepast.Therearetwomainreasonswhyitcouldbearguedthatwearemoredependentoneachothernow.Firstly,lifeismorecomplexanddifficult,especiallybecausethecostoflivinghasincreasedsodramatically.Forexample,youngadultstendtorelyontheirparentsforhelpwhenbuyingahouse.Propertypricesarehigherthanever,andwithouthelpitwouldbeimpossibleformanypeopletopayadepositandamortgage.Secondly,peopleseemtobemoreambitiousnowadays,andtheywantabetterqualityoflifefortheirfamilies.Thismeansthatbothparentsusuallyneedtoworkfull-time,andtheydependonsupportfromgrandparentsandbabysittersforchildcare.However,Iwouldagreewiththosewhobelievethatpeoplearemoreindependentthesedays.Inmostcountries,familiesarebecomingsmallerandmoredispersed,whichmeansthatpeoplecannotcountonrelativesasmuchastheyusedto.Wealsohavemorefreedomtotravelandlivefarawayfromourhometowns.Forexample,manystudentschoosetostudyabroadinsteadofgoingtotheirlocaluniversity,andthisexperiencemakesthemmoreindependentastheylearntolivealone.Anotherfactorinthisgrowingindependenceistechnology,whichallowsustoworkaloneandfromanypartoftheworld.Inconclusion,whiletherearesomereasonstobelievethatpeoplenowdependoneachothermore,myownviewisthatwearemoreindependentthanever.Note:Asusual,trytoanalysethisessayintermsoftaskresponse(doesitfullyanswerthequestion?),organisation,'band7-9'vocabulary,andgrammar.4.salaryWhenchoosingajob,thesalaryisthemostimportantconsideration.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?翻译:Manypeoplechoosetheirjobsbasedonthesizeofthesalaryoffered.Personally,Idisagreewiththeideathatmoneyisthekeyconsiderationwhendecidingonacareer,becauseIbelievethatotherfactorsareequallyimportant.Ontheonehand,Iagreethatmoneyisnecessaryinorderforpeopletomeettheirbasicneeds.Forexample,weallneedmoneytopayforhousing,food,bills,healthcare,andeducation.Mostpeopleconsideritaprioritytoatleastearnasalarythatallowsthemtocovertheseneedsandhaveareasonablequalityoflife.Ifpeoplechosetheirjobsbasedonenjoymentorothernon-financialfactors,theymightfinditdifficulttosupportthemselves.Artistsandmusicians,forinstance,areknownforchoosingacareerpaththattheylove,butthatdoesnotalwaysprovidethemwithenoughmoneytolivecomfortablyandraiseafamily.Nevertheless,Ibelievethatotherconsiderationsarejustasimportantaswhatweearninourjobs.Firstly,personalrelationshipsandtheatmosphereinaworkplaceareextremelyimportantwhenchoosingajob.Havingagoodmanagerorfriendlycolleagues,forexample,canmakeahugedifferencetoworkers’levelsofhappinessandgeneralqualityoflife.Secondly,manypeople’sfeelingsofjobsatisfactioncomefromtheirprofessionalachievements,theskillstheylearn,andthepositiontheyreach,ratherthanthemoneytheyearn.Finally,somepeoplechooseacareerbecausetheywanttohelpothersandcontributesomethingpositivetosociety.Inconclusion,whilesalariescertainlyaffectpeople’schoiceofprofession,Idonotbelievethatmoneyoutweighsallothermotivators.5.animaltestingNowadaysanimalexperimentsarewidelyusedtodevelopnewmedicinesandtotestthesafetyofotherproducts.Somepeoplearguethattheseexperimentsshouldbebannedbecauseitismorallywrongtocauseanimalstosuffer,whileothersareinfavourofthembecauseoftheirbenefitstohumanity.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.