初中英语书面表达 第二节 个人情感

第二节 写作导航 这一话题涉及人的喜怒哀乐等情感，以记叙文个议论文为主。因文章多含有“个人情感”，所以常常以叙事抒怀、发观点或看法为主。写作时要特别注意人物的心理、语言、观点等。 常用表达 1.常用词汇 喜怒哀乐：nice（极好的，漂亮的）；happy（高兴的）；exciting（令人激动的）；grrat（极好的，美妙的）；fantastic（奇异的，难以相信的）；popular（流行的，普通的）；relaxing（轻松的）；fresh（新鲜的）；proud（令人自豪的）；sad（悲伤的）；angry（令人生气的）；bad（坏的）；danerours（危险的）；scary（胆小的，害怕的）；boring（令人厌烦的）；tired（疲劳的）；nervous（紧张的）；sorry（抱歉的）；surprised（令人吃惊的）；crazy（疯狂的）；disappointed（失望的）；mad（狂热的，发疯的）；amazed（吃惊的。惊奇的）；strsnge（奇怪的）；annoyed（烦闷的） 情感评价：struct（严肃的）；smart（时尚的，聪明的）；cute（可爱的）；polite（有礼貌的）；perfect（完美的，极好的）；energetic（精力旺盛的） 2.经典句型 (1)We are proud of......我们以……为骄傲。 (2)A friend can not only .....，but also.......朋友不仅能……，而且能…… (3)We need to learn....我们必须学会…… (4)My parents are all busy doing.....all day.我的父母整日忙于…… (5)I love my school，because it's like a big family. 我爱我的学校，因为她就像一个大家庭。 真题感悟 （2009?陕西) 在你成长的历程中，有些日子胡让你快乐，经久难忘。请以“My Pleasant Day”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，记叙你那天的活动和感受（如：exciting,fun......）。 要求：1.参考所给的提示，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，写工整。 【思路点拨】 这是一篇记叙文，要求介绍自己快乐的一天，因此写作时应该按照时间顺序进行叙述，用第一人称，用一般过去时。写作时，应围绕“pleasant”选材，如“have fun playing computer games”，“play tennis”，“clean the house and many clothes”，并表达“tired but happy”这一主题。 【高分模板】 心情总说→→→→→→→→→ I had a pleasant day last month.       ↓ ↓            ↓            ↑→→→ In the morning i got up.....do my homework. 活动介绍  →→→→↑→→→Next,I had fun playing......            ↓          ↓→→→In the afternoon, It made me relaxed. ↓          ↓→→→Before I went to bed,I....It made me relaxed. ↓                ↓ 心情总结→→→→→→→→→What a happy day I had! 【满分范文】 My Pleasant Day I had a pleasant day last month. In the morning，I got up late and then began to do my homework.It took me about two hours to finish it. Next, I had fun playing computer games. While my mother was cooking lunch, I cleaned the house and washed my clothes. In the afternoon, I played tennis happily with my friends.Before I went to bed, I listened to music.It made me relaxed.What a happy day I had! 【满分亮点】 这篇记叙文时态运用准确，用一般过去时“再现”了自己快乐的一天。在介绍一天中有意义的活动时，用了“ I had fun doing......”，“It made me relaxed.......”等句型，读起来很有感染力，感觉亲切有自然。 强化训练 (1) 在毕业来临之际，你的英语老师Mr.Smith要求你们每人给他写一封英文书信留作纪念。请根据中文提示，写一篇完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。词数：100左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 要点提示： 1. 你对Mr.Smith的整体印象； 2. 简述一次经历（帮助、鼓励、批评）； 3. 你的感受或建议。 Dear Mr.Smith, How are you?It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon. At this moment,I want to say“Thank you”.                                                                    Yours, Chen Dong (2) 请以“The Happiest Life”为题，根据以下内容提示和你的实际学校生活，写一篇短文来描述以下你心目中最幸福的生活。 内容提示： 1.你现在生活中的快乐和烦恼。 2.你追求的最快乐、最幸福的生活是什么样子的？ 3.你会为此付出什么样的努力？ 要去：1.语言准确得当，条理清晰。2.词数：80左右。 The Happiest Life (3) 假设你是李雷。在毕业来临之际，请在你的好朋友王涛的毕业纪念册上写下你的心里话。 内容包括：感谢他三年来在学习、生活等方面对你的帮助与关心；并表达对他的祝愿。50词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）。 Dear Wang Tao, I am very happy to be with you. We'll gradate form the school soon.                          Yours, Li Lei (4) 假如你是Peter，刚刚收到你的中国笔友王刚的来信。他在信中说自己所在的学校附近正在建一个公园，大型的机械车辆往来频繁，干扰了他的学习和生活，也使他的情绪受到了影响。请你结合自身的经历给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法和建议。 要求：1.表达流畅。语言； 2.和根据自身的经历适当发挥； 3.不少于80词。 （5） 假设你们班来自美国的交换生John最近有点闷闷不乐。通过与他聊天，你发现他身在异乡，没有父母陪伴，感到有些孤独，而临近汉语考试又让他有些紧张、焦虑，目前他感到既无聊又无助。请你他目前的状况并给出一些建议，帮助他适应现在的生活。 要求：语言通顺流畅，层次分明，表意明确。70词左右（开头已给出）。 提示词：helpless无助的；lonely 孤独的 Hi,John, I am sorry to hear that you are not happy.                                                   参考范文 (1) Dear Mr. Smith, How are you? It's a pity that I'm leaving this school soon. At this moment, I want to say “Thank you”. You have done a lot for us since you came to our school. You are always working hard and trying to help us when we are in trouble. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then you have kept helping me. Little by little, I”ve become interested in English and I”m now good at it. I think I am so lucky to be one of your students. I hope that you can stay in China longer and have more Chinese students. Best wishes to you! Yours, Chen Dong (2) The Happiest Life My school life has a lot of fun. I like studying in the classroom with my lovely classmates.We get on well with each other. We play sports and sing songs together. But sometimes there is too much homework.I didn’thave free time to play with my pet.      I wish to have a happy life in a big city in the future.  I want to have a job I like. I also dream of having a large house with a big garden. Now, I must study hard to make my dream come true. (3) Dear Wang Tao, I am very happy to be with you. We'll gradate form the school soon. I ant to take this opportunity to express thanks for you. During the three years, you have helped me a lot both in my study and life. I can still remember that when I was in hospital last year, you went to see me everyday after school. You took care of me and helped me with my study. I think I'll never forget it. I hope that you have a bright future and our friendship will last forever. Yours, Li Lei (4) Dear Wang Gang, I am very happy to hear from you. I know that a new park is being built near your school and the noise is badly affecting your life and studies. Once, when I was preparing for an important exam, my neighbor was having a big party. The music was so loud that I couldn’t understand what I was reading. I was angry with the neighbor and wanted to call the police. However, I knew that he had won a national sports match that day and was very excited. So I took all my work and went to a quiet café nearby. In the end, I passed the exam. We are not alone in this world, so it is normal that we are affected by our surroundings. Therefore, we should learn to accept what happens to us and find our own way to adapt to it. I hope you can find your own way and be happy again. Yours, Peter (5) Hi,John, I am sorry to hear that you are not happy. You feel lonely and helpless because you don’t live with your parents. And the coming Chinese test makes you a little nervous.That's true. Everyone feel helpless. But it doesn’t matter. You just need friends. We are friends. I’ll introduce you to more Chinese friends and we can play games together. Then, you won’t feel lonely anymore. After class, we can study together and I can help you with your Chinese. I think you will be happy soon.