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雅思小作文范文整理自雅思考官simon博客Thetablebelowgivesinformationabouttheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities.Fullessay(band9):Thetableshowsdataabouttheundergroundrailnetworksinsixmajorcities.Thetablecomparesthesixnetworksintermsoftheirage,sizeandthenumberofpeoplewhousethemeachyear.Itisclearthatthethreeoldestundergroundsystemsarelargerandservesignificantlymorepassengersthanthenewersystems.TheLondonundergroundistheoldestsystem,havingopenedin1863.Itisalsothelargestsystem,with394kilometresofroute.Thesecondlargestsystem,inParis,isonlyabouthalfthesizeoftheLondonunderground,with199kilometresofroute.However,itservesmorepeopleperyear.Whileonlythirdintermsofsize,theTokyosystemiseasilythemostused,with1927millionpassengersperyear.Ofthethreenewernetworks,theWashingtonDCundergroundisthemostextensive,with126kilometresofroute,comparedtoonly11kilometresand28kilometresfortheKyotoandLosAngelessystems.TheLosAngelesnetworkisthenewest,havingopenedin2001,whiletheKyotonetworkisthesmallestandservesonly45millionpassengersperyear.(185words)watercycle'essayThediagrambelowshowsthewatercycle,whichisthecontinuousmovementofwateron,aboveandbelowthesurfaceoftheEarth.Thepictureillustratesthewayinwhichwaterpassesfromoceantoairtolandduringthenaturalprocessknownasthewatercycle.Threemainstagesareshownonthediagram.Oceanwaterevaporates,fallsasrain,andeventuallyrunsbackintotheoceansagain.Beginningattheevaporationstage,wecanseethat80%ofwatervapourintheaircomesfromtheoceans.Heatfromthesuncauseswatertoevaporate,andwatervapourcondensestoformclouds.Atthesecondstage,labelled‘precipitation’onthediagram,waterfallsasrainorsnow.Atthethirdstageinthecycle,rainwatermaytakevariouspaths.Someofitmayfallintolakesorreturntotheoceansvia‘surfacerunoff’.Otherwise,rainwatermayfilterthroughtheground,reachingtheimperviouslayeroftheearth.Saltwaterintrusionisshowntotakeplacejustbeforegroundwaterpassesintotheoceanstocompletethecycle.August26,2010范文：ThelinegraphcomparesthepercentageofpeopleinthreecountrieswhousedtheInternetbetween1999and2009.ItisclearthattheproportionofthepopulationwhousedtheInternetincreasedineachcountryovertheperiodshown.Overall,amuchlargerpercentageofCanadiansandAmericanshadaccesstotheInternetincomparisonwithMexicans,andCanadaexperiencedthefastestgrowthinInternetusage.In1999,theproportionofpeopleusingtheInternetintheUSAwasabout20%.ThefiguresforCanadaandMexicowerelower,atabout10%and5%respectively.In2005,InternetusageinboththeUSAandCanadarosetoaround70%ofthepopulation,whilethefigureforMexicoreachedjustover25%.By2009,thepercentageofInternetuserswashighestinCanada.Almost100%ofCanadiansusedtheInternet,comparedtoabout80%ofAmericansandonly40%ofMexicans.Hereismyfullessay(170words):ThefigureillustratestheprocessusedbytheAustralianBureauofMeteorologytoforecasttheweather.Therearefourstagesintheprocess,beginningwiththecollectionofinformationabouttheweather.Thisinformationisthenanalysed,preparedforpresentation,andfinallybroadcasttothepublic.Lookingatthefirstandsecondstagesoftheprocess,therearethreewaysofcollectingweatherdataandthreewaysofanalysingit.Firstly,incominginformationcanbereceivedbysatelliteandpresentedforanalysisasasatellitephoto.Thesamedatacanalsobepassedtoaradarstationandpresentedonaradarscreenorsynopticchart.Secondly,incominginformationmaybecollecteddirectlybyradarandanalysedonaradarscreenorsynopticchart.Finally,driftingbuoysalsoreceivedatawhichcanbeshownonasynopticchart.Atthethirdstageoftheprocess,theweatherbroadcastispreparedoncomputers.Finally,itisdeliveredtothepublicontelevision,ontheradio,orasarecordedtelephoneannouncement.Thechartsbelowshowthelevelsofparticipationineducationandscienceindevelopingandindustrialisedcountriesin1980and1990.