范文:Itistruethatmedicinesandotherproductsareroutinelytestedonanimalsbeforetheyareclearedforhumanuse.WhileItendtowardstheviewpointthatanimaltestingismorallywrong,Iwouldhavetosupportalimitedamountofanimalexperimentationforthedevelopmentofmedicines.Ontheonehand,thereareclearethicalargumentsagainstanimalexperimentation.Touseacommonexampleofthispractice,laboratorymicemaybegivenanillnesssothattheeffectivenessofanewdrugcanbemeasured.Opponentsofsuchresearcharguethathumanshavenorighttosubjectanimalstothiskindoftrauma,andthatthelivesofallcreaturesshouldberespected.Theybelievethatthebenefitstohumansdonotjustifythesufferingcaused,andthatscientistsshouldusealternativemethodsofresearch.Ontheotherhand,reliablealternativestoanimalexperimentationmaynotalwaysbeavailable.Supportersoftheuseofanimalsinmedicalresearchbelievethatacertainamountofsufferingonthepartofmiceorratscanbejustifiedifhumanlivesaresaved.Theyarguethatopponentsofsuchresearchmightfeeldifferentlyifamemberoftheirownfamiliesneededamedicaltreatmentthathadbeendevelopedthroughtheuseofanimalexperimentation.Personally,Iagreewiththebanningofanimaltestingfornon-medicalproducts,butIfeelthatitmaybeanecessaryevilwherenewdrugsandmedicalproceduresareconcerned.Inconclusion,itseemstomethatitwouldbewrongtobantestingonanimalsforvitalmedicalresearchuntilequallyeffectivealternativeshavebeendeveloped.(270words,band9)6.artists题目:Somepeoplethinkthatgovernmentsshouldgivefinancialsupporttocreativeartistssuchaspaintersandmusicians.Othersbelievethatcreativeartistsshouldbefundedbyalternativesources.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.范文:Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutthefundingofcreativeartists.Whilesomepeopledisagreewiththeideaofgovernmentsupportforartists,Ibelievethatmoneyforartprojectsshouldcomefrombothgovernmentsandothersources.Someartprojectsdefinitelyrequirehelpfromthestate.IntheUK,therearemanyworksofartinpublicspaces,suchasstreetsorsquaresincitycentres.InLiverpool,forexample,thereareseveralnewstatuesandsculpturesinthedocksareaofthecity,whichhasbeenredevelopedrecently.Theseartworksrepresentculture,heritageandhistory.Theyservetoeducatepeopleaboutthecity,andactaslandmarksortalkingpointsforvisitorsandtourists.Governmentsandlocalcouncilsshouldpaycreativeartiststoproducethiskindofart,becausewithouttheirfundingourcitieswouldbemuchlessinterestingandattractive.Ontheotherhand,Icanunderstandtheargumentsagainstgovernmentfundingforart.Themainreasonforthisviewisthatgovernmentshavemoreimportantconcerns.Forexample,statebudgetsneedtobespentoneducation,healthcare,infrastructureandsecurity,amongotherareas.Thesepublicservicesarevitalforacountrytofunctionproperly,whereastheworkofcreativeartists,eveninpublicplaces,isaluxury.Anotherreasonforthisopinionisthatartistsdoajoblikeanyotherprofessional,andtheyshouldthereforeearntheirownmoneybysellingtheirwork.Inconclusion,therearegoodreasonswhyartistsshouldrelyonalternativesourcesoffinancialsupport,butinmyopiniongovernmenthelpissometimesnecessary.7.unpaidwork题目:Somepeoplethinkthatallteenagersshouldberequiredtodounpaidworkintheirfreetimetohelpthelocalcommunity.Theybelievethiswouldbenefitboththeindividualteenagerandsocietyasawhole.Doyouagreeordisagree?范文;Manyyoungpeopleworkonavolunteerbasis,andthiscanonlybebeneficialforboththeindividualandsocietyasawhole.However,Idonotagreethatweshouldthereforeforceallteenagerstodounpaidwork.Mostyoungpeoplearealreadyunderenoughpressurewiththeirstudies,withoutbeinggiventheaddedresponsibilityofworkingintheirsparetime.Schoolisjustasdemandingasafull-timejob,andteachersexpecttheirstudentstodohomeworkandexamrevisionontopofattendinglessonseveryday.Whenyoungpeopledohavesomefreetime,weshouldencouragethemtoenjoyitwiththeirfriendsortospenditdoingsportsandotherleisureactivities.Theyhavemanyyearsofworkaheadofthemwhentheyfinishtheirstudies.Atthesametime,Idonotbelievethatsocietyhasanythingtogainfromobligingyoungpeopletodounpaidwork.Infact,Iwouldarguethatitgoesagainstthevaluesofafreeandfairsocietytoforceagroupofpeopletodosomethingagainsttheirwill.Doingthiscanonlyleadtoresentmentamongstyoungpeople,whowouldfeelthattheywerebeingused,andparents,whowouldnotwanttobetoldhowtoraisetheirchildren.Currently,nobodyisforcedtovolunteer,andthisissurelythebestsystem.Inconclusion,teenagersmaychoosetoworkforfreeandhelpothers,butinmyopinionweshouldnotmakethiscompulsory.(250words,band9)8.music题目:Therearemanydifferenttypesofmusicintheworldtoday.Whydoweneedmusic?Isthetraditionalmusicofacountrymoreimportantthantheinternationalmusicthatisheardeverywherenowadays?范文:Itistruethatarichvarietyofmusicalstylescanbefoundaroundtheworld.Musicisavitalpartofallhumanculturesforarangeofreasons,andIwouldarguethattraditionalmusicismoreimportantthanmodern,internationalmusic.Musicissomethingthataccompaniesallofusthroughoutourlives.Aschildren,wearetaughtsongsbyourparentsandteachersasameansoflearninglanguage,orsimplyasaformofenjoyment.Childrendelightinsingingwithothers,anditwouldappearthattheactofsinginginagroupcreatesaconnectionbetweenparticipants,regardlessoftheirage.Laterinlife,people’smusicalpreferencesdevelop,andwecometoseeourfavouritesongsaspartofourlifestories.Musicbothexpressesandarousesemotionsinawaythatwordsalonecannot.Inshort,itisdifficulttoimaginelifewithoutit.Inmyopinion,traditionalmusicshouldbevaluedovertheinternationalmusicthathasbecomesopopular.Internationalpopmusicisoftencatchyandfun,butitisessentiallyacommercialproductthatismarketedandsoldbybusinesspeople.Traditionalmusic,bycontrast,expressestheculture,customsandhistoryofacountry.Traditionalstyles,suchas...(example)...,connectustothepastandformpartofourculturalidentity.Itwouldbearealpityifpopmusicbecamesopredominantthatthesenationalstylesdisappeared.Inconclusion,musicisanecessarypartofhumanexistence,andIbelievethattraditionalmusicshouldbegivenmoreimportancethaninternationalmusic.(261words,band9)9.videogames题目:Somepeopleregardvideogamesasharmlessfun,orevenasausefuleducationaltool.Others,however,believethatvideosgamesarehavinganadverseeffectonthepeoplewhoplaythem.Inyouropinion,dothedrawbacksofvideogamesoutweighthebenefits?