分享一篇英语四级作文模板

1. 对于某一件事情，有的人认为…… 另有一些人认为…… 我的观点…… 模板一 There is no agreement among the people as to the view of ____________ (主题). Some people hold the idea that ___________________________ (观点A). They have two/three reasons to support their view. In the first place, _______________ (列举理由1) because ____________________(阐述自己的理由). Secondly, _____________ (列举理由2). A typical example is ___________________(举例阐述自己的理由). On the other hand, others may have a quite different view. According to them, ________________ (观点B). The following are their reasons: Firstly, _______________ (列举理由1). For instance, ____________________(举例阐述自己的理由). Secondly, _____________ (列举理由2). A typical example is ___________________(举例阐述自己的理由). Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I tend to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable to some extent, but the latter is more convincing because… (换个句式重新达自己支持的观点的理由) 模板二 ________________(主题) is very common in our lives. The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people tend to think _________________ (观点A)because ______________(支持观点A的理由1). Furthermore, _________________ (支持观点A的理由2). Another point is that ___________________ (支持观点A的理由3). However, others argue that __________________(观点B). They point out that ___________ (支持观点B的理由1). What’s more, _________________ (支持观点A的理由2). As far as I am concerned, I will choose to ________________ (你的观点) because __________________________________ (申明自己观点的理由) . 2. 对于某件事情，有人认为……,而我认为…… 列举自己的理由，说明自己的观点。 模板 When asked about _____________________ (主题), Some people hold the idea that ______________________(陈述人们的观点). As far as they are concerned, __________________ (展开说明人们为何持有那样的观点). But I could not agree with them. In my opinion, ___________________________ (陈述我的观点). The reasons for my opinion are listed as follows. In the first place, ___________________(理由1). In the second place, ______________________ (理由2). In the third place, ______________________ (理由3). (理由要直截了当点明，然后用一两句话阐述) For the reasons above, I firmly believe _________________________. (重申自己的观点) 3. 某种现象在社会上很普遍，因为它给人们带来很大益处，包括…… 但是，它同时也带来了坏处，包括…… ，优点多于缺点或缺点多于优点。 模板 Nowadays many people prefer ________________ (主题) because it plays an important role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. On the one hand, __________ (优点一). On the other hand, __________________ (优点二). (每个优点要直截了当点明，然后用一两句话阐述) But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects / sides are also obvious. One of the most important disadvantages is that _____________(缺点1). What’s worse, _____________ (缺点2). (每个缺点要直截了当点明，然后用一两句话阐述) Through the above analysis / discussion, I believe that the positive aspects outweigh its negative aspects. We should make full use of its advantages and try to minimize its disadvantages. 4. 某种现象在社会上很普遍 出现这一现象的原因 我对这一现象的看法和建议 Nowadays, it’s very common that____________________________________. What are responsible for this phenomenon? / The following reasons account for the existence of the phenomenon. In my opinion,_________________________________________________. 问题： 1. 没按信件格式写或信件格式有误。 2. 信件开头写法有误。如：“Hi, Hello, How are you? Long time no see! ”信件开头应该直奔主题，表明写信的目的。即使寒暄，也应根据具体情况给予问候。 3. 没有认真省题，导致内容不完整（缺“如何适应大学生活”）和内容不符题求（有些同学在文章中提到“welcome to our school”） 4. 文章的篇章结构安排混乱。有的把“差别”和“如何适应”揉在一起写，这不符要求，题目要求分两个内容，即两个部分来写。另外，混在一起写，会使结构不清晰。 5. 在写到每个部分内容时，没有很好地运用连接词或序数词以使自己的观点清晰明了。 In the college, we learn more things by ourselves. The teacher just teach you the method about how to study. There are also many subjects for you to learn. You’d better choose the subject you like so that you will learn it better. You should also set a goal for yourself in the college. Then do your best to achieve it. That will make yourself succeed. 6. 人称前后不一致。 In college, there is more free time for students to spend. You can manage your time flexibly. 7. 汉语思维过分严重，导致非常严重的句法错误，令人费解。 I want to tell you a lot of things as an over people. Secondary school and university study not between university need to live on campus, but the high school do not. The first to congratulate you on to university. University with a high school is different. In the university you study by youself is very important, and to be more in social activities. Of course at university is more free. 8. 没有基本的写作规范：句子首字母不大写，标点符号使用不正确。 9. 该篇习作中普遍的语法错误： Congratulation to enter college. College has a lot of different between high school. Middle school and college are many different. I want to share you with my experience in college. Studying in college is more freedom than high school. Self-control is the most important in college.