范文：Thethreebarchartsshowaverageyearsofschooling,numbersofscientistsandtechnicians,andresearchanddevelopmentspendingindevelopinganddevelopedcountries.Figuresaregivenfor1980and1990.Itisclearfromthechartsthatthefiguresfordevelopedcountriesaremuchhigherthanthosefordevelopingnations.Also,thechartsshowanoverallincreaseinparticipationineducationandsciencefrom1980to1990.Peopleindevelopingnationsattendedschoolforanaverageofaround3years,withonlyaslightincreaseinyearsofschoolingfrom1980to1990.Ontheotherhand,thefigureforindustrialisedcountriesrosefromnearly9yearsofschoolingin1980tonearly11yearsin1990.From1980to1990,thenumberofscientistsandtechniciansinindustrialisedcountriesalmostdoubledtoabout70per1000people.Spendingonresearchanddevelopmentalsosawrapidgrowthinthesecountries,reaching$350billionin1990.Bycontrast,thenumberofscienceworkersindevelopingcountriesremainedbelow20per1000people,andresearchspendingfellfromabout$50billiontoonly$25billion.(187words)November04,2010Fullessay(159words):ThechartgivesinformationaboutUKimmigration,emigrationandnetmigrationbetween1999and2008.Bothimmigrationandemigrationratesroseovertheperiodshown,butthefiguresforimmigrationweresignificantlyhigher.Netmigrationpeakedin2004and2007.In1999,over450,000peoplecametoliveintheUK,whilethenumberofpeoplewhoemigratedstoodatjustunder300,000.Thefigurefornetmigrationwasaround160,000,anditremainedatasimilarleveluntil2003.From1999to2004,theimmigrationraterosebynearly150,000people,buttherewasamuchsmallerriseinemigration.Netmigrationpeakedatalmost250,000peoplein2004.After2004,therateofimmigrationremainedhigh,butthenumberofpeopleemigratingfluctuated.Emigrationfellsuddenlyin2007,beforepeakingatabout420,000peoplein2008.Asaresult,thenetmigrationfigurerosetoaround240,000in2007,butfellbacktoaround160,000in2008.piechartanswerThepiechartsbelowshowhowdangerouswasteproductsaredealtwithinthreecountries.范文：ThechartscompareKorea,SwedenandtheUKintermsofthemethodsusedineachcountrytodisposeofharmfulwaste.ItisclearthatinboththeUKandSweden,themajorityofdangerouswasteproductsareburiedunderground.Bycontrast,mosthazardousmaterialsintheRepublicofKoreaarerecycled.Lookingattheinformationinmoredetail,wecanseethat82%oftheUK’sdangerouswasteisputintolandfillsites.Thisdisposaltechniqueisusedfor55%oftheharmfulwasteinSwedenandonly22%ofsimilarwasteinKorea.Thelattercountryrecycles69%ofhazardousmaterials,whichisfarmorethantheothertwonations.While25%ofSweden'sdangerouswasteisrecycled,theUKdoesnotrecycleatall.Instead,itdumpswasteatseaortreatsitchemically.ThesetwomethodsarenotemployedinKoreaorSweden,whichfavourincinerationfor9%and20%ofdangerouswasterespectively.