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科技类 2014年4月26日雅思写作范文(科技类) 题目:With the wide use of computers and the Internet, people can study and work from home without going to school or company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 解析今天的题目考的是“利用网络在家学习和工作”。如果按照出题频率来说,这个题应该可以排到雅思考试的前三甲了。再加上小作文考的那个柱状图,4月26号考雅思的同学有福了。 好写的题目都有一个共同的特点,就是贴近大家的学习工作生活,容易想到很多的素材和理由。如果你在家工作,你就不用每天去挤公交和地铁,浪费时间不说,还把人折磨得身心俱疲(save a great deal of time and energy)。另外,时间安 排会更灵活(have a flexible schedule)。只要你能完成任务(meet the deadline),不管你几点开工,很多人早上9点脑子还没醒过来,而到了晚上他们反而工作起来倍精神。对于学生,如果在网上上课当然也很方便,除了免去上学放学的辛苦,还可以把课程录下来反复听(review the course content many times),无论学 霸学渣都可以按照自己的节奏来复习。 关于这种模式的弊端,主要有以下一些:让员工和学生都缺乏面对面的交流(face-to-face communication),变得比较疏远(become alienated)。对于员 工来说,少了老板的监督和约束(supervision and discipline),很多人可能发 现工作效率会降低。也许你上下班路上省了俩小时,结果还不够你淘宝、聊天和打游戏的。家里的环境让人放松(relaxing),估计很多人都觉得在家里缺乏工 作的氛围(atmosphere)。 最关键的一点是对于学生的影响。本篇范文用到了“剑8-1”的一些素材:学习 的目的不只是学知识和获取信息(education is not about learning information and acquiring knowledge only),还需要学习与人相处(interact with their peers),学习尊敬老师(respect their teachers),学习遵守纪律(obey school rules),而这些都是远程教学(distance learning)所无法学到的。所以文章的结论是: 在家工作和上课也许会变得越来越流行(popular),但是这种模式只适合某些 工作,而且它永远不会取代传统的学校(replace conventional schools)。 ! 2014-04-26 利用网络在家工作和学习 The advent (到来)of the Internet has made it possible for people to study and work from home. When we enjoy the convenience and flexibility of this new pattern, its negative influence should also be noted. Working from home enables employees to have a flexible schedule. As long as they can meet the deadline, they can choose any time in a day to do their work without starting or finishing at a regular time, as they do in conventional companies. In distance learning, the course content can be recorded and replayed, which means students can review it as many times as they want. The most attractive part is that employees and students do not need to travel to the company and the school every day, saving a great deal of time and energy. However, this work pattern probably only suits some jobs that can be done on the computer such as designing, accounting, translation, etc.. Due to the lack of face-to-face communication, colleagues are likely to become alienated, which may affect their cooperation. Another problem is the relaxing environment at home. Without discipline and supervision, some employees may find it difficult to finish their tasks on time. The biggest concern is perhaps for students, whose education is not about learning information and acquiring knowledge only. When staying in school, students will learn how to interact with their peers, how to respect their teachers, how to obey school rules, etc. These elements are an indispensable part of education, but they will be missing in distance learning. To sum up, learning and working via the Internet is a convenient way and it is expected to become more popular in the future. However, we should take other factors into consideration when we decide to work or study from home. In my view, this pattern will never replace conventional schools. 2014年3月13日雅思写作范文(科技类) 题目:Some think that printed books are not necessary in the digital era, because all writing can be stored electronically. Others think printed books still play an important role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 解析:关于电子书的好处,大家应该比较容易想到。很多人在地铁里都是捧着电子书在看,所以它最大的好处是方便。联系到之前考过的电子图书馆,有很多素材都可以使用,包括节省空间、节约纸张和有利于环境保护。而且查阅电子期刊可以不用跑去图书馆,只需要在家里的电脑上就可以操作,这也带来了便利和高效。 这个题目的另一方可能稍微难想到理由,就是纸质书的优势。喜欢读书的人可能都对印刷的书比较有感觉,泡一杯茶、放一段音乐、捧一本书。这是一种阅读的享受enjoyable experience。此外,看电脑屏幕还有损视力。在存储一些重要的文件资料的时候通常也会使用纸质的材料,这样显得更正式一些。所以说,电子书的作用会越来越大,但是纸质书也不会完全消失。 