范文:Manypeople,andchildreninparticular,enjoyplayingcomputergames.WhileIacceptthatthesegamescansometimeshaveapositiveeffectontheuser,Ibelievethattheyaremorelikelytohaveaharmfulimpact.Ontheonehand,videogamescanbebothentertainingandeducational.Users,orgamers,aretransportedintovirtualworldswhichareoftenmoreexcitingandengagingthanreal-lifepastimes.Fromaneducationalperspective,thesegamesencourageimaginationandcreativity,aswellasconcentration,logicalthinkingandproblemsolving,allofwhichareusefulskillsoutsidethegamingcontext.Furthermore,ithasbeenshownthatcomputersimulationgamescanimproveusers’motorskillsandhelptopreparethemforreal-worldtasks,suchasflyingaplane.However,Iwouldarguethatthesebenefitsareoutweighedbythedrawbacks.Gamingcanbehighlyaddictivebecauseusersareconstantlygivenscores,newtargetsandfrequentrewardstokeepthemplaying.Manychildrennowspendhourseachdaytryingtoprogressthroughthelevelsofagameortogetahigherscorethantheirfriends.Thistypeofaddictioncanhaveeffectsrangingfromlackofsleeptoproblemsatschool,whenhomeworkissacrificedforafewmorehoursonthecomputerorconsole.Theriseinobesityinrecentyearshasalsobeenlinkedinparttothesedentarylifestyleandlackofexercisethatoftenaccompanygamingaddiction.Inconclusion,itseemstomethatthepotentialdangersofvideogamesaremoresignificantthanthepossiblebenefits.(258words,band9)10.lifeexpectancy题目:Inthedevelopedworld,averagelifeexpectancyisincreasing.Whatproblemswillthiscauseforindividualsandsociety?Suggestsomemeasuresthatcouldbetakentoreducetheimpactofageingpopulations.范文:Itistruethatpeopleinindustrialisednationscanexpecttolivelongerthaneverbefore.Althoughtherewillundoubtedlybesomenegativeconsequencesofthistrend,societiescantakestepstomitigatethesepotentialproblems.Aspeoplelivelongerandthepopulationsofdevelopedcountriesgrowolder,severalrelatedproblemscanbeanticipated.Themainissueisthattherewillobviouslybemorepeopleofretirementagewhowillbeeligibletoreceiveapension.Theproportionofyounger,workingadultswillbesmaller,andgovernmentswillthereforereceivelessmoneyintaxesinrelationtothesizeofthepopulation.Inotherwords,anageingpopulationwillmeanagreatertaxburdenforworkingadults.Furtherpressureswillincludeariseinthedemandforhealthcare,andthefactyoungadultswillincreasinglyhavetolookaftertheirelderlyrelatives.Thereareseveralactionsthatgovernmentscouldtaketosolvetheproblemsdescribedabove.Firstly,asimplesolutionwouldbetoincreasetheretirementageforworkingadults,perhapsfrom65to70.Nowadays,peopleofthisagetendtobehealthyenoughtocontinueaproductiveworkinglife.Asecondmeasurewouldbeforgovernmentstoencourageimmigrationinordertoincreasethenumberofworkingadultswhopaytaxes.Finally,moneyfromnationalbudgetswillneedtobetakenfromotherareasandspentonvitalhealthcare,accommodationandtransportfacilitiesfortherisingnumbersofoldercitizens.Inconclusion,variousmeasurescanbetakentotackletheproblemsthatarecertaintoariseasthepopulationsofcountriesgrowolder.(265words,band9)11.help题目:Wecannothelpeveryoneintheworldthatneedshelp,soweshouldonlybeconcernedwithourowncommunitiesandcountries.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?范文;Somepeoplebelievethatweshouldnothelppeopleinothercountriesaslongasthereareproblemsinourownsociety.IdisagreewiththisviewbecauseIbelievethatweshouldtrytohelpasmanypeopleaspossible.Ontheonehand,Iacceptthatitisimportanttohelpourneighboursandfellowcitizens.Inmostcommunitiestherearepeoplewhoareimpoverishedordisadvantagedinsomeway.Itispossibletofindhomelesspeople,forexample,ineventhewealthiestofcities,andforthosewhoareconcernedaboutthisproblem,thereareusuallyopportunitiestovolunteertimeorgivemoneytosupportthesepeople.IntheUK,peoplecanhelpinavarietyofways,fromdo
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