(159words,band9)'flooddiagram'answerThediagramsbelowshowhowhousescanbeprotectedinareaswhicharepronetoflooding.Here'smyfullband9report:Thediagramscomparetwodifferentmethodsofdefenceforhomeswhichareatriskofbeingflooded.Thekeydifferencebetweenthediagramsisthattheyshowfloodprotectionwithandwithoutastopbank.Ineithercase,theat-riskhomeisraisedonstiltsabovegroundlevel.Thefirstdiagramshowshowastopbankactsasafloodbarriertostopriverwaterfromfloodinghomes.Thestopbankisasmallmoundoflandnexttotheriverthatishigherthanthe100-yearfloodlevel,andpreventstheriverfromburstingitsbanks.Nearbyhousescanbebuiltonstiltstopreventfloodingfromrainwater,andafloodgatebeneaththestopbankcanbeopenedtoallowthis‘ponding’todrainoffintotheriver.Whenthereisnostopbank,asshownintheseconddiagram,therewillbenothingtostoptheriverfromflooding.Inthiscase,thesolutionistoputbuildingsonstilts.Theheightofthestiltsismeasuredsothatthefloorofthehouseis300mmabovethe100-yearfloodlevel.Thismeasurementiscalledthe‘freeboard’.'wastetable'essayThetablebelowshowstheamountofwasteproduction(inmillionsoftonnes)insixdifferentcountriesoveratwenty-yearperiod.Thechartcomparestheamountsofwastethatwereproducedinsixcountriesintheyears1980,1990and2000.Ineachoftheseyears,theUSproducedmorewastethanIreland,Japan,Korea,PolandandPortugalcombined.ItisalsonoticeablethatKoreawastheonlycountrythatmanagedtoreduceitswasteoutputbytheyear2000.Between1980and2000,wasteproductionintheUSrosefrom131to192milliontonnes,andrisingtrendswerealsoseeninJapan,PolandandPortugal.Japan’swasteoutputincreasedfrom28to53milliontonnes,whilePolandandPortugalsawwastetotalsincreasefrom4to6.6andfrom2to5milliontonnesrespectively.ThetrendsforIrelandandKoreawerenoticeablydifferentfromthosedescribedabove.InIreland,wasteproductionincreasedmorethaneightfold,fromonly0.6milliontonnesin1980to5milliontonnesin2000.Korea,bycontrast,cutitswasteoutputby12milliontonnesbetween1990and2000.tableessayThetablebelowshowschangesinthenumbersofresidentscyclingtoworkindifferentareasoftheUKbetween2001and2011.ThetablecomparesthenumbersofpeoplewhocycledtoworkintwelveareasoftheUKintheyears2001and2011.Overall,thenumberofUKcommuterswhotravelledtoworkbybicycleroseconsiderablyoverthe10-yearperiod.InnerLondonhadbyfarthehighestnumberofcyclingcommutersinbothyears.In2001,wellover43thousandresidentsofinnerLondoncommutedbybicycle,andthisfigurerosetomorethan106thousandin2011,anincreaseof144%.Bycontrast,althoughouterLondonhadthesecondhighestnumberofcyclingcommutersineachyear,thepercentagechange,atonly45%,wasthelowestofthetwelveareasshowninthetable.BrightonandHovesawthesecondbiggestincrease(109%)inthenumberofresidentscyclingtowork,butBristolwastheUK’ssecondcityintermsoftotalnumbersofcyclingcommuters,with8,108in2001and15,768in2011.Figuresfortheothereightareaswerebelowthe10thousandmarkinbothyears.(172words,band9)processdiagramThediagrambelowshowshowsolarpanelscanbeusedtoprovideelectricityfordomesticuse.Thepictureillustratestheprocessofproducingelectricityinahomeusingsolarpanels.Itisclearthattherearefivedistinctstagesinthisprocess,beginningwiththecaptureofenergyfromsunlight.Thefinaltwostepsshowhowdomesticelectricityisconnectedtotheexternalpowersupply.Atthefirststageintheprocess,solarpanelsontheroofofanormalhousetakeenergyfromthesunandconvertitintoDCcurrent.Next,thiscurrentispassedtoaninverter,whichchangesittoACcurrentandregulatesthesupplyofelectricity.Atstagethree,electricityissuppliedtothehomefromanelectricalpanel.Atthefourthstepshownonthediagram,autilitymeterinthehomeisresponsibleforsendinganyextraelectricpoweroutsidethehouseintothegrid.Finally,ifthesolarpanelsdonotprovideenoughenergyforthehousehold,electricitywillflowfromtheutilitygridintothehomethroughthemeter.Note:I'veunderlinedexamplesofthetwolanguagefeaturesthatmakeprocessdiagramdescriptionsspecial:'steps'language,andpassiveverbs.barchartThebargraphshowstheglobalsales(inbillionsofdollars)ofdifferenttypesofdigitalgamesbetween2000and2006.Thebarchartcomparestheturnoverindollarsfromsalesofvideogamesforfourdifferentplatforms,namelymobilephones,online,consolesandhandhelddevices,from2000to2006.Itisclearthatsalesofgamesforthreeoutofthefourplatformsroseeachyear,leadingtoasignificantriseintotalglobalturnoveroverthe7-yearperiod.Salesfiguresforhandheldgameswereatleasttwiceashighasthoseforanyotherplatforminalmosteveryyear.In2000,worldwidesalesofhandheldgamesstoodataround$11billion,whileconsolegamesearnedjustunder$6billion.Nofiguresaregivenformobileoronlinegamesinthatyear.Overthenext3years,salesofhandheldvideogamesrosebyabout$4billion,butthefigureforconsolesdecreasedby$2billion.Mobilephoneandonlinegamesstartedtobecomepopular,withsalesreachingaround$3billionin2003.In2006,salesofhandheld,onlineandmobilegamesreachedpeaksof17,9and7billiondollarsrespectively.Bycontrast,turnoverfromconsolegamesdroppedtoitslowestpoint,ataround$2.5billion.mapessayThemapshowsthegrowthofavillagecalledChorleywoodbetween1868and1994.Itisclearthatthevillagegrewasthetransportinfrastructurewasimproved.Fourperiodsofdevelopmentareshownonthemap,andeachofthepopulatedareasisneartothemainroads,therailwayorthemotorway.From1868to1883,Chorleywoodcoveredasmallareanexttooneofthemainroads.ChorleywoodParkandGolfCourseisnowlocatednexttothisoriginalvillagearea.Thevillagegrewalongthemainroadtothesouthbetween1883and1922,andin1909arailwaylinewasbuiltcrossingthisareafromwesttoeast.Chorleywoodstationisinthispartofthevillage.TheexpansionofChorleywoodcontinuedtotheeastandwestalongsidetherailwaylineuntil1970.Atthattime,amotorwaywasbuilttotheeastofthevillage,andfrom1970to1994,furtherdevelopmentofthevillagetookplacearoundmotorwayintersectionswiththerailwayandoneofthemainroads.flowchartessayThechartbelowshowstheprocessofwastepaperrecycling.Theflowchartshowshowwastepaperisrecycled.Itisclearthattherearesixdistinctstagesinthisprocess,fromtheinitialcollectionofwastepapertotheeventualproductionofusablepaper.Atthefirststageinthepaperrecyclingprocess,wastepaperiscollectedeitherfrompaperbanks,wheremembersofthepublicleavetheirusedpaper,ordirectlyfrombusinesses.Thispaperisthensortedbyhandandseparatedaccordingtoitsgrade,withanypaperthatisnotsuitableforrecyclingbeingremoved.Next,thegradedpaperistransportedtoapapermill.Stagesfourandfiveoftheprocessbothinvolvecleaning.Thepaperiscleanedandpulped,andforeignobjectssuchasstaplesaretakenout.Followingthis,allremnantsofinkandglueareremovedfromthepaperatthede-inkingstage.Finally,thepulpcanbeprocessedinapapermakingmachine,whichmakestheendproduct:usablepaper.