[英语四六级]六级作文评分标准

[英语四六级]六级作文评分标准 六级作文评分标准 1、 评分依据:评分是从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评 判。这种评分是就内容、篇章结构和语言运用能力等方面对 文章进行综合评判，从而考察学生表达思想的能力。内容方面要 考虑文章是否切题，选材是否真实可信、有说服力，是否充分的 表达思想;篇章结构方面要考虑文章结构是否合理，一般来说， 记叙文按事情发生、发展的过程来布局，论说文按所议论问题的 内在联系来布局，同时，文章还要前后连贯，上下衔接，首尾呼 应;语言运用能力方面则要考虑词汇、语法、句法及修辞等应用 语言的能力，以及遣词造句是否准确而又符合英语表达习惯，是 否有因语言错误造成理解上的障碍。 2、 评分标准: 1) 5个等级:67，57，45，39，33，参照样卷评分，酌情加 减分。 2) 字数不足酌情减分。标准如下: 140-149 130-139 120-129 110-119 100-109 累计字〈79 数 1 2 3 5 7 9 扣分 3、 作文样例: 1) 有人做好事期望得到回报 2) 有人认为应该向雷锋那样做好事不图回报 1 3) 我的观点 Sample 1(67分作文): Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? Different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some argue that people should be given a certain reward for their good deeds, because they believe the saying “No pains, no gains.” In addition, they maintain that in some sense rewards can stimulate people’s enthusiasm to do good deeds. While others insist doing a good deed should be based on people’s individual consciousness of responsibility, and hence little significance should be attached to monetary reward. In their mind’s eye, Leifeng is a perfect model, who always helps others without ever expecting any reward. In addition, one can enjoy happiness and peace through what they have done, which is the best return. Personally, I prefer the latter opinion. It is imperative for us to be ready to help those in trouble. If all of us can help each other, our society will be more civilized and harmonious. It should be universally acknowledged that we do good deeds for enjoyment, self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement, not for the rewards. 点评:内容切题，很好的完成规定的任务;篇章结构符合写作 提纲要求，框架合理，主题突出;连接词使用恰当，文章连贯， 2 逻辑严密;遣词造句正确得体，句式丰富多样，体现良好的语言功底。但文中有个小错误:in some sense应该为in a/ one sense(从某种意义上说);另外，稳重两次使用in addition， 最好换一个同义的连接词，表示递进关系连接词很多，如Moreover, Besides, What’s more等。 短文第一段:引出主题，指出不同的人对此有不同的观点，陈述有些人的观点——做好事应该得到回报;引用俗语“不劳无获”;使用连接词in addition， 正确得体使用hold, argue, maintain和believe四个表达观点的动词。 短文第二段:While 承上启下，非常自然的过渡到相反的观点——另一些人坚持说我们应以雷锋为榜样，做好是不图回报;两次使用非限制性定语从句，两次使用被动语态，句式灵活多变;使用多个较高级的词汇时表达更严谨(in a sense)、更贴切(be based on people’s individual consciousness of responsibility);使用and hence 表明因果关系，自然过渡，语义连贯。 短文第三段:Personally 自然引出作者个人的观点——希望人人互助友爱，让社会更文明、更和谐;使用抽象名词(enjoyment，self-fulfillment and spiritual enhancement),使表达更贴切、更有深度，同时也运用了修辞中的韵尾手段。 Sample 2(57分作文) Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? Different people hold different views about whether one should expect a 3 reward when doing a good deed. Some think that people should be given a certain reward for their good deeds, which can encourage people to go on doing good deeds. While others believe that we should learn from Leifeng, who always any reward. They helped others but not expecting (never expected) assume that doing a good deed is everyone’s responsibility and should not be related to any reward. In addition, one can feel (get) happiness and peace through they did (what they have done), which is the best return. Personally, I prefer the latter opinion. I think it is necessary for us not to expect any reward when doing good deeds. For one thing, the government should make laws and regulations to encourage people to do good deeds. For another, people should know that we do good deeds is very meaningful to them. People should know that we do good deeds not for the rewards, but for our spirit satisfaction. 