2014-03-13 电子书vs纸质书 In the information age, electronic books have become so prevalent that some people claim that printed books will disappear soon. However, other people hold a different opinion, believing that printed books still play an important role. This essay will discuss both sides. Electronic books have obvious advantages in storing and disseminating information. They do not occupy large space as paper books do. For example, the whole library can be made available online and this kind of electronic library can save abundant land resources. Reading e-books is also much more convenient than the traditional way of reading. People can store hundreds of books in their mobile phone and take them for a vacation instead of carrying a heavy suitcase of paper books. Most importantly, e-books are environmentally friendly as they save a huge amount of wood resources used for producing paper. When our living environment is deteriorating, replacing paper books with e-books is of significance to the protection of the globe. However, some people argue that printed books are still indispensable in our life and will never disappear. For many readers, having a printed book on the hand gives them an enjoyable experience of reading that is different from looking at the computer screen. Watching the screen for too long is harmful to the eyesight, particularly for children. It is also worth mentioning that printed information plays an irreplaceable role in storing essential documents such as contracts and archives. In my view, the role of printed books will inevitably diminish. In order to save resources and protect the environment, we should reduce the use of paper books and advocate electronic books. But printed books will not disappear because they also have their advantages. 2015年3月28日雅思写作考题解析与范文(科技话题) 题目:Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 解析: 这是一个典型的科技话题,看似比较简单,但仔细一琢磨也不是那么容易。需要严格扣题。这个题只能写手机电脑对于reading和writing skills的影响,写别的素材就容易跑偏。如果怕字数不够,可以把它拆分来写,比如分别写手机和电脑,分别写对于reading和writing 的影响,这样字数就能写得更多一些。 这篇文章的用词都非常简单,因为都是生活中大家熟悉的素材,比如打手机make phone calls、发微信send voice messages、发短信send text messages,这些都使人们没有机会去读和写,虽然发短信也需要读和写,但是那个文字太简单太口语了,大多是“笑脸”“呵呵”“lol”之类的。所以损害了年轻人的读写技能Undermine young people’s reading and writing skills. 电脑也是有害无益。小孩子用电脑打字的时候会不太关注单词拼写和语法,因为很多时候软件有自动纠错功能correct the mistakes automatically。虽然有人说电脑和网络使大家有 更多信息可以阅读,但你仔细想想,坐在电脑前面的人有几个在看文学作品的(literature)?大多数时候都在看八卦新闻,看奇闻异事,看优酷土豆,看。。。。。。 这篇文章我没有写明显的让步段,只是在两个主体段内部直接增加了一点让步反驳的内容,用词都非常简单。最后再一次提醒大家,考试的文章要自己写,注意逻辑,要扣题,不要把背过的素材一股脑往上搬,否则容易跑偏。考官的意图非常明确:限定写作范围,考察真实写作能力。这也代表了今后雅思写作考试的必然趋势。 2015-3-28 手机电脑损害年轻人的读写能力(科技话题) Using electronic products such as mobile phones and computers has become an indispensable part of our daily lives. Some people believe that the popularization of affect young people’s ability to read and write. I agree with this viewpoint to a great degree. An important function of these communication tools is to enable people to interact with each other via sound and pictures. Such activities as making phone calls and sending voice messages and photos can be done on the mobile phone, which means people have fewer opportunities to read and write. Although some people still write text messages, the language in this context is quite simple and informal. Therefore, there is every reason to believe that using mobile phones may undermine young people’s reading and writing skills. Another essential device in life is the computer, which has the same negative effect. When people write on the computer, they pay less attention to their spelling and grammar, as the mistakes can be corrected automatically with the help of Office Software. This is particularly harmful to teenagers, who need to practice writing by hand and develop writing skills at an early age. Some people may argue that the computer and the Internet provide people with more materials to read, but the fact is that most of reading before the screen is about news and short passages. Fewer young people choose to read literature on books. Based on the points outlined above, I argue that using computers and mobile phones have a negative impact on young people’s reading and writing ability. It seems unrealistic to ban the use of these devices among them, but we need to encourage them to stay away from electronic devices for some time in their daily lives.