(160words,band9)Note:Ijoinedtheintroductionandoverviewtogetherbecausetheywerebothshort.Trytoanalysetheessay-whyisitworthband9?stackedbarchartessayThechartbelowshowsthetotalnumberofOlympicmedalswonbytwelvedifferentcountries.ThebarchartcomparestwelvecountriesintermsoftheoverallnumberofmedalsthattheyhavewonattheOlympicGames.ItisclearthattheUSAisbyfarthemostsuccessfulOlympicmedalwinningnation.Itisalsonoticeablethatthefiguresforgold,silverandbronzemedalswonbyanyparticularcountrytendtobefairlysimilar.TheUSAhaswonatotalofaround2,300Olympicmedals,includingapproximately900goldmedals,750silverand650bronze.Insecondplaceontheall-timemedalschartistheSovietUnion,withjustover1,000medals.Again,thenumberofgoldmedalswonbythiscountryisslightlyhigherthanthenumberofsilverorbronzemedals.Onlyfourothercountries-theUK,France,GermanyandItaly-havewonmorethan500Olympicmedals,allwithsimilarproportionsofeachmedalcolour.ApartfromtheUSAandtheSovietUnion,Chinaistheonlyothercountrywithanoticeablyhigherproportionofgoldmedals(about200)comparedtosilverandbronze(about100each).(178words,band9)mobilephonesessay范文：Thetablecomparesthepercentagesofpeopleusingdifferentfunctionsoftheirmobilephonesbetween2006and2010.
Throughouttheperiodshown,themainreasonwhypeopleusedtheirmobilephoneswastomakecalls.However,therewasamarkedincreaseinthepopularityofothermobilephonefeatures,particularlytheInternetsearchfeature.In2006,100%ofmobilephoneownersusedtheirphonestomakecalls,whilethenextmostpopularfunctionsweretextmessaging(73%)andtakingphotos(66%).Bycontrast,lessthan20%ofownersplayedgamesormusicontheirphones,andtherewerenofiguresforusersdoingInternetsearchesorrecordingvideo.Overthefollowing4years,therewasrelativelylittlechangeinthefiguresforthetopthreemobilephonefeatures.However,thepercentageofpeopleusingtheirphonestoaccesstheInternetjumpedto41%in2008andthento73%in2010.Therewasalsoasignificantriseintheuseofmobilestoplaygamesandtorecordvideo,withfiguresreaching41%and35%respectivelyin2010.Note:Theaboveessayisn'tperfect,butit'sstillgoodenoughforaband9.Youarenotexpectedtowriteamasterpieceinonly20minutes.linegraphessayThelinegraphcomparesaverageyearlyspendingbyAmericansonmobileandlandlinephoneservicesfrom2001to2010.Itisclearthatspendingonlandlinephonesfellsteadilyoverthe10-yearperiod,whilemobilephoneexpenditurerosequickly.Theyear2006marksthepointatwhichexpenditureonmobileservicesovertookthatforresidentialphoneservices.In2001,USconsumersspentanaverageofnearly$700onresidentialphoneservices,comparedtoonlyaround$200oncellphoneservices.Overthefollowingfiveyears,averageyearlyspendingonlandlinesdroppedbynearly$200.Bycontrast,expenditureonmobilesrosebyapproximately$300.Intheyear2006,theaverageAmericanpaidoutthesameamountofmoneyonbothtypesofphoneservice,spendingjustover$500oneach.By2010,expenditureonmobilephoneshadreachedaround$750,whilethefigureforspendingonresidentialserviceshadfallentojustoverhalfthisamount.(162words,band9)lifecycleessayThediagramshowsthelifecycleofthehoneybee.Twothingstoconsiderare:howtosummarisethediagrambeforedescribingthestagesindetailwhethertouseactiveorpassiveverbformsThediagramillustratesthevariousstagesinthelifeofahoneybee.Wecanseethatthecompletelifecyclelastsbetween34and36days.Itisalsonoticeablethattherearefivemainstagesinthedevelopmentofthehoneybee,fromeggtomatureadultinsect.Thelifecycleofthehoneybeebeginswhenthefemaleadultlaysanegg;thefemaletypicallylaysoneortwoeggsevery3days.Between9and10dayslater,eachegghatchesandtheimmatureinsect,ornymph,appears.Duringthethirdstageofthelifecycle,thenymphgrowsinsizeandshedsitsskinthreetimes.Thismoultingfirsttakesplace5daysaftertheegghatches,then7dayslater,andagainanother9dayslater.Afteratotalof30to31daysfromthestartofthecycle,theyoungadulthoneybeeemergesfromitsfinalmoultingstage,andinthespaceofonly4daysitreachesfullmaturity.