点评:本文内容切题，较好的完成规定任务;篇章结构符合写作 提纲的要求，框架合理，主题突出;连接词使用恰当，文章连贯，逻 辑严密;句式丰富多样，语言功底不错，但是有些句子虽然语法正确， 表达却不地道、不得体，文中有少量语言错误，注意划线部分及括号 内的正确表达。 短文第一段:引出主题，指出不同的人对此有不同的观点，陈述 有些人的观点——做好事应该得到回报;正确使用带宾语从句和状语 从句的复合句;正确使用非限制性定语从句。 4 短文第二段:While承上启下，非常自然的过渡到相反的观点— —另一些人坚持说我们应以雷锋为榜样，做好是不图回报;两次使用 非限制性定语从句、宾语从句，句式灵活;使用in addition 连接词， 过渡自然，语义连贯;但是本段有三处错误。 短文第三段:Personally 自然引出个人观点——赞成人们做好事 不图回报，提出鼓励人人行善的建议。 Sample 3(45分作文) Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? A lot of people think that people should get a reward when doing a good deed, but other people do not agree this opinion. Because(, because)they believe one should not expect a reward for doing a good deed. Many people think one has the right to expect a reward for doing a good deed. That is what they should get, however(. However)，other people think that we should like (learn from) Leifeng not expect(never expecting) a reward when helped (helping)others. Because(, because) this is our responsibility. If we want to get a reward, then poor people can not get help. You also (What’s more, you ) can not feel helping other’s happiness(get the nice feeling of helping others.) In my opinion, I agree the later(latter)idea. I think it is wrong to expect a reward when doing a good deed. Everyone may meet trouble some day, so we can not (shouldn’t) only think (think about ) money, then 5 when we meet trouble, nobody helps us( otherwise nobody will help us when we meet trouble). Therefore, we must understand (that) doing good do (does) good for both others and ourselves. deed (deeds) 点评:本文内容基本切题，在一定程度上完成规定的任务;篇章 结构虽然按照三段论格式，但是段落内容有点偏离写作提纲的要求， 主题不够突出;有些地方思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误较 多，其中有一些事严重的错误，请注意文中划线部分级括号内的正确 表达。 短文第一段:指出不同的人对“行善是否该图回报”有不同的观 点，陈述双方的观点;能够使用带宾语从句和状语从句的复合句，但 有一处错误。 短文第二段:展开论述双方的观点，但基本内容与第一段重复， 作者若能按照提纲展开，那么本文的条理会更清楚，主题会更突出; 作者试图使用关联词，以便使文章连贯，但是连续出错，说明语言基 本功不扎实。 短文第三段:In my opinion引出作者个人的观点:赞成人们做好 事不图回报，并通过说理加以论证;但是语言错误较多，其中两处严 重的语法错误只是读者不清楚该句子的真正的意思。 Sample 4(39分作文) Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? A lot of people think that people should expect a reward when doing a good deed, others people think people should not expect it. Of course, I 6 choose the secend idea. For example, Leifeng is a ordinary soldier, he has done may good ask reward, that is what we should learn. If deeds, but he never do not everyone want to get a reward, then poor people can not get help. You also can not fell happiness of helping others. In my opinion, people must learn Leifeng’s spirit. At any time this is very important. If we have not this Leifeng spirit, we can not develop rapidly and well. 点评:本文内容基本切题，没能完整的弯成提纲规定的任务;篇 章结构虽然按照三段论格式，但是框架不清晰，段落内容也比较混乱， 主体不突出;句式过于简单、单调，不断重复使用某些词汇和句型， 而且多处用词不当;文中有许多严重的语法错误，只是表达思想不清 楚，逻辑性和连贯性都很差;整篇文章只有109词，词数不达标，按 照扣分细则规定，该扣7分。 7