(169words,band9)climateessayTheclimographbelowshowsaveragemonthlytemperaturesandrainfallinthecityofKolkata.ThechartcomparesaveragefiguresfortemperatureandprecipitationoverthecourseofacalendaryearinKolkata.ItisnoticeablethatmonthlyfiguresforprecipitationinKolkatavaryconsiderably,whereasmonthlytemperaturesremainrelativelystable.RainfallishighestfromJulytoAugust,whiletemperaturesarehighestinAprilandMay.BetweenthemonthsofJanuaryandMay,averagetemperaturesinKolkatarisefromtheirlowestpointataround20°Ctoapeakofjustover30°C.Averagerainfallinthecityalsorisesoverthesameperiod,fromapproximately20mmofraininJanuaryto100mminMay.Whiletemperaturesstayroughlythesameforthenextfourmonths,theamountofrainfallmorethandoublesbetweenMayandJune.Figuresforprecipitationremainabove250mmfromJunetoSeptember,peakingataround330mminJuly.Thefinalthreemonthsoftheyearseeadramaticfallinprecipitation,toalowofabout10mminDecember,andasteadydropintemperaturesbacktotheJanuaryaverage.(173words,band9)fullessayabout2barchartsThebarchartscomparestudentsofdifferentagesintermsofwhytheyarestudyingandwhethertheyaresupportedbyanemployer.Itisclearthattheproportionofstudentswhostudyforcareerpurposesisfarhigheramongtheyoungeragegroups,whiletheoldeststudentsaremorelikelytostudyforinterest.Employersupportismorecommonlygiventoyoungerstudents.Around80%ofstudentsagedunder26studytofurthertheircareers,whereasonly10%studypurelyoutofinterest.Thegapbetweenthesetwoproportionsnarrowsasstudentsgetolder,andthefiguresforthoseintheirfortiesarethesame,atabout40%.Studentsagedover49overwhelminglystudyforinterest(70%)ratherthanforprofessionalreasons(lessthan20%).Justover60%ofstudentsagedunder26aresupportedbytheiremployers.Bycontrast,the30-39agegroupisthemostself-sufficient,withonly30%beinggiventimeoffandhelpwithfees.Thefiguresriseslightlyforstudentsintheirfortiesandforthoseaged50ormore.(178words,band9)'chartwithoutyears'essayThechartbelowshowsnumbersofincidentsandinjuriesper100millionpassengermilestravelled(PMT)bytransportationtypein2002.Thebarchartcomparesthenumberofincidentsandinjuriesforevery100millionpassengermilestravelledonfivedifferenttypesofpublictransportin2002.Itisclearthatthemostincidentsandinjuriestookplaceondemand-responsevehicles.Bycontrast,commuterrailservicesrecordedbyfarthelowestfigures.Atotalof225incidentsand173injuries,per100millionpassengermilestravelled,tookplaceondemand-responsetransportservices.Thesefigureswerenearlythreetimesashighasthoseforthesecondhighestcategory,busservices.Therewere76incidentsand66peoplewereinjuredonbuses.Railservicesexperiencedfewerproblems.Thenumberofincidentsonlightrailtrainsequalledthefigurerecordedforbuses,butthereweresignificantlyfewerinjuries,atonly39.Heavyrailservicessawlowernumbersofsucheventsthanlightrailservices,butcommuterrailpassengerswereevenlesslikelytoexperienceproblems.Infact,only20incidentsand17injuriesoccurredoncommutertrains.(165words,band9)graphshowingfutureyearsThegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.Thelinegraphcomparesthepercentageofpeopleaged65ormoreinthreecountriesoveraperiodof100years.Itisclearthattheproportionofelderlypeopleincreasesineachcountrybetween1940and2040.Japanisexpectedtoseethemostdramaticchangesinitselderlypopulation.In1940,around9%ofAmericanswereaged65orover,comparedtoabout7%ofSwedishpeopleand5%ofJapanesepeople.Theproportionsofelderlypeopleint